new york times' kelefeh sanneh on the white stripes, get behind me satan and retro-rock

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Yeah, but he's mythologizing the White Stripes as this *moment in history* when really they were just another retro garage rock band that happened to get big.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:35 (eighteen years ago) link

I'll grant you point B to an extent but I *really* hate the way point A is being used as an excuse here -- 'it's for a general audience, therefore lazy generalizations are excusable.' I don't buy that in *anything,* to be frank, because I think an accomplished writer can avoid that while still making the point to a general audience. As it stands all he's written is essentially a first paragraph for a press release for the Strokes' third album.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:37 (eighteen years ago) link

"Octave pedal on "Blue Orchid".
-- Brooker Buckingham (brooker...), June 4th, 2005."

Specifically, a Digitech Whammy pedal, for those that are interested. He's used one for years, especially to do odd, impossible things during slide solos.

I just realized that no-one probably does care. I CARE! somewhat.

John Justen (johnjusten), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:39 (eighteen years ago) link

I know what you mean, Ned, but I definitely find myself writing differently for different audiences. I think it's hard not to do that. (I've thought about starting a thread on that, actually; has there been one? The whole issue of how much expertise you can assume on the part of the reader, whether or how much it matters, etc.)

fwiw, one thing I like about Kelefa in general is that I think he manages to write about things that, in most cases, the majority of his potential audience knows nothing about, but he manages to do it conversationally and make it seem accessible (as opposed to, say, some of the high-art critics, opera and painting and whatnot, who seem to kind of pride themselves on writing for specialized audiences).

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:41 (eighteen years ago) link

Sorry Ned, but I think Gypsy is otm here: I guess since I read the piece with Sanneh's abundant knowledge of pop music assumed, I read what he was saying not as "this is how it was" but "this is how it was hyped":

It's a perfectly well-written piece, and i can't understand all the criticism (well wait, as this is ILM I can but all the hyper-analysis is still silly) - esp from whoever that said Kelefah doesnt have an opinion. He's practically salivating over the album, wth do you mean? I have yet to be disappointed by the way he explains things, and I dig his excited, yet still low-key style. I'd like to see any of you write better in The New York Times, which demands a particular tone and presumes a specific audience....and see if you succeed as well in such well-defined parameters.

Vichitravirya XI, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:43 (eighteen years ago) link

Even harder is Lorraine Ali's gig in Newsweek - and she writes wonderfully as well

Vichitravirya XI, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:44 (eighteen years ago) link

I think the general audience/NY Times argument is a red herring, too. KS writes as well as any music critic around today, whatever the venue. No need to make allowances for him.

So presumably Ned disagrees with KS' take on recent musical history. How would you sum up the last few years differently in two paragraphs? ie, without having the luxury of pointing out all the exceptions to the rule.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:44 (eighteen years ago) link

x-post w/ gypsy. this isn't a pitchfork piece guys...

Vichitravirya XI, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:45 (eighteen years ago) link

Ned, just admit that that Killers comment bugs you since you hate the band!

Vichitravirya XI, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:46 (eighteen years ago) link

the majority of his potential audience knows nothing about, but he manages to do it conversationally and make it seem accessible

The downside of this is turning into Klosterman -- which, happily, KS doesn't seem to be in any immediate danger of doing (and thank fuck for that).

I also personally find it very amsuing that in the same breath people are saying, "Isn't it great that KS can talk to so many people" they are also saying, "Aren't *we* great for sensing what he's *really* talking about." The two are not necessarily contradictory, but you're making it sound like that the conscious-history-of-hype subtext which is magically apparent to many here is only allowed to be understood by those who know him, not the general audience he's supposed to be informing. Talk about having your cake and eating it too!

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:48 (eighteen years ago) link

Or they could just be saying that he manages to be accessible and in-depth at the same time.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:49 (eighteen years ago) link

The "writing for a particular audience" thing is fine. But you don't have to over-mythologize a group in order to make sure that the article seems vital and important.

