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No wonder of it: shéer plód makes plough down sillion
Shine, and blue-bleak embers, ah my dear,
Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion.

The Windhover
Gerard Manley Hopkins

(sallying), Friday, 9 January 2004 23:05 (twenty years ago) link

The livid lightnings flashed in the clouds;
The leaden thunders crashed.
A worshipper raised his arm.
"Hearken! hearken! The voice of God!"

"Not so," said a man.
"The voice of God whispers in the heart
So softly
That the soul pauses,
Making no noise,
And strives for these melodies,
Distant, sighing, like faintest breath,
And all the being is still to hear."

( Stephen Crane )

scott seward (scott seward), Monday, 12 January 2004 17:23 (twenty years ago) link

one month passes...
(this was on poetry daily recently)

The Merman

For Nico


The ripples on your wall:
fake sea-lights the soft sunlight makes.

You sleep under water.
Learn to love the counterfeit

and in the mess of shalts and shoulds and musts
find what you want.

Don't forget: I once stood loving
what was not here.

J. T. Barbarese

bnw (bnw), Saturday, 14 February 2004 00:14 (twenty years ago) link

one month passes...
ideally should be read in conjunction with the rest of her phenomenal (-ly sad, frightening, beautiful) book "bunny" - this is by selima hill:

Egg

And when the lodger, on the second day,
asks her if she knows the word cock

she looks ahead and simply starts walking,
steadying the word like an egg.

cozen (Cozen), Wednesday, 17 March 2004 19:48 (twenty years ago) link

X, viii

Paula wants to marry me
but I gave her the cold shoulder:
she's way too old. I'd have given
it a thought if she were older.


Martial (trans. William Matthews)

Donald, Wednesday, 17 March 2004 21:31 (twenty years ago) link

I just had to say this: this is a fantastic thread. I am searching the shelves of memory for something worthy of it.

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Wednesday, 17 March 2004 23:06 (twenty years ago) link

I can't stop reading that selima hill poem.

'steadying'!

'like an egg'!

cozen (Cozen), Wednesday, 17 March 2004 23:42 (twenty years ago) link

Killing Time

Fine.

But stop driving it around
in a van. Stop biting
your nails and sweating,
and for God's sake stop
saying not to be afraid.

Just get it over with.

—Ron Koertge

Come on poetrylovers step up with some more lines

donald, Thursday, 18 March 2004 22:48 (twenty years ago) link

Today I bought me a brand new Larkin collected - after decades of getting by with shabby second hand copies, mostly as a result of this thread - (I am enjoying - if that's the word- it very much). I will post a brain-bending bit of poetry to this thread tomorrow, and that's a promise (threat).

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Thursday, 18 March 2004 23:03 (twenty years ago) link

have you read that selima hill collection, jerry?

also: what about: i. oswald's 'dart' ii. stevens' 'harmonium' and iii. molloy's 'hare soup'? anyone?

cozen (Cozen), Thursday, 18 March 2004 23:31 (twenty years ago) link

Because finally the personal
is all that matters,
we spend years describing stones,
chairs, abandoned farmhouses—
until we're ready. Always
it's a matter of precision,
what it feels like
to kiss someone or to walk
out the door. How good it was
to practice on stones
which were things we could love
without weeping over.

excerpt of 'Essay On The Personal'
Stephen Dunn

bnw (bnw), Friday, 19 March 2004 00:28 (twenty years ago) link

Edwin Morgan, "The Death of Marilyn Monroe"

