I read this sentence (in a novel) the other day: "She could use to lose weight."
The word "use" leapt out at me as weird. But I think it's just because it's not often used before an infinitive verb.
These seem to be the usual formulations:
"She could stand to lose weight" (before infinitive verb)"She could use a haircut" (before object)
But I wonder if there's a shade of difference in meaning between them. "Stand" sort of implies the willingness to accept a burden, while "use" can be more positive (e.g., "I could really use a beer right now!")
― jaymc, Wednesday, 24 August 2011 16:23 (twelve years ago) link
haha that really seems like an uncorrected typo to me jaymc, but yr reading is excellent
"omit to do such-and-such" is standard UK english
― mark s, Wednesday, 24 August 2011 16:26 (twelve years ago) link
had my "x failed to notice" changed to "x omitted to notice"
me 1 cunty colleague 0
― glasgow based god (cozen), Wednesday, 24 August 2011 16:56 (twelve years ago) link
giles cozen :D
― mark s, Wednesday, 24 August 2011 16:58 (twelve years ago) link
haha that really seems like an uncorrected typo to me
Well, it was an excerpt from a character's e-mail -- this was Gary Shteyngart's Super-Sad True Love Story -- so I thought it might've been intentional.
― jaymc, Wednesday, 24 August 2011 18:10 (twelve years ago) link
― mark s, Wednesday, August 24, 2011 12:26 PM (3 hours ago)
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
― karen d. foreskin (k3vin k.), Wednesday, 24 August 2011 19:42 (twelve years ago) link
"Advances in biotechnology make it now possible to..." versus "now make it possible to..."
― incredibly middlebrow (Dr Morbius), Monday, 29 August 2011 17:05 (twelve years ago) link
Latter in a blink for me.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Monday, 29 August 2011 17:12 (twelve years ago) link
Yeah, get the modifying word (now) out of the verb phrase (make possible).
― arch midwestern housewife named (Laurel), Monday, 29 August 2011 17:13 (twelve years ago) link
grammar question (sorta)
i've noticed recently in a lot of my writing (both formally and informally i.e. emails) that i keep saying stuff like "that i noticed that" or "that i said that" -- would it be more grammatically correct to say for instance "that i noticed that the car was red" or "that i noticed the car was red"? or is it just personal preference?
― J0rdan S., Wednesday, 7 September 2011 04:07 (twelve years ago) link
I always prefer to read 'noticed that' bc I have had to re-read some sentences when 'that' isn't there and it's bugged me. E.g. you could read it as "I noticed the car" (I spotted its presence) and then get confused by the 'was red', so it potentially makes for less easy reading. But I've no idea if this is proper or not? And probably wouldn't care in informal use if it makes sense.
― kinder, Wednesday, 7 September 2011 04:11 (twelve years ago) link
Taking out extra thats is one of the great joys of editing, imo. A lot of them aren't necessary. Yes it gives you a little more clarity, but often more than needed, and at the expense of flow.
― something of an astrological coup (tipsy mothra), Wednesday, 7 September 2011 04:37 (twelve years ago) link
(as for a rule, the only one I've ever heard about it is take them out when you can.)
― something of an astrological coup (tipsy mothra), Wednesday, 7 September 2011 04:38 (twelve years ago) link
Personally I'd put it in if it makes the sense clearer, but leave it out if otherwise there would be repetition of "that". If neither of those things are issues, I'd probably leave it out, or just go with the rythmn of what sounds best.
― Zelda Zonk, Wednesday, 7 September 2011 04:40 (twelve years ago) link
what are our thoughts on the definition of "comprise" drifting to essentially become synonomous with "compose"? i'm reading some DFW and he's got a few questionable usages of the word.
― k3vin k., Wednesday, 7 September 2011 05:02 (twelve years ago) link
i'm somewhat of a snob on this partic usage tbh - i know some ppl think it's whatever and will just let it slide
― k3vin k., Wednesday, 7 September 2011 05:03 (twelve years ago) link
"Comprised of" is no.1 pet hate of mine. I've come to accept it in some uses but being used as 'composed of' or 'consists of' seems quite commonplace.
― kinder, Wednesday, 7 September 2011 05:05 (twelve years ago) link
tomorrow when i'm more sober i'll quote the parts of "mr. squishy" where DFW commits his apparent transgressions but i wonder if he just disagreed with the conventional wisdom on this partic issue and left those in just to troll
― k3vin k., Wednesday, 7 September 2011 05:11 (twelve years ago) link
I like the difference between comprise and compose, but I'm not gonna go to the grave for it. You gotta pick your battles. I'm focused on fighting off 'free reign.'
― something of an astrological coup (tipsy mothra), Wednesday, 7 September 2011 05:33 (twelve years ago) link
There's no way I can let the author (a doctor, of course) have this last comma.
"Improved validity of the studies is needed, but it is better served by more insightful reviewers and consumers, accepting the trial-and-error nature of that process."
You can't cut off two nouns from a verb like that, or I have no idea what you're trying to say.
― incredibly middlebrow (Dr Morbius), Friday, 9 September 2011 14:03 (twelve years ago) link
Er, kinder/k3vin, "comprised of" has been used since the 18th century according to Merriam-Webster. Now a question of preference rather than right and wrong.
http://missioncreep.com/tilt/comprise.html
― Science, you guys. Science. (DL), Friday, 9 September 2011 14:19 (twelve years ago) link
Morbs, what if he's not talking about the reviewers and consumers doing the accepting, but in accepting in general?
