I never remember holding a full drink.My first look shows the level half-way down.What next? Ration the rest, and try to thinkOf higher things, until mine host comes round?
Some people say, best show an empty glass.Someone will fill it. Well, I've tried that too.You may get drunk, or dry half-hours may pass.It seems to turn on where you are. Or who.
― difficult listening hour, Monday, 22 October 2012 23:59 (eleven years ago) link
love that one
― Know how Roo feel (LocalGarda), Tuesday, 23 October 2012 14:13 (eleven years ago) link
Use of rhyme is so downplayed it disappears.
― Aimless, Tuesday, 23 October 2012 17:35 (eleven years ago) link
is this the thread with the most geoffrey hill talk
― the bitcoin comic (thomp), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 14:25 (ten years ago) link
yeah, i think so. there's a bit of love elsewhere, but I don't think anyone says anything substantive.
― woof, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 14:36 (ten years ago) link
the baffled/disappointed/angry comparison of Mike Skinner to Sir John Suckling, & incidental knocking of Let England Shake and guardian music journalist Dave Simpson.
still feel a bit like I dreamed this
― woof, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 14:37 (ten years ago) link
Funny this thread was revived. Intended to drop by & post this line by line, all in caps, while bank holiday drunk.
Life is an immobile, locked,Three-handed struggle betweenYour wants, the world's for you, and (worse)The unbeatable slow machineThat brings what you'll get.
Better mood today, sentence case will do.
― woof, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 14:42 (ten years ago) link
ah, how often i use those lines to describe my own and other people's lives
― Rowdy Rathore (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 14:53 (ten years ago) link
Weird. I reread Hill's Charles Péguy poem a couple weeks ago.
― A deeper shade of lol (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 15:07 (ten years ago) link
"unbeatable slow machine" might be my most frequent entering-head-unbidden poetry phrase.
― woof, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 15:22 (ten years ago) link
watch love & death in hull rece
what a downer
― cozen, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:23 (ten years ago) link
also memorised* this be the verse
*close enough
― cozen, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:24 (ten years ago) link
:) "This Be the Verse" is conveniently amenable to memorization
― Koné 2013 (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:24 (ten years ago) link
tho obv i'd be a hypocrite telling folks not to have any kids themselves
― Koné 2013 (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:25 (ten years ago) link
How did you get love and death in hull, cozen? I have found only long dead torrents.
― Tioc Norris (LocalGarda), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:27 (ten years ago) link
my videotaped copy is long gone sadly
― Koné 2013 (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:29 (ten years ago) link
LG - you might like don paterson's first couple of collections? he's gotten a bit ~airy-er~ as time's got on but there's def echoes of larkin in the early stuff
― cozen, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:29 (ten years ago) link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dqa6L22m0rY
― cozen, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:30 (ten years ago) link
excellent!
― Koné 2013 (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:31 (ten years ago) link
early paul farley channelling larkin to an extent also
― cozen, Tuesday, 7 May 2013 20:35 (ten years ago) link
I was thinking about trying to develop some thoughts about Geoffrey Hill's most recent lecture and his project in general but I don't know. More relevantly to the thread's nominal purpose, I sold my collected Larkin today.
― the bitcoin comic (thomp), Tuesday, 7 May 2013 22:38 (ten years ago) link
I wish they'd kept up with mp3s of the lectures. I think only the first three or four went up
― woof, Wednesday, 8 May 2013 07:29 (ten years ago) link
Peter Reading is like Larkin without the hatred of all things foreign.
― Modlizki, Wednesday, 8 May 2013 09:29 (ten years ago) link
i love Larkin and Reading, but I don't quite see that, or the gap in sensibility isn't really to do with foreignness. Not sure.
just to continue on the Hill lectures (& I would like to hear what you have to say thomp), I am also now remembering the bit where he lays into Sam Leith for no real reason that I can remember.
― woof, Wednesday, 8 May 2013 11:59 (ten years ago) link
Mm. I was in Oxford for the last one and the guy I was staying with was going, so I thought I might as well; the last one I saw was last year when I was working on my master's, and I basically could barely follow it at all. This one seemed comparatively plain-speaking, though I asked my friend and the two other people to give me what they thought was the argument, at various points over the next 24 hours, and my friend was totally wrong and the other two just went 'yeah, no, I'd have no idea how to do that'.
― the bitcoin comic (thomp), Wednesday, 8 May 2013 13:10 (ten years ago) link
yeah, after listening to the earlier ones I'd def have trouble precis-ing an argument - they're deliberately difficult, or roundabout. I remember thinking that I didn't understand quite how we'd got here when he'd be talking about Mandelstam, say, but then there'd be a moment of clarity, and I could see what i thought he was trying to do with the misdirecting and going backwards &c.