1          What innocence? Whose guilt? What eyes? Whose breast?
2          Crumpled orphan, nembutal bed,
3          white hearse, Los Angeles,
4          OiMaggio! Los Angeles! Miller! Los Angeles! America!
5          That Death should seem the only protector---
6          That all arms should have faded, and the great cameras and lights
7             become an inquisition and a torment---
8          That the many acquaintances, the autograph-hunters, the
9             inflexible directors, the drive-in admirers should become
10           a blur of incomprehension and pain---
11        That lonely Uncertainty should limp up, grinning, with
12           bewildering barbiturates, and watch her undress and lie
13           down and in her anguish
14        call for him! call for him to strengthen her with what could
15        only dissolve her! A method
16        of dying, we are shaken, we see it. Strasberg!
17        Los Angeles! Olivier! Los Angeles! Others die
18        and yet by this death we are a little shaken, we feel it,
19        America.
20        Let no one say communication is a cantword.
21        They had to lift her hand from the bedside telephone.
22        But what she had not been able to say
23        Perhaps she had said. 'All I had was my life.
24        I have no regrets, because if I made
25        any mistakes, I was responsible.
26        There is now---and there is the future.
27        What has happened is behind. So
28        it follows you around? So what?'---This
29        to a friend, ten days before.
30        And so she was responsible.
31        And if she was not responsible, not wholly responsible, Los Angeles?
32           Los Angeles? Will it follow you around? Will the slow
33           white hearse of the child of America follow you around?

cozen (Cozen), Friday, 19 March 2004 00:33 (twenty years ago) link

Michael Longley, "Terezín"

No room has ever been as silent as the room
Where hundreds of violins are hung in unison.

cozen (Cozen), Friday, 19 March 2004 01:08 (twenty years ago) link

Here is no water but only rock
Rock and no water and the sandy road
The road winding above among the mountains
Which are mountains of rock without water
If there were water we should stop and drink
Amongst the rock one cannot stop or think

from "The Wasteland", T.S. Eliot

weather1ngda1eson (Brian), Friday, 19 March 2004 10:44 (twenty years ago) link

Y'all sent me looking for my Larkin. It's snowing as I type this:

Coming

On longer evenings,
Light, chill and yellow,
Bathes the serene
Foreheads of houses.
A thrush sings,
Laurel-surrounded
In the deep bare garden,
Its fresh-peeled voice
Astonishing the brickwork.
It will be spring soon,
It will be spring soon --
And I, whose childhood
Is a forgotten boredom,
Feel like a child
Who comes on a scene
Of adult reconciling,
And can understand nothing
But the unusual laughter,
And starts to be happy.

donald, Friday, 19 March 2004 14:08 (twenty years ago) link

Yay for spring!

Maria D., Friday, 19 March 2004 14:38 (twenty years ago) link

ILB mindmeld - I read that very poem over my omelette yesterday lunchtime, Don!

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Friday, 19 March 2004 14:56 (twenty years ago) link

Someone should have shown you - little jester,
Little teaser, blue-veined charm-
er, laughing-eyed, lionised, sylvan-princessly
Sinner - to what point you would come:
How, the three hundredth in a queue,
You'd stand at the prison gate
And with your hot tears
Burn through the New-Year ice.
How many lives are ending there! Yet it's
Mute, even the prison-poplar's
Tongue's in its cheek as it's swaying.

-Anna Akhmatova
from "Requiem" (1957)

marisa (marisa), Friday, 19 March 2004 15:40 (twenty years ago) link

Our lives are Swiss,—
So still, so cool,
  Till, some odd afternoon,
The Alps neglect their curtains,
  And we look farther on.

Italy stands the other side,
  While, like a guard between,
The solemn Alps,
The siren Alps,
  Forever intervene!

[Emily Dickinson]

Casuistry (Chris P), Saturday, 20 March 2004 00:58 (twenty years ago) link

W.B. Yeats
"When You Are Old"

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;

And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Saturday, 20 March 2004 07:56 (twenty years ago) link

II. The Pretty Lady

She hated bleak and wintry things alone.
All that was warm and quick, she loved too well-
A light, a flame, a heart against her own;
It is forever bitter cold, in Hell.


Vl. The Actress

Her name, cut clear upon this marble cross,
Shines, as it shone when she was still on earth;
While tenderly the mild, agreeable moss
Obscures the figures of her date of birth.


from "Tombstones in the Starlight" by Dorothy Parker

weather1ngda1eson (Brian), Saturday, 20 March 2004 10:05 (twenty years ago) link

The Shampoo

The still explosions on the rocks,
the lichens, grow
by spreading gray, concentric shocks.
They have arranged
to meet the rings around the moon, although
within our memories they have not changed.

