Rolling Teenpop 2007 Thread

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Well, "With Love" sounds great, as expected. This album has potential to be the next Come and Get It, though it's obviously extremely premature to expect it to be that good.

Greg Fanoe (JustFanoe), Friday, 19 January 2007 02:04 (seventeen years ago) link

And according to tommy2.net, the new Aly & AJ album has been pushed back to June (originally to be released in April). I'm still crossing my fingers for this one, but I clearly expect it to be great.

Greg Fanoe (JustFanoe), Friday, 19 January 2007 02:06 (seventeen years ago) link

I'm in a historical teen pop mood today.

When I was in like 9th grade-ish, the two songs that were absolutely massive in my school, apart from the obv. Savage Garden, Spice Girls, etc. were "Barbie Girl" (by Aqua) and "Tubthumping" (by Chumbawamba). In the bus on the way to school, my friends and I would memorize the words to "Tubthumping" and sing it on the way there. I'm sure the driver was thrilled. Both still sound great to me today. Never heard another Chumbawamba song, though I'm kinda curious if they are any good. Aqua, I know, released a great followup single called "Lollipop (Candyman)", which I've seen Frank talk up and which my friends and I also loved. Anybody heard any other Chumbawama or Aqua know if they are any good?

Admittedly, I dunno if this is teenpop, but Frank on one of the Pazz & Jop Poptimist polls posted a link to Jimmy Ray's "Are You Jimmy Ray?", which I literally cannot stop listening to. Just wanted to post it here in case any of you missed it there and don't know it. The song almost defies description, but is great.

Greg Fanoe (JustFanoe), Friday, 19 January 2007 02:18 (seventeen years ago) link

Chumbawamba wasn't really teenpop -- Tubthumping was really an aberration. The next album was called ReadyMades (a reference to the art movement) and its best song was a single about the drowned Russian sailors. It was called Joseph's Ladder. I really liked it.

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Friday, 19 January 2007 02:50 (seventeen years ago) link

It's too bad if TRL goes down, since it was one of the few teen power bases to challenge Disney and to at keep teenpop somewhat older. Don't know who else would be likely to play a new Ashlee or Hilary. My guess is that with downloading and all, kids just don't think a countdown show is essential. (But didn't MTV once in its past abandon its countdown show - known as Dial MTV - and then later brought countdowns back, hence TRL.)

Xhuxk, you have to understand that the British charts now are terrible, so Amy comes on like a fresh breath of deliberately stale air. So far I find her singing way too mannered - and not mannered as "classy," but mannered as in she's trying to slur like Dorothy Parker. (Which may be exactly how she talks, but it still comes across as mannered.) But her Sade groove is, at least, a groove, in contrast with so many clompy British rock bands keeping it real by keeping it clompy. (Maybe one reason the Arctic Monkeys did so well is that they came on as good ole clompin' blokes but actually propelled the rhythm.)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Friday, 19 January 2007 07:38 (seventeen years ago) link

Lex, there was some JoJo talk on last year's thread, if you want to do a search. (I liked, Jeff didn't.) This doesn't mean we can't talk more about her this year.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Friday, 19 January 2007 07:39 (seventeen years ago) link

The odd thing about "Are You Jimmy Ray?" is that it didn't particularly resemble any current genre of the time: wasn't techno or house, wasn't dancepop, wasn't hip-hop (though it kinda had talking), wasn't metal or grunge or rock, wasn't even '50s throwback, despite his hair. I suppose you could call it a quasi-rap to a Tommy Roe rhythm. I don't know. How would you guys categorize it?

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Friday, 19 January 2007 07:46 (seventeen years ago) link

Greg: The first Aqua album (Aquarium) is uneven but still great, second one (Aquarius) mediocre (was going less for Europop and more for Britney pop, which would have been OK but the songs just weren't there). Another great track on the first album is "Roses Are Red." You should also check out the first Toy-Box album, Fantastic, which is very much like Aqua; not as good, but enjoyable nonetheless.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Friday, 19 January 2007 08:03 (seventeen years ago) link

"...mannered as in she's trying to slur like Dorothy Parker."

