best "rock" (or whatever) couplet ever

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so many amazing lines in that song. I think my favorite couplet is the last one:

It's Christmas in prison, there'll be music tonight.
I'll prob'ly get homesick. I love you. Goodnight.

Lily Dale, Thursday, 21 December 2023 18:51 (four months ago) link

yeah beautiful. he can deploy a word rhyming with itself like no other (not being sarcastic).

i also deeply love the image of

The search light in the big yard swings round with the gun
And spotlights the snowflakes like the dust in the sun

and the chess game... they're all great

Lavator Shemmelpennick, Thursday, 21 December 2023 19:00 (four months ago) link

The searchlight might be my favorite image in any song. just so instantly evocative and so beautiful.

Lily Dale, Thursday, 21 December 2023 19:04 (four months ago) link

one month passes...

And if you survive 'til 2005, i hope you're exceedingly thin
For if you are stout you will have to breathe out while the people around you breathe in

Deflatormouse, Tuesday, 30 January 2024 20:50 (three months ago) link

Many things on my mind
Words in the way

clemenza, Monday, 12 February 2024 16:14 (three months ago) link

and that ain't no joke
you can disappear in smoke

reggie (qualmsley), Sunday, 18 February 2024 16:14 (two months ago) link

three weeks pass...

it's like we're at a Ponzi scam-inar:
-there's no escaping without a door prize
-they're operating at significant loss

reggie (qualmsley), Wednesday, 13 March 2024 18:58 (two months ago) link

three weeks pass...

Oh, I never should have said the books that you read
Were all I loved you for

rendered nugatory (morrisp), Tuesday, 9 April 2024 04:17 (one month ago) link

I can dance like Sherlock Holmes
I can sing like Sherlock Holmes
But I can't be Sherlock Holmes

Halfway there but for you, Thursday, 18 April 2024 16:33 (three weeks ago) link

he took a ride on the new highway
a culvert down to the ducks and drakes

reggie (qualmsley), Thursday, 18 April 2024 20:51 (three weeks ago) link

In the fragrance sweet of the evening air
I could leave this world quite without a care

he/him hoo-hah (map), Thursday, 18 April 2024 21:00 (three weeks ago) link

two weeks pass...

he'll wrap you up in his arms, tell you that you've been a good boy
he'll rekindle all the dreams it took you a lifetime to destroy

reggie (qualmsley), Friday, 3 May 2024 20:26 (one week ago) link

If I had a nickel, if I had a dime
I'd put it in the toilet and I'd shit all the time

I've left the box of soup near your shoes (Tom D.), Friday, 3 May 2024 21:02 (one week ago) link

I’ve been around the world and I didn’t pay my dues
Yeah we knocked ‘em dead in Dallas (they didn’t know we were Jews)

And when you finish doing that
Bring in the dog and put out the cat

not the one who's tryin' to dub your anime (Doctor Casino), Saturday, 4 May 2024 01:19 (one week ago) link

in the hanging garden change the past
in a hanging garden wearing furs and masks

reggie (qualmsley), Friday, 10 May 2024 21:12 (five days ago) link

telling this hasn't been mentioned

i'm stronger than you think

reggie (qualmsley), Friday, 10 May 2024 21:21 (five days ago) link

Oh, my peer, your veneer
Is wearing thin and cracking
The surface informs underneath
Underneath is lacking

reggie (qualmsley), Friday, 10 May 2024 21:21 (five days ago) link

i'm talking here to me alone

reggie (qualmsley), Friday, 10 May 2024 21:25 (five days ago) link

your finest hour

take your instinct by the reins

better best, rearrange

what we want, and what we need

has been confused, been confused

reggie (qualmsley), Friday, 10 May 2024 21:27 (five days ago) link


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