And since the heavens will attend
as long on us,
you've been, dear friend,
precipitate and pragmatical:
and look what happens. For Time is
nothing if not amenable.

The shooting stars in your black hair
in bright formation
are flocking where,
so straight, so soon?
--Come, let me wash it in this big tin basin,
battered and shiny like the moon.

[Elizabeth Bishop. I shamelessly nicked the last verse of this for a song of mine a few years ago. I will be paying you royalties in eternity, Liz.]

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Saturday, 20 March 2004 11:34 (twenty years ago) link

that hass poem upthread is phenomenal. I downloaded a whole bunch of his collections from lion and goin to spend the day gorging.

cozen (Cozen), Saturday, 20 March 2004 11:46 (twenty years ago) link

I woke up this morning with 'TOO NICE' scrawled in inch-high letters on the back of my right hand and on my left hand is written "trousers at half mast" & "ice-cream vans, outside schools". I think the left hand is the beginning of my determination to become a peot and I think the right is just strange.

cozen (Cozen), Saturday, 20 March 2004 12:00 (twenty years ago) link

another word, discovered in the shower, scrawled on the underside of my left forearm: "massé".

I am in love with the LION poetry database.

cozen (Cozen), Saturday, 20 March 2004 14:40 (twenty years ago) link

Is the LION just for librarians? Of which I am not. And where is the hass upthread? Robert hass will be answering questions posed to him online on Monday at http://www.smartishpace.com/home/ Loved the Dickenson, Bishop and Dunn. And Lux!

donald, Saturday, 20 March 2004 18:30 (twenty years ago) link

I'm just a student, donald, so I guess that answers you're first question.

bnw quoted an excerpt of hass' 'misery and splendor' upthread and provided a link to a realplayer file of hass reading the poem.

cozen (Cozen), Saturday, 20 March 2004 19:17 (twenty years ago) link

Coz. thoughtfully sent me a clutch of Hass this afternoon; this was the snatch that lept out at me, late Saturday nite, red winy:

Hass, Robert:Churchyard [from Human Wishes (1989), Ecco Press]

[1]  Somerset Maugham said a professional was someone who could do his
best work when he didn't particularly feel like it. There was a picture of
him in the paper, a face lined deeply and morally like Auden's, an old
embittered tortoise, the corners of the mouth turned down resolutely to
express the idea that everything in life is small change. And what he
said when he died: I'm all through, the clever young men don't write
essays about me. In the fleshly world, the red tulip in the garden
sunlight is almost touched by shadow and begins to close up. Someone
asked me yesterday: are deer monogamous? I thought of something I had
read. When deer in the British Isles were forced to live in the open
because of heavy foresting, it stunted them. The red deer who lived in
the Scottish highlands a thousand years ago were a third larger than the
present animal. This morning, walking into the village to pick up the
car, I thought of a roof where I have slept in the summer in New York,
pigeons in the early morning sailing up Fifth Avenue and silence in
which you imagine the empty canyons the light hasn't reached yet. I was
standing on the high street in Shelford, outside the fussy little teashop,
and I thought a poem with the quick, lice-ridden pigeons in it might
end: this is a dawn song in Manhattan. I hurried home to write it and, as
I passed the churchyard, school was letting out. Luke was walking
toward me smiling. He thought I had come to meet him. That was when I
remembered the car, when he was walking toward me through the spring
flowers and the eighteenth-century gravestones, his arms full of school
drawings he hoped not to drop in the mud.

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Saturday, 20 March 2004 23:04 (twenty years ago) link

Pretty much my favourite lines ever are from Larkin - the ones in 'For Sidney Bechet' that go:

Oh, play that thing! Mute glorious Storyvilles
Others may license, grouping around their chairs
Sporting-house girls like circus tigers (priced

Far above rubies) to pretend their fads,
While scholars manques nod around unnoticed
Wrapped up in personnels like old plaids.

On me your voice falls as they say love should,
Like an enormous yes.