You say this as though it were a bad thing! This line alone sold me the album. I'm grabbing a copy to listen to the first chance I get. Frank, I'm actually curious where you've heard Parker read -- I found a bunch of mp3s of her, but I'm always in the hunt for more. I love her voice. It sounds drenched in scotch and Lucky Strikes.

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Friday, 19 January 2007 09:31 (seventeen years ago) link

i've never heard dorothy parker's voice! i want to!

lex pretend (lex pretend), Friday, 19 January 2007 09:45 (seventeen years ago) link

'Tubthumping' is about Old Labour's demise in the face of Nu Labour. True Story.

I liked the first Aqua album a lot- my little brother had a copy on tape and it used to get quite a lot of play in my mum's car on the way to/from school. There's a great song on there about a sort of fairytale princess who's generally making a mess of things.

I'm going to look up Toy Box now.

My hangover made me deeply confused as to what was going on with that Hilary Duff advert. Doesn't quite sound like there's a 'Come And Get It' in the air, to me but it does all sound rather promising, certainly.

Hazel Robinson (Moggy), Friday, 19 January 2007 12:56 (seventeen years ago) link

By the way, the top two new entries onto the Billboard's Hot 100 this week are Jordan Pruitt's "Jump To The Rhythm" (at #69) and Ashley Tisdale's "He Said, She Said" (at #77). So which are they pushing as Ashley's single, this one or "Be Good To Me"?

Greg Fanoe (JustFanoe), Friday, 19 January 2007 14:18 (seventeen years ago) link

My memory of 'Are You Jimmy Ray' was that it came out of nowhere, seemed to be total genius, and sounded like nothing else around at the time. Still not sure I could categorize it! I guess comparing the charts then (1997/1998) and now, it feels like there were some top pop hitmakers making money out of pop, and willing to try anything which seemed it had legs. Where as now, no-one's making enough money to take a chance. I didn't realise this was a Simon Fuller production until I googled it looking for the date, but that totally makes sense, as I guess the nearest thing I can think of to compare it to are some of the 1 hit wonders that Stock Aitken and Waterman put out (The Reynolds Girls etc.) when they were running things in the UK charts.

Chumbawumba were horrible greasy agit-punks, e.g. they did an album called 'Pictures of Starving Children Sell Records', who occasionally did some rather sweet pop things -- I'm still fond of a song called 'Someone's Always Telling You How to Behave' which sounds a bit like Dubstar, or a more electronic Frazier Chorus.

alext (alext), Friday, 19 January 2007 15:32 (seventeen years ago) link

Lex, if you want, I'll send you an mp3 or two to your email address. Any interest?

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Friday, 19 January 2007 16:32 (seventeen years ago) link

that would be lovely! alex dot macpherson at gmail dot com please.

i fucking hated chumbawamba. dreadful.

lex pretend (lex pretend), Friday, 19 January 2007 17:01 (seventeen years ago) link

The Brie updates keep a-comin'...

i have been recording the new record.

THERE! it was said. laugh you fools! curse you and your fists that shake and slam down on the table to disrupt my can of iced tea that sits on the table. i shant cower I say! i will rue the day! i might be your criminal. but at least im the one who calls you to remind you of the fact that everyone is jealous of you. if those calls mean nothing, dare i say, i will gladly withdraw and bend my head down as i count to three for the machete to come swopping over his head and slice into mine.

im scared of my brain.

nameom (nameom), Friday, 19 January 2007 23:15 (seventeen years ago) link

Actually, it was Jennifer Jason Leigh in Mrs. Parker And The Vicious Circle (which I quite enjoyed).

I have yet to give Ms. Winehouse my full attention, knowing only two of her songs*. So far I like reading Moggy's description of her voice more than actually listening to the voice.

*Not counting her duet with Charlotte Church on "Beat It," which is a massive train wreck.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Saturday, 20 January 2007 01:20 (seventeen years ago) link

Frank, this is part of why I like Camp.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Saturday, 20 January 2007 01:39 (seventeen years ago) link

Tim, I like the way Tiffany Taylor (whoever she is) doesn't try to overpower "Here's Where I Stand," which automatically makes it better than 80% of the secularized gospel big-chorus numbers I've heard, and makes me want to listen to her some more; but still, the song itself is just another secularized gospel big-chorus number, and I don't see what's special about it. (This is after one listen, and maybe seeing it in context - which I'm guessing is a "Breaking Free" kind of revelation and release and consummation - I'd like it more, but I can't imagine it bringing a "Breaking Free" type catharsis. "Breaking Free" is such a better song.)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Saturday, 20 January 2007 19:15 (seventeen years ago) link

(Though I still cringe involuntarily when they sing "different than who we are." Why couldn't they have used "from"? It scans just as well.)

