why is paul banks so loathed a a lyricist

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i mean, he's not a poet. he's doing something with cliches, is all i'm saying. so to criticize him for cliches in his lyrics is sort of to miss the point of them. sort of of like criticizing lou reed for writing a sunshine pop song in "who loves the sun?" but i'd never slot him in the same company as lou, because banks seems more like a one-trick pony. he's occassionally good for a thought-provoking line; maybe he covers his inability to write a song moving in its entirety is why he resorts to his arch throwaway lines. which produces the effect jaymc is talking about, as opposed to what you get listening to, say, scott walker

klee hitchens, Tuesday, 27 December 2005 17:13 (eighteen years ago) link

earnestness or not, dude is tin-eared as fuck when it comes to lyrics

Matos-Webster Dictionary (M Matos), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 17:32 (eighteen years ago) link

i don't think that "it's in the way that she poses/ it's in the things that she puts in my head" is all that tin-eared. but there are a lot of dumb lines in that song, too. see discussion above

klee hitchens, Tuesday, 27 December 2005 17:47 (eighteen years ago) link

I don't think his ear's the problem, though! Or rather I think he has a good ear for the music as it relates to lyrics. Half of that phrases-in-passing effect I was talking about seems to come from the fact that the guy knows which lines need to be sold -- he knows which snatches of melody he can really pounce on, and thus which isolated lyric-lines are actually going to wind up featuring in people's brains. You can tell, because every one of those feature lyrics turns out to be a good one -- some kind of phrase that, especially out of of context, kind of rattles around your head as a cool thing to hear. (A lot of them are kind of Morrissey-casual and thus seem to imply loads of confidence about the whole process of lyric-writing -- see "Evil" and that "hey, who's on trial" interjection.)

So but yeah, he clearly has an ear for where he needs to be doing something striking, and he can often come up with a good striking line to plug into there, and even when they don't seem so striking on the lyric sheet, there's something about the cadence or delivery that gets them there. It's all that stuff in between that looks horrible on paper. And I'd say it sounds horrible on record, but I couldn't tell you -- those are the bits I don't really hear, or at least hear as just rhyming ordinary song-words as opposed to any sort of coherent "text." You could say it's some sort of laziness that he can't pad out the verse incidentals with something of higher-quality, but I'm not sure that's it (and I think Klee's right that a lot of it is arch -- it's just that it's hard to pull of the arch/knowing thing when others of your lyrics are totally interpretable as just clumsy). (And yeah I'll bet anything a lot of that archness is fake-Morrissey, as are plenty of his vocal melodies.)

nabisco (nabisco), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 17:48 (eighteen years ago) link

If you insist.

Alfred, Lord Sotosyn (Alfred Soto), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 17:59 (eighteen years ago) link

doesn't the guitsr player write all of the songs?. i thought i read that somewhere.

Christopher Costello (CGC), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 18:25 (eighteen years ago) link

that's supposed to say guitar

Christopher Costello (CGC), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 18:32 (eighteen years ago) link

well, he certainly doesn' write himself any interesting parts.

joseph cotten (joseph cotten), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 18:35 (eighteen years ago) link

Nabisco is right otm--said exacty what I was thinking. I think the reason there are people that hang onto the idea of Paul Banks' lyrics being poetic is because of how well they come across in the song, even if the meaning is stupid or incomprehensible, the sounds of the words and their connotations serve their purpose very well. I don't think anyone would read the lyrics and praise them, or even be interested in them at all for that matter.

Matt McEver (mattmc387), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 21:43 (eighteen years ago) link

Can we just accept that the lyrics are CRAP, we love Interpol anyway, and move on? Lyrical banality has never bothered us New Orderites.

Alfred, Lord Sotosyn (Alfred Soto), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 21:48 (eighteen years ago) link

I like Interpol, but I couldn't tell you what a single one of the songs are about, the lyrics are all so forgettable and/or impenatrable. I think even the "feature lyrics" that nabisco praises often strike me as incredibly clumsy and silly, so much so that I find myself actively not wanting to remember them ("you're stabbing yourself in the neck"? buh?)

Shakey Mo Collier (Shakey Mo Collier), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 21:53 (eighteen years ago) link

"Evil" is such a delicious treat (indeed, the only Interpol song I love, let alone like) because Banks is learning how to make his singing ride the beat so that the song achieves impressive levels of Le Bon-esque purple-osity.