I mean, the ending's the payload, and that, but the tigers are the bit I really love, 'cos when Larkin lets the piss and misery go and starts throwin' around the Big Transcendental Culture-packed Signifieds he is hotter than gosh. Which might also explain why I like this so much, from a German laydee called Sarah Kirsch, and bought unopened for two pounds:

This unforgettable green
A faded glow
Veils the earth I walk
Through the marshes my soft throat
Juts out into another life.

On the river the Brontes are floating
With hats like iron pots
On the bank someone has mowed the grass someone
Primes the pump in the
Crumbling house.

(I realise this is everythat awful abt modern poetry, but even so...)

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Sunday, 21 March 2004 03:52 (twenty years ago) link

I saw Hass read a couple weeks ago -- melted me to my seat. Everyone seems to be shattering the 10 line rule...

Just before she flew off like a swan
to her wealthy parents' summer home,
Bruce's college girlfriend asked him
to improve his expertise at oral sex,
and offered him some technical advice:

Use nothing but his tonguetip
to flick the light switch in his room
on and off a hundred times a day
until he grew fluent at the nuances
of force and latitude.

Imagine him at practice every evening,
more inspired than he ever was at algebra,
beads of sweat sprouting on his brow,
thinking, thirty-seven, thirty-eight,
seeing, in the tunnel vision of his mind's eye,
the quadratic equation of her climax
yield to the logic
of his simple math.

Maybe he unscrewed
the bulb from his apartment ceiling
so that passersby would not believe
a giant firefly was pulsing
its electric abdomen in 13 B.

Maybe, as he stood
two inches from the wall,
in darkness, fogging the old plaster
with his breath, he visualized the future
as a mansion standing on the shore
that he was rowing to
with his tongue's exhausted oar.

Self Improvement - Tony Hoagland

bnw (bnw), Sunday, 21 March 2004 06:23 (twenty years ago) link

Haha - I emailed that Hoagland poem to a friend in the States a coupla years ago!

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Sunday, 21 March 2004 11:52 (twenty years ago) link

For The Dead - Adrienne Rich

I dreamed I called you on the telephone
to say: Be kinder to yourself
but you were sick and would not answer

The waste of my love goes on this way
trying to save you from yourself

I have always wondered about the leftover
energy, water rushing down a hill
long after the rains have stopped

or the fire you want to go to bed from
but cannot leave, burning-down but not burnt-down
the red coals more extreme, more curious
in their flashing and dying
than you wish they were
sitting there long after midnight.

aimurchie, Sunday, 21 March 2004 14:49 (twenty years ago) link

(sorry for starting the rot re: the 10 line rule.)

cozen (Cozen), Sunday, 21 March 2004 15:09 (twenty years ago) link

my god, that hoagland poem is good! it's world poetry day today, btw.

cozen (Cozen), Sunday, 21 March 2004 15:11 (twenty years ago) link

So many of my favorites are here! What a lovely way to spend a few minutes on a Sunday morning with my coffee... My contribution (via Plagarist.com - which you all know about):

From:

anyone lived in a pretty how town...
E.E. Cummings

...someones married their everyones
laughed their cryings and did their dance
(sleep wake hope and then)they
said their nevers they slept their dream

stars rain sun moon
(and only the snow can begin to explain
how children are apt to forget to remember
with up so floating many bells down)...


yesabibliophile (yesabibliophile), Sunday, 21 March 2004 16:19 (twenty years ago) link

Troy, now by Ron Henry.

Casuistry (Chris P), Sunday, 21 March 2004 16:57 (twenty years ago) link

This is so great! I have been inspired all morning - now afternoon. I have "Poet's Choice - Poems for Everday Life" edited by Robert Hass. it was a gift from a women I cleaned house and cared for. She was a real piece of work, but this gift resonates.(perhaps an answer to the "what would you do for a book" thread. help someone urinate.)

here is a short excerpt from the last page of the "Winter" section.

A prayer that asks

where in the hour's dark moil is mercy?

Ain't no ladders tumbling down from heaven
for what heaven we had we made. An embassy

of ashes & dust. Where was safety? Home?