(Any Brits here want to make the case for "to"?)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Saturday, 20 January 2007 19:19 (seventeen years ago) link

Hilary Duff news, album is due in April, all songs co-written with Kara DioGuardi and dancey as previously reported.

Co-written with DioGuardi and whom else? So far Kara's always had someone helping with the music. (Maybe Hilary's helping with the music!) Thing is, Kara, appealing and ubiquitous as she is, has had almost all of her great moments with John Shanks on board. Great exceptions that jump to mind would be Kylie's "Spinning Around" (written with Paula Abdul and a couple more people), Kelly Clarkson's "Hear Me" (with Clif Magness, who seemed the key player on that one), Paris Hilton's "Jealousy" (w/ Scott Storch!), and Paris Hilton's "Not Leaving Without You" (w/ Greg Wells). In general, her work with Wells, while producing some good stuff (Lindsay's "Confessions of a Broken Heart" and "Who Loves You," for instance) isn't as good as the songs with Shanks (Lindsay's "First" and "Nobody 'Til You"). And of course, Kara's supreme moments with Hilary - "Come Clean" and "Fly," two of teenpop's supreme moments - are with Shanks producing and co-writing. Her own band, Platinum Weird*, has four songs with Shanks in on the writing credits, and those are four of the six tracks that are OK or better.

Don't know if "dance" is her strength (isn't Shanks's strength, either); I don't really think Kara's done a lot in that direction, other than her four with Paris (the other two are "Screwed" (w/ Wells) and "I Want You" (w/ Rotem, Gibb, and Bogart)). Mike Spencer was the producer on "Spinning Around." If you want to count Gwen Stefani's "Rich Girl" as dance - and why shouldn't you? - she's one of the cast of thousands in the writing credits, but I don't think she had a lot to do with the overall sound on that one. Her writing for Celine Dion has been OK but not amazing. (Um, there's been some good stuff with Anastasia too; don't remember how dancey it is.)

*On the regular Platinum Weird album, that is, not on the pseudo-throwback album w/ "Erin Grace," which I haven't heard.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Saturday, 20 January 2007 20:46 (seventeen years ago) link

Straight from the source:

Hilary has been co-writing every song with Kara Dioguardi ( Gwen Stefani, Pussycat Dolls , Kelly Clarkson...) so each song is very personal to her. She has been working with some excitng producers and mixers such as Richard "Humpty" Vission (The Killers, Sting, Usher), Tim and Bob (Madonna, Destiny's Child, Will Smith) and 4 time Grammy winner, Manny Marroquin (John Mayer, Alicia Keys, kanye West.

No idea where the production input is coming from yet ("Play with Fire" is Vission, I think?). But my impression so far is that the writing credits are all Duff/DioGuardi...has a nice ring to it, too. DuffGuardi...

nameom (nameom), Saturday, 20 January 2007 20:56 (seventeen years ago) link

Hey, Wikipedia to the rescue (sort of):

"With Love" goes for official ads to mainstream radio February 6th 2007. With Love was recently released to Radio Disney on the week of January 15 sometime.

According to Wiki, the forthcoming album is called Confessions of Love. And the RD bit is accurate, "With Love" was surreptitiously slipped into voting eligibility some time in the last week or two. ("Play with Fire" was never made eligible through voting or otherwise.)

nameom (nameom), Saturday, 20 January 2007 21:06 (seventeen years ago) link

For DioGuardi/dance, the Paris album definitely seems like a watershed moment...it suggests that (writing-wise) she's finally gotten over what could be a hurdle earlier in her teenpop career before she kind of defined her "sound" with Shanks (e.g. her one sorta mediocre contribution to the Eden's Crush album, "Two Way," produced by Dow Brain/ Brian Young -- I think they were responsible for a bunch of Leslie Carter's unreleased album and LFO/"Summer Girls").