I don't know; maybe he genuinely thinks the White Stripes are this significant. I certainly don't.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:50 (eighteen years ago) link

"I'd like to see any of you write better in The New York Times"

well, jeez, i guess we better not talk about it then.

scott seward (scott seward), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:50 (eighteen years ago) link

xpost- Chuck, I'm not saying that British papers rub this Sanneh fellow's face in the dirt. As I've made clear, I've rarely read him. But they do devote much more space to music than the NYT does. The Observer Music Monthly is wildly erratic, but as an eighty page (or so) supplement it covers a lot of ground. That's aside from the paper's normal review section. Stewart Lee covers seriously outre music in the huge selling Sunday Times. All the UK broadsheets have reasonably decent coverage- this album will be reviewed everywhere, and at pretty much the same length. Even the listings sections of The Sun and Mirror (tabloids) are more likely to recommend, I dunno, Mystery Jets or Magic Numbers over Coldplay and Bloc Party. (The names are irrelevant of course, but these are obviously not foisted on them by an editor)

Of course we Brits despise celebrity as part of our make-up. 'Build 'em up, knock 'em down' is the national motto. Everyone of us has a tabloid hack within.

xp2- I have a Whammy pedal. I care.

snotty moore, Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:50 (eighteen years ago) link

I don't know; maybe he genuinely thinks the White Stripes are this significant. I certainly don't.

haha, I was thinking that part of the problem here might be trying to make the White Stripes seem important. (I like the White Stripes a whole lot, fwiw, but I have a hard time seeing them as much more than a nice little band.)

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:53 (eighteen years ago) link

Ehhh. I like Kelefeh, but he's too reliant on Madison Ave jargon ("king and queen of rock 'n' roll nostalgia," "'n' roll refuseniks, determined to follow their own rigorous rules") and lazy formulations this time. Al Green excepted, isn't every great rock artist "suspicious" about "the transformative power of love"?

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:54 (eighteen years ago) link

So presumably Ned disagrees with KS' take on recent musical history. How would you sum up the last few years differently in two paragraphs? ie, without having the luxury of pointing out all the exceptions to the rule.

I will take that challenge with KS's own words:

Only a few years ago, it was a mild shock not only to hear so many young bands sounding so old-fashioned, but that some started to succeed with it. The 2001 release of the Strokes' galvanizing debut album, combined with high profile attention for the band, further publicized a garage-rock boom that seemed like a sharp (and sometimes shrill) reaction to a mutating musical world. Like many other bands, the Strokes' retro juggernaut was a strike against turntables and keyboards, rap-rock and electronica. And if the band sounded a bit like their favorite late-1970's punk forebears, that was part of the point: they were digging in their heels.

Of all the bands that gained wider attention then, none dug in harder than the White Stripes, the Detroit duo that staked out a position on the extreme wing of retro.

Rewrote the first three sentences to provide a bit of context without adding too much. Left the fourth sentence as is, tweaked the first sentence of the next paragraph to make it seem less like the White Stripes came out in the *wake* of the Strokes, which 'emerged' doesn't entirely make clear.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 00:56 (eighteen years ago) link

So actually, you don't disagree with him at all then. You just want to add a bunch of fairly meaningless qualifications to what he said.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:00 (eighteen years ago) link

Hm...at this point I'm starting to assume you *are* KS.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:03 (eighteen years ago) link

No, Ned's right! What's distressing is the piece's acquiescence to marketing gurus.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:04 (eighteen years ago) link

I mean, weren't Elastica, Imperial Teen, and Garbage, to name three random examples, establishing themselves using KS' same paradigms.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:06 (eighteen years ago) link

But his rewrite is barely any different. It just has a little more distancing, which I probably wouldn't notice if I hadn't read all his previous comments.

If one is going for the big picture in the first place, I tend to think one should do it full bore.