Lynda Hull

aimurchie, Sunday, 21 March 2004 19:11 (twenty years ago) link

I drag a boat over the ocean

with a solid rope

Will God hear?

Will he take me all the way?

Like water in goblets of unbaked clay

I drip out slowly,

and dry.

My soul whirs. Dizzy. Let me

discover my home.

- Lal Ded

cheeesoo (cheeesoo), Sunday, 21 March 2004 20:45 (twenty years ago) link

The dead might speak, but they're ignored,
as if mouthing behind sound-proof glass.
We often think they're watching us
disgusted, but who do they report to?
They have the night at their backs,
no vast repository of small disgraces,
no hard disk or black box
full of stars marking the places
we were spectacular disappointments
to them. The dead were as bad as us,
if they begrudge us anything
it's weakness -
a body to be embarrassed by,
the living's lack of privacy.

[Jacob Polley - who is sickeningly young, talented and good looking, and also reading at the South Bank in London tonight.)

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Monday, 22 March 2004 12:26 (twenty years ago) link

[I lie - he is actually reading on Tuesday 30 March, with the wonderful Matthew Welton. I may even go along myself!)

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Monday, 22 March 2004 12:42 (twenty years ago) link

can you tell us anything more about polley, JtN? what's that poem called and where's it from?

cozen (Cozen), Monday, 22 March 2004 15:57 (twenty years ago) link

April Song

Withdrawing from the present,
wandering a past that is alive
in books only.In love
with women, outlasted
by their smiles; the richness
of their apparel puts
the poor in perspective.
The brush dipped in blood
and the knife in art
have preserved their value.
Smouldering times: sacked
cities,incinerable hearts

and the fledgling God
tipped out of his high
nest into the virgin's lap
by the incorrigible cuckoo.

R.S Thomas

aimurchie (aimurchie), Monday, 22 March 2004 16:12 (twenty years ago) link

Gregory, I feel about Hardy the way you describe Larkin (re: Arundel Tomb): they were both true-blue Romantics disguised as bitter old coots. Here's my fave:

Transformations

Portion of this yew
Is a man my grandsire knew,
Bosomed here at its foot:
This branch may be his wife,
A ruddy human life
Now turned to a green shoot.

These grasses must be made
Of her who often prayed,
Last century, for repose;
And the fair girl long ago
Whom I often tried to know
May be entering this rose.

So, they are not underground,
But as nerves and veins abound
In the growths of upper air,
An they feel the sun and rain,
And the energy again
That made them what they were!

donald, Monday, 22 March 2004 16:37 (twenty years ago) link

Posted for a friend of mine, who's not doing so well...

E E Cummings again:

i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go,my dear; and whatever is done
by only me is your doing,my darling)
i fear
no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want
no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows
higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

yesabibliophile (yesabibliophile), Monday, 22 March 2004 21:06 (twenty years ago) link

(realplayer interview with jacob polley here.)

cozen (Cozen), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 02:46 (twenty years ago) link

Nice thread! I want to read Selima Hill again... not to mention Don Paterson, who I saw read recently (AMAZING!) but couldn't afford to buy the last book :(

My favourite Larkin poem (only 12 lines so it's not too much of a cheat):

Water

If I were called in
To construct a religion
I should make use of water.

Going to church
Would entail a fording
To dry, different clothes;

My litany would employ
Images of sousing,
A furious devout drench,

And I should raise in the east
A glass of water
Where any-angled light
Would congregate endlessly.

Archel (Archel), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 10:55 (twenty years ago) link

And a bit of Thomas Lux:

[...]
They were beautiful
and, if I never ate one,
it was because I knew it might be missed
or because I knew it would not be replaced
and because you do not eat
that which rips your heart with joy.
[...]

Archel (Archel), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 11:22 (twenty years ago) link

In a field
I am the absence
of field.
This is
always the case.
Wherever I am
I am what is missing.

When I walk
I part the air
and always
the air moves in
to fill the spaces
where my body's been.

We all have reasons
for moving.
I move
to keep things whole.