So maybe the post-Paris DioGuardi gets dance? And Hilary Duff has an edge of being ultra-adaptable -- she's got a kind of charming anonymity that I think might fit this kind of music nicely (and I like what I've heard so far). The fact that her voice fits songs like "Fly" and "Come Clean" so well actually seems a little counter-intuitive to me, and maybe effective in part because you're not expecting to be moved by a performer who's most striking trait is, arguably, being such an excellent chameleon.

nameom (nameom), Saturday, 20 January 2007 21:31 (seventeen years ago) link

I see their last album got its own thread, but I'd rather talk about the new Fallout Boy in the context of Teenpop anyway. So if there are no dissenting opinions...

They've got a very strong Chicago punk sound (The Academy Is..., Plain White T's) which makes their TRL status (or whatever status now that TRL is gone) more a coincidence. Or a broad appeal. Except that there is something very teenpop about their sound - the rushed delivery of super-articulate lyrics, the pop hooks. They remind of a highschooler I know who is quite intelligent, and very precocious, but comes off as a little precious because of it. There's something similar with Fallout Boy. Plus, they've got the word 'Boy' in their name. ;) Anyway, obviously this isn't traditional teenpop, though are they that far off from Meg&Dia, Avril (new album coming out!), or Duff?

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 03:32 (seventeen years ago) link

Jimmy Ray's "Are You Jimmy Ray" sounded like "Faith" by George Michael, duh! (Same Bo Diddley rhythm, even.) (Which is not a bad thing; I liked it then and still do.)

xhuxk (xheddy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 06:57 (seventeen years ago) link

Me on Chumbawamba and assorted other 2000 teenpop acts:

http://www.villagevoice.com/music/0037,eddy,18135,22.html

(I'd reviewed Tubthumping in the Voice a couple years earlier, but I can't find it in the web archives.)

xhuxk (xheddy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 07:01 (seventeen years ago) link

(Or rather I'd reviewed the album with "Tubthumbing" on it, whatever it was called. It was better than any Mekons album after, like, 1986. Also way better than anything by the Redskins I ever heard.)

xhuxk (xheddy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 07:14 (seventeen years ago) link

To me, Fall Out Boy are utterly glorious as teenpop (especcially on that remix of 'Dance, Dance') by basically ticking all the boxes of a) ridiculous videos, b) danceable pop tunes, c) damn good singer (this really is true- his voice is quite unusual in a way but it's also definitely ace) and d) half-confessional, really quite funny lyrics.

They stand out from a lot of the rest of emo by actually being quite funny (MCR, for instance, take themselves more seriously than it's possible to believe) and also being a lot more normal-looking than most bands (MCR again) and, well, they got Babyface to produce their most recent album on the basis Pete Wentz (bassist/lyricist) liked the Josie and the Pussycats soundtrack. The new album is very ace, on that note- it's extremely pop with lots of clapping and sing-a-long moments etc. and as one of my friends pointed out, the single sounds like *NSync.

I mean, to me, the difference between them and Aly and AJ is that Fall Out Boy sound slightly more pop (Aly and AJ have some metallic moments, imo) and neither A nor A has ever got her cock out on the internet.

Hazel Robinson (Moggy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 12:39 (seventeen years ago) link

"Another Dumb Blonde," which could've used some of these 10cc analog doodles and Cher cyborg effects

But I thought "Another Dumb Blonde" is THEE Cher cyborg effect Hoku song? Idolator even said so.

It's a teasing slice of kiss-off pop, and its smart-chick spirit isn't even marred by the vocoder drops that plagued so much of Billboard's Hot 100 during the post-"Believe" era.

Thing with that M2M line, "may not have the blonde hair you like," is that at the time Marit was the (smart) blonde! So the question is whether or not Marion sings that line. Actually, I think they BOTH sing it. (Although their wording kind of ruins my argument, because Marit could very well have blond hair without having the blond hair "that you like.")