― woof, Wednesday, 8 May 2013 13:26 (ten years ago) link
Mercian Hymns XXV
Brooding on the eightieth letter of Fors Clavigera, I speak this in memory of my grandmother, whose childhood and prime womanhood were spent in the nailer's darg.
The nailshop stood back of the cottage, by the fold. It reeked stale mineral sweat. Sparks had furred its low roof. In dawn-light the troughed water floated a damson-bloom of dust ---
not to be shaken by posthumous clamour. It is one thing to celebrate the 'quick forge', another to cradle a face hare-lipped by the searing wire.
love that
Well, I wanted to say "all things foreign and intellectual", but it felt wrong even when I put "intellectual" in quotes and so I just gave up and tried for something comically reductive (and failed). Do you think it's wrong to suggest Reading as poet similar to Larkin? I think of both as English miserabilists, "laureates of decay" and so on, but I may be off on that as I'm not overly familiar with Reading's work. He's often too cryptic for me, to be honest, which is part of what I meant by foreignness: not just quotations in Spanish or whatever, but an entire aesthetic more in line with the kind of high modernism Larkin made a point of rejecting. Still, looking at some of Reading's early work just now, I did find plenty of Larkinesque moments. One poem in particular, "St James's", seems sort of apropos:
On Holy Thursday cycling in the LakesI found St James's on a pewter hilland force of habit rather than desirecarried me on towards the wrought iron gates.
The dusty Dunlops and the worn out brakesof my Rudge leaning on the lake-stone wallseemed more akin to Larkin than to me.
Some stones inside the musty porch were Saxon,and there, beside the patent-leather Edensimmering round St James's in Lent sun,the sexton, one spring day digging a grave,in 1898 unearthed remainsthat proved to be of Viking origin.
The latest stone, marked 1968,shews that the process is still going on.I, in my turn, turned the worn rusting latch,saw the inevitable Norman archand, near the font, some notes by Reverend Twiggeabout the church and its history —he was the rector here in nineteen seven,in his place now is Geoffrey Dennison Hill.
I climbed the old steps up the Western Tower(added about 1248) and foundbarrows of sticks from jackdaw generations,piled in a stook beside the swaying belleggs and dry feathers and winged skeletons,and I descended into the chancel,observing, not from interest but a senseof having to have a sense of history,the aimless woodworms' doodles in the roof.
The empty Player's Weights pack in the fontbelonged to Betjeman, I have no doubt,and there was Larkin's shilling left in trustas payment for the Reverend Twigge's epistle;
but I was not there, just a cardboard copyguiltily going through the motions ofwhat all day-trippers do before they leave,replacing bike clips, lingering at the doorgiving the closing latch a final twist,consulting Twigge one final time beforeturning from font to underground stone kist.
― Modlizki, Wednesday, 8 May 2013 17:10 (ten years ago) link
I do see it, sort of - like Reading as Pound modernism injected into Larkin/Movement anti-modernism (which is sort of a variety of Eliotic conservative modernism, maybe), but I think they're farther apart than they look even in early Reading - too tricksy, too self-conscious, cunning interlocking poems, about Larkin-ness rather than Larkiny. Not denying there's overlap - things like vers de societe, Sunny Prestatyn in particular- but I think the lyric urge isn't quite there in Reading maybe? Or doesn't trust itself. Nice comparison tho', I'm interested in why I draw back from it.
― woof, Wednesday, 8 May 2013 20:25 (ten years ago) link
how many different modernisms do you think you can identify
― the bitcoin comic (thomp), Wednesday, 8 May 2013 22:03 (ten years ago) link
sincere question
I just make them up when I need them
― woof, Thursday, 9 May 2013 08:59 (ten years ago) link
I'm trying to answer this properly but i've been coerced into making a wordle for a powerpoint workshop presentation.
― woof, Thursday, 9 May 2013 10:54 (ten years ago) link
I'd use a few diff kinds when thinking about things - it's fairly fluid & they exist in relation to one another & overlap, so idk, Pound & Eliot would go together in a different discussion. & it definitely reflects what I look at more closely, ie English Poetry, mostly - so, slightly ridiculously, the art/anti-art manifestoing movements of the early c20th are bundled in my head.
So if I just said 'Modernism', I'd mean primarily a big Joyce/Eliot/Pound category; that'd break into a make-it-new style - fractures fragments collages textuality etc etc etc - and then maybe a kind that retreats from that into classicism, that's more the Eliot end of things (& I'd take that line down to Hill).
vs that in my head is a more obviously late-Romantic modernism that's Yeats etc - looks like anti-modernism in places, & drifts towards meeting the Eliot tributary of hard modernism.