Anyway, now I'm nit-picking the nit-pickers. Later

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:10 (eighteen years ago) link

That's good, Ned! Except the White Stripes didn't "dig in their heels" any more than any number of primitive garage rock bands.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:12 (eighteen years ago) link

My point, bugged out, if it wasn't clear, was not so much to present my alternate viewpoint as it was to use KS's and tweak it in a way that barely increases the word count, is still accessible to a wider audience and acknowledges the context in which both bands came to wider attention. If this is a sin, I am incredibly guilty.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:12 (eighteen years ago) link

Oh, dang.

How adding the phrases

"but that some started to succeed with it"
"combined with high profile attention for the band, further publicized"
"Like many other bands"

adds any context is honestly beyond me.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:18 (eighteen years ago) link

Okay, fine, the Strokes magically appeared out of nowhere, didn't benefit at all from publicity and voom, the new world was created. Let me get my magic wand so I can give you wings and you can go off singing into the trees, as you apparently enjoy fairy tales.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:22 (eighteen years ago) link

The piece is middle brow through and through. And I love the assertion that the context has to be somehow dumbed down for the masses--the masses in this case being the readers of the most important daily newspaper in the United States, those readers probably being among the most well-read and informed of all newspaper readers, and those readers who are probably pretty aware of the White Stripes and their retro rock sound. I mean, the White Stripes were everywhere a couple of years ago and Jack White acted and sang in an Oscar nominated film. Oh, and they've sold 2 million records in the US and another million or more overseas. (And "none dug in harder" than the White Stripes???? JSBX and about a zillion other post-punk acts have dug deep into some sort of strict aesthetic before Jack White got the idea--tack onto Alfred Soto's bands and then remember that 80s trick Mellencamp tried when he told his whole band to learn new instruments before they made "Scarecrow"? Hell, Wilco's "A Ghost Is Born" arguably dug much deeper and came out much cleverer and stranger. So did Radiohead with "Kid A.")

"Unable to escape rock 'n' roll history, the White Stripes decided to rearrange it instead" is the most vomit-inducing line I've read in a long, long time.

don weiner (don weiner), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:24 (eighteen years ago) link

Do you want me to start quoting NYT reader demographics to you? Sure, some chunk of them probably know the White Stripes very well (like, all of us, for example). An awful lot don't, believe it or not. And there's a difference between dumbing down (which I don't think Kelefa does) and providing some generalized context for a general audience.

This ain't his best piece, sure. It makes some dubious claims, OK. But writing for a general audience really is different than writing for a niche audience, and I don't see why that should be a controversial point.

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:37 (eighteen years ago) link

You can quote the demos all you want, as long as you compare the NYT with every other major paper. And after that, you can Lexis-Nexis "Jack White" and see how many times "Elephant" was mentioned in the top 20 dailies since it was released. I'm pretty sure lots--if not the majority--made a mention of the White Stripes retro-rock aesthetic. I agree that dumbing it down generalizing the context is appropriate for the NYT demos; my point is that that context was dubious, and essentially meaningless. This is the same storyline given to Wilco or Radiohead when they were busy reinventing rock-n-roll in cleverer and strange ways. It's not a novel thesis and that's one of the reasons the piece fails to deliver.

don weiner (don weiner), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:54 (eighteen years ago) link

"Oh, dang.
How adding the phrases

"but that some started to succeed with it"
"combined with high profile attention for the band, further publicized"
"Like many other bands"

adds any context is honestly beyond me.

-- bugged out (bu...), June 4th, 2005."

"Like many other bands" is the most important addition, and gets to the root of the problem with the article, IMHO.

"From Gap commercials (where you can find the 18-year-old Joss Stone belting out the half-century-old "Night Time Is the Right Time") to indie record shops, rock 'n' roll nostalgia is everywhere."