And of course by the time Ashlee comes along, she needs to HIDE her (naturally) blond hair for fear of being tagged "light n' frivolous" (Stephen Thomas Erlewine called I Am Me "going goth by going blonde," except he follows that up with a totally dumb (not blonde) line like "no matter how hard Simpson tries, no matter how foreboding the surface, beneath it all she's still light and frivolous.") I can't figure out whether or not Marit is naturally light- or dark-haired, but if it's the former that's another example of blonde self-hatred.

nameom (nameom), Sunday, 21 January 2007 17:22 (seventeen years ago) link

Here's the actual video for "Girl in Your Dreams." Marit sings that line too, but she's kind of hanging out to the side.

nameom (nameom), Sunday, 21 January 2007 17:31 (seventeen years ago) link

I would like to put in a plug here for my single of the year so far, "Stewy" by D.B.'z featuring E-40 (not to mention some apparent little kids going koo-koo bananas and saying so), which is on my album of the year so far, the Hyphy Hitz compilation on TVT.
(It's apparently about the baby who wants to take over the world on "Family Guy," a cartoon my kids like but I really can't stand.)

Anyway, the song can be streamed here, apparently (though I'm not positive that E-40 is on this version, since I haven't listened):

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=43383393

xhuxk (xheddy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 20:40 (seventeen years ago) link

Re: Amy Winehouse... I just listened to 'You Know I'm No Good,' and her voice is... a lot like Joanna Newson! It's remarkable, they both do that uptick in their voices, where their voice slightly cracks and whines. Is this just me? Cause it's really weird.

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 21:40 (seventeen years ago) link

Does this count as an "approved rock person"?

Ashlee Wants Robert Smith from the Cure

When she returns to recording pop, Ashlee says she want the Cure's Robert Smith to help with her comeback. After he came to her last performance as Roxie Hart in 'Chicago', she says,"Robert Smith from the Cure came to my last show in London, and I don't know if I was more excited about him or that it was the last show! "To work with Robert Smith would be an honour."

nameom (nameom), Sunday, 21 January 2007 22:39 (seventeen years ago) link

Sounds pretty good, and exciting, to me. I'm not sure I understand what Robert Smith would be helping with, but if he gives Ashlee some more sophistication with her lyrics, and some insight in her music, I'd be very interested to hear that. Of course, I'm sure some people would rather Ashlee figure that kind of stuff out on her own.

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Sunday, 21 January 2007 23:33 (seventeen years ago) link

"Dancing Alone" sounded quite a bit like The Cure circa "Inbetween Days" I thought.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Sunday, 21 January 2007 23:46 (seventeen years ago) link

Rolling RD 1-22-07: Top 30 - Ashley does the Hollywood shuffle, up to 14 from her 30 entry and expected at #1 in two weeks or so. The cast of Jump In and assorted dorks (like T-SQUAD) enter the charts. No sign of prude-rap king Lil' Josh, whose single was kicked by a small margin a couple weeks ago (wait is he on the soundtrack?). Most interesting news is from the Mailbag, where an Everlife cover of a Veronicas song ("I Could Get Used to This") was PICKED 78%. Apparently this is Everlife V's cover 1 of 2, the other being for a song called "Faded" which I've never heard (apparently a single for an Australian Idol, Kate DeAraugo).

nameom (nameom), Monday, 22 January 2007 13:51 (seventeen years ago) link

Kate's "Faded" isn't very good at all, although I'm not sure how much of that is the song and how much is Kate and her handlers/producers. Or maybe it's that Veronicas songs don't work without the harmonies.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Monday, 22 January 2007 14:01 (seventeen years ago) link

if he gives Ashlee some more sophistication with her lyrics

Seems to me that it'd be Ashlee who could give him sophistication in his lyrics (though honestly I don't know many Cure lyrics, but what in the world is unsophisticated about Ashlee's "Say Goodbye," for instance)?

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Monday, 22 January 2007 18:37 (seventeen years ago) link

Marion wrote "Girl In Your Dreams" all by her lonesome, at age 14 or so, and it seems at least as smart as anything she's written since.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Monday, 22 January 2007 18:40 (seventeen years ago) link

Something new to investigate:

http://www.myspace.com/katenashmusic

Being hyped as the next Lily Allen. Teen enough for this thread, if perhaps not pop enough. Interesting though.

zebedee (zebedee), Monday, 22 January 2007 19:46 (seventeen years ago) link

Meanwhile, I'd like to get a more modest hype machine started on Alexa Melo, youngest contestant (possibly winner, I forget) on America's Most Talented Kids Diva show. I'm not sure exactly what that is.

