best "rock" (or whatever) couplet ever

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Once built a steamboat in a meadow
Because I'd forgotten how to sail.

I would prefer not to. (Chinaski), Thursday, 14 December 2023 20:01 (four months ago) link

the stockings are hung, but who cares
preserved for those no longer there

Formica Jordan (Neanderthal), Thursday, 14 December 2023 20:05 (four months ago) link

Still there's a light I hold before me
You're the measure of my dreams

immodesty blaise (jimbeaux), Thursday, 14 December 2023 20:13 (four months ago) link

he is the king of children
singing like a boiler, 'tomorrow is on its way'

tremolo, Friday, 15 December 2023 09:50 (four months ago) link

Maybe I should just change my style
But I feel alright when you smile

dan selzer, Friday, 15 December 2023 14:36 (four months ago) link

Counting the cost in money only
Strikes me as funny don’t you know

Mule, Tuesday, 19 December 2023 12:56 (four months ago) link

Holidays and salad days
And days of moldy mayonnaise

Halfway there but for you, Tuesday, 19 December 2023 15:04 (four months ago) link

(A bit of a cheat)

And in the end
The love you take
Is equal to the love you make

immodesty blaise (jimbeaux), Tuesday, 19 December 2023 15:08 (four months ago) link

wait awhile eternity
old mother nature's got nothin on me

Lavator Shemmelpennick, Thursday, 21 December 2023 18:43 (four months ago) link

so many amazing lines in that song. I think my favorite couplet is the last one:

It's Christmas in prison, there'll be music tonight.
I'll prob'ly get homesick. I love you. Goodnight.

Lily Dale, Thursday, 21 December 2023 18:51 (four months ago) link

yeah beautiful. he can deploy a word rhyming with itself like no other (not being sarcastic).

i also deeply love the image of

The search light in the big yard swings round with the gun
And spotlights the snowflakes like the dust in the sun

and the chess game... they're all great

Lavator Shemmelpennick, Thursday, 21 December 2023 19:00 (four months ago) link

The searchlight might be my favorite image in any song. just so instantly evocative and so beautiful.

Lily Dale, Thursday, 21 December 2023 19:04 (four months ago) link

one month passes...

And if you survive 'til 2005, i hope you're exceedingly thin
For if you are stout you will have to breathe out while the people around you breathe in

Deflatormouse, Tuesday, 30 January 2024 20:50 (two months ago) link

Many things on my mind
Words in the way

clemenza, Monday, 12 February 2024 16:14 (two months ago) link

and that ain't no joke
you can disappear in smoke

reggie (qualmsley), Sunday, 18 February 2024 16:14 (two months ago) link

three weeks pass...

it's like we're at a Ponzi scam-inar:
-there's no escaping without a door prize
-they're operating at significant loss

reggie (qualmsley), Wednesday, 13 March 2024 18:58 (one month ago) link

three weeks pass...

Oh, I never should have said the books that you read
Were all I loved you for

rendered nugatory (morrisp), Tuesday, 9 April 2024 04:17 (two weeks ago) link

I can dance like Sherlock Holmes
I can sing like Sherlock Holmes
But I can't be Sherlock Holmes

Halfway there but for you, Thursday, 18 April 2024 16:33 (one week ago) link

he took a ride on the new highway
a culvert down to the ducks and drakes

reggie (qualmsley), Thursday, 18 April 2024 20:51 (one week ago) link

In the fragrance sweet of the evening air
I could leave this world quite without a care

he/him hoo-hah (map), Thursday, 18 April 2024 21:00 (one week ago) link


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