This reminds me of something you'd read in "Teen Beat", or the hamfisted "Beatlemania" articles of yesteryear..."Those lovable mop-tops the Strokes are sweeping the nation with their smart suits and devil-may-care attitude!"

don weiner OTM on "Unable to escape..." line. Reminds me of the ham-fisted first drafts of Philosophy 1001 thesis statements I used to have to deal with back when I was a peer writing advisor. "Now the White Stripes are trying something trickier: they're trying to change the past." reminds me of the conclusions that would inevitably follow. Lazy, deadline filling writing from someone with nothing to say...

John Justen (johnjusten), Saturday, 4 June 2005 01:56 (eighteen years ago) link

I really don't think this piece is that bad, and I think you can make all sorts of things seem dumb by parsing them with a sneer. Not that, on the other hand, there's anything wrong with that -- it's a valid critical pursuit. But I think the snideness toward general-audience writing is misplaced. And I don't care how many times the White Stripes have been mentioned in how many places, betting that your average newspaper reader (median age in the mid-40s, last I saw) has heard of them -- or heard them enough to not need some basic introductory sentences -- is nothing I'd put money on.

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:06 (eighteen years ago) link

Personally, I think the phrases "Only a few years ago, it was a mild shock to hear so many young bands sounding so old-fashioned" and "of all the bands that emerged then" in the original piece already makes the point that the Strokes weren't alone. Adding "like many other bands" is redundant. And I find it unnecessary to explicitly point out that this trend was accompanied by media attention. All trends are.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:10 (eighteen years ago) link

I was under the impression you were out of this thread because you were scared of nitpicking nitpickers. Poor dear.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:11 (eighteen years ago) link

I know, I can't help myself!

JSBX and about a zillion other post-punk acts have dug deep into some sort of strict aesthetic before Jack White got the idea

He's not just saying the White Stripes dug into a strict aesthetic in general. He's saying it was an aesthetic that was strict about mimicking the past.

This is the same storyline given to Wilco or Radiohead when they were busy reinventing rock-n-roll in cleverer and strange ways.

No it isn't. Everyone hailed Wilco and Radiohead for their futurism. Precisely the opposite.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:15 (eighteen years ago) link

I thought it was because they were boring...

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:18 (eighteen years ago) link

(sorry, I don't really mean to inflame that argument)

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:18 (eighteen years ago) link

heh, popist in inability to write convincingly about rock music shockah!

Zack Richardson (teenagequiet), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:23 (eighteen years ago) link

I'm also not sure why you're all so obsessed with the idea that some of the stuff he's talking about had occurred before. I don't see the part where he claims everything the Strokes and the White Stripes did was unprecedented. He's just saying it became a big trend. So he didn't append a 3000-word history of retro rock to the intro. Oops.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:26 (eighteen years ago) link

I think my main problem is with the style and tone of the piece, rather than the theme (not that I agree with it...but that's the whole point of critical writing, right?) I just think that there are some particularly cringeworthy and clunky moments...and even given your point re:the potential musical knowledge base of the readership, I think your average NYT reader would be capable of sensing the same overwrought, depthless tone that I do. Bad writing is simply bad writing, familiar subject or not.

x-post:
"This is the same storyline given to Wilco or Radiohead when they were busy reinventing rock-n-roll in cleverer and strange ways.

No it isn't. Everyone hailed Wilco and Radiohead for their futurism. Precisely the opposite.

-- bugged out (bu...)"

Please explain this refutation more clearly...particularly use of "everyone", the application of futurism to Wilco, and the reason "futurism" and "reinventing (X) in cleverer and strange ways" are opposing viewpoints, rather than differing interpretations.

John Justen (johnjusten), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:27 (eighteen years ago) link

Bad writing is simply bad writing, familiar subject or not.

Granted. Like I said, I don't think this is that bad -- it makes me want to hear the record, which is sort of its main objective -- but yeah, true.

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:30 (eighteen years ago) link

I agree, stylistically it's not great.