Mark Strand - "Keeping Things Whole"

bnw (bnw), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 00:35 (twenty years ago) link

O tower of light, sad beauty
that magnified necklaces and statues in the sea,
calcareous eye, insignia of the vast waters, cry
of the mourning petrel, tooth of the sea, wife
of the Oceanian wind, O separate rose
from the long stem of the trampled bush
that the depths, converted into archipelago,
O natural star, green diadem,
alone in your lonesome dynasty,
still unattainable, elusive, desolate
like one drop, like one grape, like the sea.

"Tower of Light"
~Pablo Neruda

yesabibliophile (yesabibliophile), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 19:11 (twenty years ago) link

Is it time to revive this thread?

I wanted to add Sean O'Brien to it, last night, but I don't know how to make the lines all go together.

the pomefox, Thursday, 23 December 2004 11:10 (nineteen years ago) link

BBC2 viewers may like to know that there is a poetry programme, Essential Poems for Christmas on tonight at 7.30.

(Excuse the repitition, I am providing a public service.)

Puddin'Head Miller (PJ Miller), Thursday, 23 December 2004 12:04 (nineteen years ago) link

Never think nobody cares

For that thundery corridor

Painting its Forth into Scotland and back,

For the drizzly grind of the coal-train

Or even the Metro, that amateur transport,

Sparking and chattering every verse-end.

from Sean O'Brien, 'The Eavesdroppers'

the pomefox, Thursday, 23 December 2004 13:53 (nineteen years ago) link

one month passes...
We have a new baby in the family-- one week old. His name is Keenan, which, I understand means "little ancient one." For him this bit from W.S. Merwin:

...
Where darkness is
Once there was a mirror
And I therein was King.
...

Where is everyone?

pepektheassassin (pepektheassassin), Saturday, 29 January 2005 17:29 (nineteen years ago) link

They're over here: Poetry Thread, part two: A Game Of Chess

Happy baby!

Casuistry (Chris P), Saturday, 29 January 2005 19:14 (nineteen years ago) link

nine months pass...
Some people live all their lives without knowing which path is right.

They are buffeted by this wind and that,
never really knowing where they are going.

They think they have no choice over their destiny,
but we know the path and we follow it without question.

Remember, there is sacrifice involved in any kind of life,
even those that choose the safe way must sacrifice the thrill.

The point is if you know what you want,
you must be prepared to sacrifice everything to get it.

Those that realise this are the fortunate ones.

- Thomas Schumacher ‘The Fortunate Ones’

c7n (Cozen), Saturday, 29 October 2005 11:11 (eighteen years ago) link

OpTiMo HoGmAnAy MiX 2oo1

c7n (Cozen), Saturday, 29 October 2005 11:12 (eighteen years ago) link

Should I lock this thread and link to the other? Or what?

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 1 November 2005 03:38 (eighteen years ago) link

The angst of the moderator.

Jaq (Jaq), Tuesday, 1 November 2005 03:51 (eighteen years ago) link

That would probably be for the best.

Matt (Matt), Tuesday, 1 November 2005 11:22 (eighteen years ago) link

I think you should, to practice your thread-locking technique. Then you can Poxy Fule things up with the best of them.

Jaq (Jaq), Tuesday, 1 November 2005 13:22 (eighteen years ago) link

OK. Poetry Thread, part two: A Game Of Chess

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 1 November 2005 18:06 (eighteen years ago) link

four years pass...

"she my love by london gentled as by space the spinning world"

i read this poem this morning and thought: how startling, how beautiful, and then I discovered that the only google result for it is... me, on this thread.

lords of hyrule (c sharp major), Sunday, 21 March 2010 10:08 (fourteen years ago) link

Because You Asked about the Line Between Prose and Poetry
by Howard Nemerov

Sparrows were feeding in a freezing drizzle
That while you watched turned to pieces of snow
Riding a gradient invisible
From silver aslant to random, white, and slow.

There came a moment that you couldn’t tell.
And then they clearly flew instead of fell.

INSUFFICIENT FUN (bernard snowy), Tuesday, 23 March 2010 20:31 (fourteen years ago) link

five months pass...