Then there are British subsets where the coordinates get more complicated for me - an establishment/bloomsbury variety, then the 30s poets sitting in a funny place where they're in an Eliot camp but still seem to have a dose of Georgian coming through, those nature/grail types in the novel like Mary Butts… categories sort of break down but that's what I'd expect them to do when you look at individuals, they become ways of finding interesting or useful questions.
I should really read that Alexandra Harris book on Romantic Moderns, but I am just a bit sus that she all Bloomsbury, John Piper, marvellous, whereas I think that is backing down from THE PROJECT
Larkin's an odd one because he does seem properly, thoroughly committed to anti-intellectual + pure british trads, but bits of otherness do keep breaking through.
back to wordle
― woof, Thursday, 9 May 2013 11:55 (ten years ago) link
i recently read kevin jackson's constellation of genius, which is a kind of diaryish rundown of 1922, the year in modernism. it's not a theoretical or analytical book at all, but it does give a sense of the SPEED of modernism, and the many different currents (historical-cultural) feeding into it. jackson def favours eliot and (esp) pound as central to it all - and yeah, woolf in particular comes across as a horrible (social) snob about joyce - tho the centerpiece of the book is prob a dinner attended by proust, joyce, picasso and stravinsky. book also brought home to me just how right-wing/reactionary a lot of the modernists were - so there's another connection to larkin etc
― Ward Fowler, Thursday, 9 May 2013 12:05 (ten years ago) link
"A man who knew so little inner peace should be forgiven anything" -- agree or disagree?
― Excelsior twilight. Harpsichord wind through the trees. (bernard snowy), Thursday, 9 May 2013 12:22 (ten years ago) link
(Asking as a general critical principle, not just w/r/t Larkin. Strikes me as poete maudite received-wisdom bollocks, but I am in the midst of a v.charged personal struggle to emerge from romantic equation of suffering with artistic insight, so maybe projecting
― Excelsior twilight. Harpsichord wind through the trees. (bernard snowy), Thursday, 9 May 2013 12:47 (ten years ago) link
)
― Excelsior twilight. Harpsichord wind through the trees. (bernard snowy), Thursday, 9 May 2013 12:48 (ten years ago) link
I was briefly tempted by that Jackson book - it's a great topic - but I don't really trust him, feel like everything I've read by him has been a bit underpowered intellectually - chimes with what your saying, I suspect.
― woof, Thursday, 9 May 2013 13:19 (ten years ago) link
agree or disagree?
The word "anything" should only be admitted in that statement if it carries a sense so attenuated as to render it useless.
― Aimless, Thursday, 9 May 2013 18:13 (ten years ago) link
okay well obviously it's hyperbolic, but I'm more curious about the idea that an author's 'private' missteps (odious political views, racism, misogyny, whatever) can be redeemed(? canceled out??) by the author's equally private "self-hatred" and suffering. something about this moral calculus feels off to me, but I can't put my finger on it.
― Excelsior twilight. Harpsichord wind through the trees. (bernard snowy), Thursday, 9 May 2013 19:49 (ten years ago) link
... basically it seems to boil down to "Larkin may have been a shitty person, but he was aware of it, and managed to balance being a shitty person with making non-shitty art; therefore, he can be excused for not using his self-knowledge to become a less shitty person"
― Excelsior twilight. Harpsichord wind through the trees. (bernard snowy), Thursday, 9 May 2013 19:54 (ten years ago) link
(NB I know next-to-nothing about Philip Larkin outside of what's in this thread. I enjoy most poems of his that I've read, and find nothing objectionable in them.)
― Excelsior twilight. Harpsichord wind through the trees. (bernard snowy), Thursday, 9 May 2013 19:56 (ten years ago) link
Good essay by James Fenton:http://www.threepennyreview.com/samples/fenton_su13.html
It is very strange that a poet whose key work lies in three rather short volumes should have caused such difficulties for his editors and such controversy among his readers. But the readers pay him the tribute of a sort of possessiveness and concern: they want their poet to look his best. And it’s hard for a poet to look good in his Collected Poems, if by “collected” we mean anything like “complete.” Most poets’ collected works will include things that would make the author cringe. Presented in untidied form, such gatherings remind me of nothing so much as those yard sales characteristic of recession America, in which families set out on their front lawns the contents of their closets and dens—the Frisbees, the old scooters, the clothes neither wanted nor needed, the dreadful joke presents—all in the hope of raising a little cash.