Her song "Shake Your Pants" ("All my girls grab a boy and take him by the hand/ drag him to the dancefloor and make him shake his pants!") was written by none other than Drew Seeley. Shades of P!nk-to-be (or Fergie-to-be?) in "Girlfriend"...which made me finally check out Stacy Fergie Ferguson on Kids Inc.. Hadn't seen it since the show was actually on the air.

There's also some strange feature on her page where a buncha fans call in, say hello, and occasionally submit demos by phone.

nameom (nameom), Monday, 22 January 2007 22:33 (seventeen years ago) link

Well - I was ineloquent (as usual). I don't mean sophistication so much. I mean that a song like Say Goodbye, as great as it is, uses fairly simple words and meanings to convey a slightly more complex meaning. It does that really well. But I imagine that with a broader sense of articulation -- with a larger vocabulary (damn, I wanted to avoid saying that, but I feel that's true) -- she'd be able to express herself far more insightfully. With many more layers of things occurring. Obviously, music doesn't have to be dense to be good (and plenty of dense music isn't good), but with Ashlee I'd like to see it, at least as an experiment.

"Oh i miss the kiss of treachery the aching kiss
Before i feed the stench of a love for a younger
Meat and the sound that it makes when it cuts
In deep the holding up on bended knees the
Addiction of duplicities as bit by bit it starts
The need to just let go my party piece"

Obviously that won't do it for everyone. But hard verbs and nouns - solid words - do it for me far more than vaguer lyrics where your pointing at something, but lack the words for it. "Maybe you don't
Love me / Like I love you baby / Cause the broken in you doesn't make me run / There is beauty / In the dark side." Even as I write this, I'm not sure there's anything objectively better about the Cure song than the Ashlee song. Obviously a Springsteen song where everything is so specific - that's the height for me. And I feel like the Cure is somewhere in between. Like; let's get some synonyms for love, or at least an explanation of what makes this love more special than any other love.

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 06:05 (seventeen years ago) link

I'd think Smith would be the personification of an ARP. But please: don't let him sing or write any songs for her--a few chorused doleful strums, okay.

Grey, Ian (IanBrooklyn), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 06:09 (seventeen years ago) link

More likely though, if Smith did help Ashlee with lyrics, they'd end up like "Love Song" - i.e. no more specific.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 07:34 (seventeen years ago) link

Lily Allen requests:
EDIT , Can everyone please stop calling Kate Nash the new Lily Allen , Kate is a very talented songwriter and her music sounds nothing like mine , she exists i her own right and it must be really annoying for her to be compared to me the whole time ! thank you .

(I don't think this is aimed at people like Jeff, who isn't comparing Kate to Lily but just mentioning that others are doing so.)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 07:45 (seventeen years ago) link

There are all sorts of good lyrics; abstract, specific, nonsensical. Strong images are fine when they do something. (NY Dolls: "I'll show you more busted glass than any girl ever seen.") Seems to me that the Ashlee* sentence in "Say Goodbye" has no imagery (or two images - "broken" and "run") and lots of ideas, whereas the Cure lyric has lots of images but no ideas. (Or hackneyed ideas: "kiss of treachery"; yeah, been there, done that. And it aches. So...?) But an explication of the Cure lyric might turn it around for me, since I won't claim I come close to getting it, even in the context of the whole song.

The Ashlee line ("Maybe you don't love me/Like I love you, baby/'Cause the broken in you doesn't make me run") tells as complex a story as any stand-alone line I've ever come across, from anyone, song lyric, novel, play, poem, aphorism. Shakespeare, Austen, Berry. And generous and sad, the story. You don't need the rest of the song, even. You get everything: the situation, her attitude towards it, her feelings. On last year's thread Tim illuminated those lyrics better than I could possibly do, so I'll just paste in what he wrote.