Like
"Improved validity of the studies is needed, but it is better served by more insightful reviewers and consumers, in keeping with the trial-and-error nature of that process."
I mean, I'm not sure either. Just a devil's advocate observation, in keeping with the spirit of this thread.
― Pleasant Plains, Friday, 9 September 2011 15:03 (twelve years ago) link
that's how i read it. I might have used brackets for that last bit tbh
― hipstery nayme (darraghmac), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:14 (twelve years ago) link
Brackets FTW. I think that's how it was meant.
― Science, you guys. Science. (DL), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:16 (twelve years ago) link
I wouldn't let "Improved validity of the studies is needed" past either. If what he's saying is that he needs more valid studies, then he should say "More valid studies are needed". Otherwise it sounds like he's trying to improve the validity of the existing studies, which is presumably impossible.
― ban this sick stunt (anagram), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:16 (twelve years ago) link
improved validation, maybe.
Course, that's unnecessarily obscure gobblygook
― hipstery nayme (darraghmac), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:19 (twelve years ago) link
which is the fave dialect of medical writers.
That use of "accepting" is weird to me, but I'll accept it!
― incredibly middlebrow (Dr Morbius), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:26 (twelve years ago) link
thank God I'm not an editor, so I can't rewrite everything or I'd never go home.
― incredibly middlebrow (Dr Morbius), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:28 (twelve years ago) link
yeah that 'accepting' = 'allowing for' imo
― hipstery nayme (darraghmac), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:30 (twelve years ago) link
actually the start of that sentence is "Improved validity of observational studies is needed..." and I'll assume readers know he means doing different studies.
― incredibly middlebrow (Dr Morbius), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:31 (twelve years ago) link
Yeah, but just leaving the sentence as it is except for taking out that last comma makes the meaning of the whole sentence ambiguous at best.
xxp
― ban this sick stunt (anagram), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:31 (twelve years ago) link
But I'm gonna leave the comma in and go with the "in keeping with" interp.
― incredibly middlebrow (Dr Morbius), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:37 (twelve years ago) link
ah ok, sorry
― ban this sick stunt (anagram), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:37 (twelve years ago) link
I'm not sure I'd go that far. Because a small but vocal group still persists in deeming the usage incorrect, it's impossible to use in a publication without creating the impression for some people that you "don't know the difference."
― *ter jacket (jaymc), Friday, 9 September 2011 15:50 (twelve years ago) link
Is 'comprises of' also correct? Bc I've seen that a lot too.
― kinder, Friday, 9 September 2011 18:15 (twelve years ago) link
That's worse, isn't it?
― Autumn Almanac, Friday, 9 September 2011 21:20 (twelve years ago) link
definitely, and possibly why I hate 'comprised of'
― kinder, Friday, 9 September 2011 21:37 (twelve years ago) link
'comprises of' is yet another example of people using too many prepositions. Pet hate.
― Autumn Almanac, Friday, 9 September 2011 21:44 (twelve years ago) link
Can someone offer an example of "comprises of" usage? I've never seen it before and can't imagine anything wronger.
― Halal Spaceboy (WmC), Friday, 9 September 2011 22:16 (twelve years ago) link
Any estate agents site in the UK... "this property comprises of one bathroom, two bedrooms," etc
― kinder, Friday, 9 September 2011 22:24 (twelve years ago) link
Google search this: "comprises of" site:http://www.rightmove.co.uk
:(
― kinder, Friday, 9 September 2011 22:25 (twelve years ago) link
― Science, you guys. Science. (DL), Friday, September 9, 2011 10:19 AM (13 hours ago)
this basically says it's been used incorrectly since the 18th century, lol
― comes correct with his gameboy (k3vin k.), Saturday, 10 September 2011 03:22 (twelve years ago) link
"compose" is an elegant and underused word and there's no reason to misuse "comprise" in its place
― comes correct with his gameboy (k3vin k.), Saturday, 10 September 2011 03:23 (twelve years ago) link
Elegant is an elegant word
― that's cute, but it's WRONG (CaptainLorax), Saturday, 10 September 2011 03:39 (twelve years ago) link
You should never post on this thread.
― Halal Spaceboy (WmC), Saturday, 10 September 2011 03:47 (twelve years ago) link
Compose is composed but comprised has been compromised
― that's cute, but it's WRONG (CaptainLorax), Saturday, 10 September 2011 03:53 (twelve years ago) link
Don't you think you're being a bit negative there WmC?
― that's cute, but it's WRONG (CaptainLorax), Saturday, 10 September 2011 04:01 (twelve years ago) link
About you posting on this thread? Definitely.
― Halal Spaceboy (WmC), Saturday, 10 September 2011 04:11 (twelve years ago) link
Permalink― comes correct with his gameboy (k3vin k.), Saturday, 10 September 2011 03:22 (52 minutes ago)
you belong in the 18th century
― bamcquern, Saturday, 10 September 2011 04:17 (twelve years ago) link
xpI'll try make a point to limit my wacky one-liners to threads which don't comprise of sourpusses. EOC
― that's cute, but it's WRONG (CaptainLorax), Saturday, 10 September 2011 04:21 (twelve years ago) link