I just wrote a review and it sucks.

Thanks for all the suggestions! It's good to actually get some constructive criticisms instead of just criticism for once. I can't respond to every single thing, but I'm paying attention, really! Anyway...

Sean, I thought I was always taught in English class varying sentence length was 'correct'? Knowing me I misremember and it's supposed to be the other way around. ;-)

I'm not too sure how to approach the Gluons exactly. It's my brother's band (well, he's in the band he doesn't OWN it, lol) and we mostly don't get along real well. So it's hard to admit that I actually like their music. Plus I've never heard that kind of music before really so it's hard to categorize it or compare it to anything. I mean, it's probably not very original but it's new to me.

Kilian, believe me I would take out the LOLs if I could but I'm addicted! *suppressing urge to type LOL here* I don't think I CAN quit.

Zebedee, there's no connection between all of those probably. Even though I almost always update my blog twice a day I'm really bad about keeping the links up to date and in order. I keep meaning to delete the Tori Amos and Bright Eyes links and I like Ned Raggett's site alot, even though its place in the list doesn't really mean anything. Me being so poor with HTML doesn't help matters also. (c:

Thanks again for all the suggestions. I might try to rewrite it and post it again I'm not sure. I can definately see how I should be more specific and stuff. And I spent more time complaining about the crowd and Brandan (yes, he can be annoying but then completely sweet too, it's strange) than I did talking about the actual music. 8-P

Sean, I thought I was always taught in English class varying sentence length was 'correct'? Knowing me I misremember and it's supposed to be the other way around. ;-)
No, no, that's true, but there's a few places in there where there are a bunch of really short ones in a row, and it's like rat-a-tat-tat. In the end, I guess that's MY issue and not yours; mark s is probably right.