"Maybe/you don't/love me/like I/love you/baby/'cos the broken in you doesn't make me run"

Something about that line is so ace, maybe it's that it drags out the simple first part so much, then all the meaning is actually so tightly compressed in the second half.

Then he elaborated a couple of weeks later:

Thinking of that line in "Say Goodbye", I think one of the things that makes it work so well is that, yeah, at first glance it sounds pretty straightforward, but actually it's almost encoded. A straightforward line would be something like: "You can't handle me 'cos I'm complicated" or "You only like me when I make you look good." But instead she says:

"Maybe you don't love me like I love you, baby, cos the broken in you doesn't make me run. There is beauty in the darkness. I'm not frightened - without it I could never feel the sun."

It's a lot less judgmental and, I guess, more reflective, this way: like she's just coming to understand the difference in the way that she and her (soon to be?) ex approach questions of love and relationships. And she's not sure which is right or wrong (if right and wrong there is) but she's not sorry for being the way she is. And then on another level she's telling him that it's okay to be damaged.

And then, in response to something Don said:

I think Ashlee is saying "we're both broken (damaged, not heartbroken), but you want someone unbroken (maybe because you can't handle your own brokenness). Whereas because I know that I'm broken I'm willing to accept that dealing with your brokenness is the only way I could make this arrangement work. You disagree, so this relationship isn't gonna work."

Wrapped up in this is the belief that the notion of a "fairweather friend" being a bad thing holds doubly true for relationships: that it's only by understanding someone in all their complexity and difficulty (rather than some seemingly unblemished pedestal perfection) that you can make love really meaningful.

I think Tim's on the money, and that Ashlee* does all this in 19 clear words, not quite conversational ("the broken in you doesn't make me run" would be a little odd in casual speech), but straightforward, not dressed in poetry.

I am a bit puzzled how such a simply worded line pulled off so much. I ruminated a bit about this last year (linked here, if you want to ruminate with me).

(*or Ashlee-Kara, or Ashlee-Kara-John)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 09:08 (seventeen years ago) link

The themes of "Say Goodbye" are in the first two tracks on the Platinum Weird album, but Kara does nothing interesting with them:

When the rain comes tumbling, tumbling down, will you be around?

Nicely sounded "tumblings," but the idea is clichéd.

Then you'll see my greatest gift
Is fallin' down and takin' it
'Cause everything is better when it hurts
My biggest thirst
Is happiness in all kinds of weather
For worse or for better
I have it anyway
But happiness can't last forever
You know there's never pleasure without the pain
Here it comes again

Now this doesn't pull together into any stories, and I'm not feeling its pleasure or pain. Given that Kara's a veteran songsmith, and Ashlee a youngster, one would have expected that Ashlee provided raw ideas, and Kara provided the craft and wisdom that turned them into art. But maybe Ashlee provided a whole hunk of the craft and wisdom as well, with Kara providing some of the ideas, or drawing them forth from Ashlee.

Really, there are some bad lines - way worse than these - on the Platinum Weird album.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 10:10 (seventeen years ago) link

I think "Come Clean" does the rain motif so much more successfully.

Mordechai Shinefield (Mordy), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 19:03 (seventeen years ago) link

Agree.

Think it's better because in "Come Clean" Kara isn't using "rain" as a simple stand-in for "adversity," which is such a dead metaphor. Instead, rain buffets and cleanses. But actually, my listening to "Come Clean" is now enriched by knowing those Platinum Weird songs, since "adversity" adds something as subtext. E.g.,

Let the rain fall down and wake my dreams
Let it wash away my sanity
'Cause I wanna feel the thunder, I wanna scream
Let the rain fall down, I'm coming clean.

Imagine that the real first line is accompanied by a silent, alternate one:

Let the PAIN come down and wake my dreams

- which might even be what Kara had in mind.

(By the way, I think of Kara as the prime lyricist here, while she and John Shanks combine on the music; but I have no idea if that's true; in Lucy Woodward's account of working with Shanks and with Shelly Pelkin [Dave linked this on last year's thread], everyone seems to be throwing in ideas about everything.)

In general, it wouldn't be a bad idea for most songwriters to stop using weather imagery.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Tuesday, 23 January 2007 20:37 (seventeen years ago) link


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