While out today I bought a book of poems from a charity store because it was a book of Kenneth Rexroth translations out of the Chinese, and Rexroth has previously torn my brain to giddy shreds

I had heard Rexroth was a polyglot and a skilled translator, but I did not know I'd be reduced to tears on the train home

His first 35 translations are of Tu Fu's work, an 8th-century poet whom he claims is alongside Catullus and Baudelaire as the greatest non-epic and non-dramatic poet in history

One of the poems, just one, was too long for a single page. I did not know this and upon the end of the page thought the poem done - it had reached a moment of such wisdom that I shudderingly re-read the tract and felt something settle over me

There turned out to be nine more lines.


TO WEI PA, A RETIRED SCHOLAR

The lives of many men are
Shorter than the years since we have
Seen each other. Aldebaran
And Antares move as we have.
And now, what night is this? We sit
Here together in the candle
Light. How much longer will our prime
Last? Our temples are already
Grey. I visit my old friends.
Half of them have become ghosts.
Fear and sorrow choke me and burn
My bowels. I never dreamed I would
Come this way, after twenty years,
A wayfarer to your parlor.
When we parted years ago,
You were unmarried. Now you have
A row of boys and girls, who smile
And ask me about my travels.
How have I reached this time and place?
Before I can come to the end
Of an endless tale, the children
Have brought out the wine. We go
Out in the night and cut young
Onions in the rainy darkness.
We eat them with hot, steaming,
Yellow millet. You say, "It is
Sad, meeting each other again."

acoleuthic, Friday, 17 September 2010 20:16 (thirteen years ago) link

We drink ten toasts rapidly from
The rhinoceros horn cups.
Ten cups, and still we are not drunk.
We still love each other as
We did when we were schoolboys.
Tomorrow morning mountain peaks
Will come between us, and with them
The endless, oblivious
Business of the world.


Tu Fu

acoleuthic, Friday, 17 September 2010 20:16 (thirteen years ago) link

three years pass...

This side, that side hurling a heavyheaded hundredfold
What while we, while we slumbered.
O then, weary then why
When the thing we freely fórfeit is kept with fonder a care,
Fonder a care kept than we could have kept it, kept
Far with fonder a care (and we, we should have lost it) finer, fonder
A care kept.—Where kept? Do but tell us where kept, where.—
Yonder.—What high as that! We follow, now we follow.—Yonder, yes yonder, yonder,
Yonder.

- GMH

BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Friday, 25 July 2014 21:54 (nine years ago) link

six years pass...

Simon Armitage writes a poem on the occasion of the death of the Duke of Edinburgh.

The Patriarchs – An Elegy

The weather in the window this morning
is snow, unseasonal singular flakes,
a slow winter’s final shiver. On such an occasion
to presume to eulogise one man is to pipe up
for a whole generation – that crew whose survival
was always the stuff of minor miracle,
who came ashore in orange-crate coracles,
fought ingenious wars, finagled triumphs at sea
with flaming decoy boats, and side-stepped torpedoes.

Husbands to duty, they unrolled their plans
across billiard tables and vehicle bonnets,
regrouped at breakfast. What their secrets were
was everyone’s guess and nobody’s business.
Great-grandfathers from birth, in time they became
both inner core and outer case
in a family heirloom of nesting dolls.
Like evidence of early man their boot-prints stand
in the hardened earth of rose-beds and borders.

They were sons of a zodiac out of sync
with the solar year, but turned their minds
to the day’s big science and heavy questions.
To study their hands at rest was to picture maps
showing hachured valleys and indigo streams, schemes
of old campaigns and reconnaissance missions.
Last of the great avuncular magicians
they kept their best tricks for the grand finale:
Disproving Immortality and Disappearing Entirely.

The major oaks in the wood start tuning up
and skies to come will deliver their tributes.
But for now, a cold April’s closing moments
parachute slowly home, so by mid-afternoon
snow is recast as seed heads and thistledown.

the pinefox, Saturday, 17 April 2021 10:53 (three years ago) link

I think there's a rather uncertain mix of the specific and the general here. If this is for the Duke, then why is it so general and generational? But if it's so general, why include the line about 'a zodiac out of sync', apparently specifically referring to his Greek origins and not applicable to other patriarchs?