Alfred, Lord Sotosyn (Alfred Soto), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 21:56 (eighteen years ago) link

That's "you'll go stabbing yourself in the neck," which is totally different. (Ha.) And which I like in basically that feature-lyric way. Like consider, you hear that song a few times, and here's what you come away with, lyrically:

- "make playing only logical" (hmm)
- "nothing else will change" (okay standard, go on)
- "SHE CAN [X], SHE CAN [X]" (it's "read," but you don't know that yet -- you just know she can do something with an E sound, and boy can she do it, cause listen to him!)
- "it's different now that I'm poor and ageing / I'll never see this face again" (that's kinda nice)
- "you'll go STABBING / YOURSELF IN / THE NECK" (zing!)
- "she puts the she puts the weights into my little heart" (he really sells this one)

Dude is no Peter Murphy nor no Robert Smith, but he seems to know a little bit about how they managed to script difficult lines into feature spots and sell them, make them ring out right: "stabbing yourself in the neck" here reads like a stumpy cousin of, say, "cover my face as the animals die."

nabisco (nabisco), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 22:15 (eighteen years ago) link

except that "cover my face as the animals die" conveys a bunch of coherent information (msg: narrator is distressed at the fate of little beasties, covers face in disgust and shock, possibly shame as well). Whereas "you'll go stabbing yourself in the neck" = what? why would anyone stab themselves in the neck? if its a suicidal thing, wouldn't throat-slitting be more appropriate? how does one kill oneself by stabbing oneself in the neck anyway? its just obtuse blathering.

Shakey Mo Collier (Shakey Mo Collier), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 22:26 (eighteen years ago) link

PFM News Item that I inexplicably remember:

Wednesday, November 27th, 2002
Interpol Announce More Dates for December Tour
YOU'LL GO STABBING! THAT GUY IN!! THE SCARF!!!

jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 22:27 (eighteen years ago) link

Federal sources tell CBS 2 that Braunstein was stopped at the University of Memphis by campus police. He identified himself as Peter Braunstein, and told the cops “I am the man the world is looking for.” He then stabbed himself in the neck. He’s now in critical condition at a Tennessee hospital.

joseph cotten (joseph cotten), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 22:29 (eighteen years ago) link

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Gosh, I do miss those jokey subheds. I told that to the 'Fork higher-ups several times...

joseph cotten (joseph cotten), Tuesday, 27 December 2005 22:31 (eighteen years ago) link

Has anyone heard "direction" by interpol from the six feet under soundtrack?
I strongly recomend you all download it if your after a good laugh and roll on the floor. Thats how fucking bad the lyrics are lol.

And its also the way paul sings them. He sounds like hes dead. Im so thankful ive heard that song. It will keep me laughing until the end of my days

hahababe, Sunday, 8 January 2006 02:12 (eighteen years ago) link

eleven months pass...
Direction is actually quite a good song. The lyrics? As in the single word that he repeats afew times? The way he sings in this song is pretty reminiscient of Ian Curtis of course... are you trying to say that is a bad thing? Pretty moronic statement that will keep me laughing until the end of my ciggarette, "lol".

Ben T (PaeganTerror), Sunday, 7 January 2007 15:27 (seventeen years ago) link

A friend of mine once thought the lyric to Obstacle 1 went "She can't read, she can't read, she can't read she's blaaa-aaack". Now I can't really listen to it without cracking up.

Luke Stacks (lukeasaurus), Sunday, 7 January 2007 15:59 (seventeen years ago) link

what are the right lyrics then?

rizzx (Rizz), Sunday, 7 January 2007 17:21 (seventeen years ago) link

"she's bad"

ben talbot (PaeganTerror), Sunday, 7 January 2007 21:42 (seventeen years ago) link

nabisco otm about 'featured lyrics' - which is why 'Untitled' is their best song, it doesn't have any other extraneous words

splates (splates), Monday, 8 January 2007 00:31 (seventeen years ago) link

Slow hands is about handjobs. I swear.

Andi Headphones (Andi Headphones), Tuesday, 9 January 2007 01:34 (seventeen years ago) link

six years pass...

so this "mixtape" is hardly a masterpiece or anything, but... i think it's misunderstood, and honestly quite enjoyable. i think it nails the aimless postmodern vibe as much as one can nail it. i've had it on repeat all morning with no desire to turn it off yet. i mean, it's not exactly aspiring for beauty.

cocktail onion (fennel cartwright), Thursday, 14 February 2013 19:55 (eleven years ago) link

one year passes...

Paul Banks is a poet and completely misunderstood. Totally classic.

"When the cadaverous mob saves its doors for the dead man you cannot leave"
"He severed segments so secretly you like that"
"I had seven faces / thought I knew which one to wear..."

i also enjoy in line skateing (spazzmatazz), Friday, 26 September 2014 20:00 (nine years ago) link

His lyrics are fucking great- combine that with his po faced delivery and you have one of the main reasons I like the band.