Everyone=majority of media outlets.

futurism/Wilco=everyone going on about the computers on that last album but one, which was the one they got all the hype for.

the opposing viewpoints are futurism, which Wilco and Radiohead were hailed for, and retroism, which the Strokes and White Stripes were hailed for

OK, prof?

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:30 (eighteen years ago) link

Yep. I misunderstood your opposition, apparently. My bad.

John Justen (johnjusten), Saturday, 4 June 2005 02:37 (eighteen years ago) link

"I'm also not sure why you're all so obsessed with the idea that some of the stuff he's talking about had occurred before. I don't see the part where he claims everything the Strokes and the White Stripes did was unprecedented. He's just saying it became a big trend."

Because of these statements:

"Of all the bands that emerged then, none dug in harder than the White Stripes"

"they were rock 'n' roll's greatest primitivists"

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:16 (eighteen years ago) link

The problem isn't KS at all, it's that when yr. covering any particular band you need to tie it into these big cultural claims to say "this is why you should be interested even if you don't care about music a great deal in general." (n.b. i have been guilty of this myself i think)

rilly good thinkpieces are rare and few between and usually absolutely don't fit the requirements for any major non-music publication.

the odd thing is that i have a hard time reading stuff like this coz i just gloss over it too quick, as compared to more "specialized" stuff.

i've noticed this more generally too -- like popular histories are tougher going for me than the denser but more specific academic stuff, etc.

it's like i don't notice simple claims anymore unless the writing is all about "showing" that backs them up. otherwise i just sorta filter thru them. & also ideas about say, the "state" of retro-rock or etc. just go through the same mental band-filter coz i don't think it's worth having an opinion, almost?

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:21 (eighteen years ago) link

mod, please change title to "editing new york times' kelefeh sanneh on the history of rock and roll, deadlines and modifiers".
Gypsy seems mostly OTM throughout this very very funny thread.

Forksclovetofu (Forksclovetofu), Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:31 (eighteen years ago) link

I think those statements speak to my point Tim! Both claim that the Stripes are simply the best among many people who do what they do, not that they do something noone else does. That's a qualatative judgment, not a historical error.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:32 (eighteen years ago) link

No, those points are dumb. Do you know how many garage rock bands there are in the world currently? Surely, you and Sanneh have heard them all? You're willing to assert that none of them have "dug in their heels harder than the White Stripes" and that the White Stripes are "rock and roll's greatest primitivists?"

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:34 (eighteen years ago) link

That's as may be. But it's a different point entirely to the point I made that you were responding to.

I understand you disagree with Sanneh's evaluation of the White Stripes. He, however, at least argues why he likes them so much. You however, just keep saying that you don't think they're very good, and he's wrong about them. And without any argument as to why you hold your opinion, I could really care less about it.

bugged out, Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:37 (eighteen years ago) link

Kelefa is great at writing for his audience, which is to say younger folks with corroded attention spans and marketing jones, and uppety older people who need a deft explanation of music forms foreign to them. He may be the best at that in the country right now. But I gotta say: he's at his best when he doesn't think so hard or try too hard to interject himself into a piece. I wish he'd have just reviewed the record more straightforwardly, instead of all the contextualizing and cute stuff about past becoming the future becoming the past ...

He could have just said what I think of this record, which is that it's a psychedelic time-shifting masterpiece!! A much more focused way of encapsulating the past/future thing. Reminds me of a mushroom trip I had in college -- wondering what lay ahead in academia's wake while longing to be 8 years old watching Yaz's last game for the Sox with my Dad; the memory was crystal clear and poignant, even while I was also freaking out about the present. If you just report on the record and not play harvard boy, the evidence is there that Jack is experiencing something similar; the choice of arrangement tells me that.

Chris O., Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:41 (eighteen years ago) link

And why is it, btw, that everytime K writes anything we engage in a 250 response thread? Face it -- we all just want to fuck the man. :-)

Chris O., Saturday, 4 June 2005 03:43 (eighteen years ago) link


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