― lols lane (Eazy), Wednesday, 19 June 2013 22:39 (ten years ago) link
Here
Swerving east, from rich industrial shadowsAnd traffic all night north; swerving through fieldsToo thin and thistled to be called meadows,And now and then a harsh-named halt, that shieldsWorkmen at dawn; swerving to solitudeOf skies and scarecrows, haystacks, hares and pheasants,And the widening river's slow presence,The piled gold clouds, the shining gull-marked mud,
Gathers to the surprise of a large town:Here domes and statues, spires and cranes clusterBeside grain-scattered streets, barge-crowded water,And residents from raw estates, brought downThe dead straight miles by stealing flat-faced trolleys,Push through plate-glass swing doors to their desires--Cheap suits, red kitchen-ware, sharp shoes, iced lollies,Electric mixers, toasters, washers, driers--
A cut-price crowd, urban yet simple, dwellingWhere only salesmen and relations comeWithin a terminate and fishy-smellingPastoral of ships up streets, the slave museum,Tattoo-shops, consulates, grim head-scarfed wives;And out beyond its mortgaged half-built edgesFast-shadowed wheat-fields, running high as hedges,Isolate villages, where removed lives
Loneliness clarifies. Here silence stands Like heat. Here leaves unnoticed thicken,Hidden weeds flower, neglected waters quicken,Luminously-peopled air ascends;And past the poppies bluish neutral distanceEnds the land suddenly beyond a beachOf shapes and shingle. Here is unfenced existence:Facing the sun, untalkative, out of reach.
― rock nobster (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 28 January 2014 12:47 (ten years ago) link
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_iJPUPy50Gxc/TTGujk5h1TI/AAAAAAAAAww/4WEwGmfagwY/s1600/Wilberforce-House.jpg
the slave museum
― rock nobster (Noodle Vague), Tuesday, 28 January 2014 12:48 (ten years ago) link
turns out I'm a fan
― SEEMS TO ME (VegemiteGrrl), Saturday, 30 August 2014 06:22 (nine years ago) link
What are days for?Days are where we live.They come, they wake usTime and time over.They are to be happy in:Where can we live but days?
Ah, solving that questionBrings the priest and the doctorIn their long coatsRunning over the fields.
― difficult listening hour, Saturday, 30 August 2014 09:27 (nine years ago) link
Once I am sure there’s nothing going onI step inside, letting the door thus shut.Another church: matting, seats, and stone,And little books; sprawlings of flowers, cutFor Sunday, brownish now; some brass and stuff 5Up at the holy end; the small neat organ;And a tense, musty, unignorable silence,Brewed God knows how long. Hatless, I take offMy cycle-clips in awkward reverence.
Move forward, run my hand around the font. 10From where I stand, the roof looks almost new –Cleaned, or restored? Someone would know: I don’t.Mounting the lectern, I peruse a fewHectoring large-scale verses, and pronounce‘Here endeth’ much more loudly than I’d meant. 15The echoes snigger briefly. Back at the doorI sign the book, done an Irish sixpence,Reflect the place was not worth stopping for.
Yet stop I did: in fact I often do,And always end much at a loss like this, 20Wondering what to look for; wondering, too,When churches will fall completely out of useWhat we shall turn them into, if we shall keepA few cathedrals chronically on show,Their parchment, plate and pyx in locked cases, 25And let the rest rent-free to rain and sheep.Shall we avoid them as unlucky places?
Or, after dark, will dubious women comeTo make their children touch a particular stone;Pick simples for a cancer; or on some 30Advised night see walking a dead one?Power of some sort will go onIn games, in riddles, seemingly at random;But superstition, like belief, must die,And what remains when disbelief has gone? 35Grass, weedy pavement, brambles, buttress, sky,
A shape less recognisable each week,A purpose more obscure. I wonder whoWill be the last, the very last, to seekThis place for what it was; one of the crew 40That tap and jot and know what rood-lofts were?Some ruin-bibber, randy for antique,Or Christmas-addict, counting on a whiffOf gown-and-bands and organ-pipes and myrrh?Or will he by my representative, 45
Bored, uninformed, knowing the ghostly siltDispersed, yet tending to this cross of groundThrough suburb scrub because it held unspiltSo long and equably what since is foundOnly in separation – marriage, and birth, 50And death, and thoughts of these – for which was builtThis special shell? For, though I’ve no ideaWhat this accoutered frowsty barn is worth,It pleases me to stand in silence here;
A serious house on serious earth it is, 55In whose blent air all our compulsions meet,Are recognized, and robed as destinies.And that much never can be obsolete,Since someone will forever be surprisingA hunger in himself to be more serious, 60And gravitating with it to this ground,Which, he once heard, was proper to grow wise in,If only that so many dead lie round.
― treeship., Tuesday, 4 May 2021 11:43 (two years ago) link