Hinklepicker, Friday, 26 September 2014 20:11 (nine years ago) link

Having lyric sheets on the new one really spoiled some of the mystique for me. :-/

Welcome to reality. No spitting, please. (Branwell with an N), Friday, 26 September 2014 20:13 (nine years ago) link

"He severed segments so secretly you like that"

guess that bundt gettin eaten (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Friday, 26 September 2014 20:13 (nine years ago) link

Man, I can't wait for Daniel Kessler's solo album. He's promised a whole record full of ambient electronica "like music for airports" he says like he is trying so hard to get me to pay attention to him he's taking to showing up in shoegaze stripey shirts and everything.

n.b. I may be drunked

Welcome to reality. No spitting, please. (Branwell with an N), Friday, 26 September 2014 20:16 (nine years ago) link

an early julian plenti gem - "just because a canyon is fascist, doesn't mean you don't hold onto your beliefs."

i also enjoy in line skateing (spazzmatazz), Monday, 6 October 2014 05:16 (nine years ago) link

Julian Plenti otm

guess that bundt gettin eaten (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Monday, 6 October 2014 11:09 (nine years ago) link

And who is this Paul Banks fellow exactly?

The Count has shot himself (Tom D.), Monday, 6 October 2014 11:22 (nine years ago) link

I dunno; you could maybe try reading the post at the top of the thread? Or is reading OPs too much work these days?

Welcome to reality. No spitting, please. (Branwell with an N), Monday, 6 October 2014 11:33 (nine years ago) link

I've actually been thinking about the line "You only know me like the shoreline knows the sea" quite a bit lately.

When I first heard it, I thought it meant that the "you" knows the speaker very well, that a shoreline obviously has a long and repeated acquaintance with the sea. But the line stuck with me, and I realised it could also mean the opposite - that a shoreline knows the sea only in a (very literally) shallow sense. The shoreline knows only the external tip of the sea, that the vast bulk of the sea are depths that the shoreline has no knowledge of - that actually it could mean that the "you" has no real understanding of the speaker at all, beyond the shallow and superficial. Especially with that casual "only".

Welcome to reality. No spitting, please. (Branwell with an N), Monday, 6 October 2014 11:38 (nine years ago) link

Tom D, I think he's in Genesis

sʌxihɔːl (Ward Fowler), Monday, 6 October 2014 11:47 (nine years ago) link

Paul BanksStatement

Master of Treacle, Monday, 6 October 2014 13:42 (nine years ago) link

Branwell, re: having a lyrics sheet on the new record, is it just me or are the non-sequiturs basically just completely gone now

Simon H., Monday, 6 October 2014 13:45 (nine years ago) link

Well, there are the non-sequiturs that didn't make it to the lyric sheets!

("I'm not gonna chase another steak until he's gone" ... wait, dude, you definitely said that in the lyrics, but it's not on the lyric sheet. What happened there, was not that actually a song lyric? I'm imagining it as an aside you shouted at Sam while you were waiting for Daniel to leave the studio so you could and Sam could make a midnight run to go eat steaks while the vegetarian was out? WTF, man?)

Granted, there have been several occasions where I've heard something and been like "WTF, did he just sing that?" and then checked the lyric sheets, and actually, no, he sang something that made slightly more sense than what I heard.

So I don't know if he's being more direct on this record. Or if many of those non-sequiturs were mis-hearings. (No, he definitely sang "let's see about this ham.")

Welcome to reality. No spitting, please. (Branwell with an N), Monday, 6 October 2014 15:00 (nine years ago) link

to this day i have no clue what PDA could be about - a rape? a bad breakup? astounding that it's still so impenetrable

Yours is the only version of my desertion that I could ever subscribe to
That is all that I can do
You are a past dinner, the last winner I'm raping all around me
Until the last drop is behind you
You're so cute when you're frustrated, dear
Yeah you're so cute when you're sedated, dear
oh yes dear

Sleep tight, grim rite.
We have 200 couches where you can
Sleep tight, grim rite.
We have 200 couches where you can
Sleep tonight...

You are the only person who's completely certain there's nothing here to be into
That is all that you can do
You are a past sinner, the last winner and everything we've come to
It makes you you
But you cannot safely say, while I will be away,
that you will not consider sadly how you helped me to stray
You will not reach me I am
Resenting a position that is past resentment
And now I can consider
And now there is this distance, so-

Sleep tight, grim rite.
We have 200 couches where you can
Sleep tight, grim rite.
We have 200 couches where you can
Sleep tonight...

ET sippin the wig (spazzmatazz), Monday, 6 October 2014 19:47 (nine years ago) link


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