This:

On such an occasion
to presume to eulogise one man is to pipe up
for a whole generation

-- seems to pick up the tone of parts of the FOUR QUARTETS, and of Auden who was contemporary with them. I'm unsure that 'pipe up' fits well here, even though Armitage is probably trying to imply a hint of a bagpiper playing in tribute.

the pinefox, Saturday, 17 April 2021 10:56 (three years ago) link

Trash poem for a trash human

it's like edging for your mind (the table is the table), Thursday, 22 April 2021 01:06 (two years ago) link

instead of trying to eulogize Philip, he wisely chose to skate away immediately into generalities about WWII. for me the poem never really rises above the imagery of wartime propaganda films or lends vitality to the people or events it purports to capture. ceremonial poems are hard.

sharpening the contraindications (Aimless), Thursday, 22 April 2021 02:01 (two years ago) link

I don't actually think so! I think it's hard to write a ceremonial poem about a person who was a malevolent racist with a noted passion for younger women.

It's simply tiresome how these old British hack poets refuse to deal with actual history, instead writing again and again about "the genius" of a generation and the trauma of the bombing of London. Give me a break.

I've read and witnessed any number of poems written for ceremonial occasions that were excellent. Hell, I read one by a student the other day that was written for a funeral of a cat that was more interesting than this crap.

it's like edging for your mind (the table is the table), Thursday, 22 April 2021 12:07 (two years ago) link

I am sure it was an excellent cat and an even better public figurehead

imago, Thursday, 22 April 2021 12:12 (two years ago) link

seven months pass...

Amber Sparks
@ambernoelle
·
17h
Hi Covid here
I have eaten
the years
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for other shit
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so full of days

dow, Saturday, 18 December 2021 20:26 (two years ago) link

one month passes...

Good interview here with Louise Gluck, where she talks a bit about Ashbery:

SH: How did you know (your book) was done? The book is quite short, but that brevity feels important to the effect of it.

LG: Well, for a long time it wasn’t; it was just skimpy and a little mannered. But during this period, I finally came to understand the poetry of John Ashbery, whose work had eluded me the whole of my life, though I was moved by him as a person. He was a radiant presence, kind of angelic, but the poems just exhausted me. They seemed interminable—in fact, some of them still do—but those that don’t were like nothing I’d ever read. What changed him for me was Karin Roffman’s book [The Songs We Know Best: John Ashbery’s Early Life]. It made Ashbery available to me, but it was also in itself remarkable. Did I tell you the story about reading the book and writing her a letter?

SH: No, I just remember talking to you when you were in the middle of reading it, I think a few years ago. It sounded like it fixed something for you at the time.

LG: It did. So I wrote her a letter of ardent appreciation. And then I thought, “I have to write Ashbery.” But when you’re writing to someone you revere, you want to commend yourself to the person; your ego gets involved. Also, I couldn’t say, you know, “I never liked your work, but now I really see how extraordinary it is, though I certainly came to it a little late.” In any case, the letter was hard to write. It was the beginning of the semester at Yale; it was my first night in New Haven for that year. And I thought, “I absolutely have to write this letter. I have to do it. I have to do it this week. As soon as I get home, I have to.” And then I had an e-mail in the very early morning from Frank (Bidart), who said Ashbery had died. And I never wrote my letter. I mean, I’m sure he had other things on his mind. But I would have liked… I would have liked to put some flowers at his feet. I think his work showed me something. But the book I was trying to write came in the most tortured little drips—I thought of it as rusty water coming out of the tap. And then Covid happened, and I thought, “Well, that’s it for writing,” you know.

deep luminous trombone (Eazy), Wednesday, 19 January 2022 01:47 (two years ago) link

Gluck is quite literally one of the worst poets alive.

we need outrage! we need dicks!! (the table is the table), Wednesday, 19 January 2022 14:38 (two years ago) link


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