Resurrection: The 2006 Poetry Thread

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I am certain that bookslut would like someone with their righthand fingertips lightly placed upon the very pulse of the current poetry 'scene' - someone familiar with every aspect of poetry-as-it-is-today: the mainstream, the schools, the lone wolves and the hangers-on - someone who knows which is the fresh and exciting voice, who is the clapped-out husk, who is sleeping with whom, and (definitively) who might jump into bed in exchange for the right review - someone, in short, able to make the average poetry reader sit up and sniff the breeze like an Irish Setter downwind from a barbecue and bay out loud from the heartbreak when they can't locate a copy of the reviewed book at the local library.

IOW, she wants Casuistry! Let us plan our campaign to bring this to pass.

Aimless (Aimless), Wednesday, 6 September 2006 23:20 (seventeen years ago) link

one month passes...
Here is a poem I dug up while I was poking around in one of my 30-year old notebooks. It is patterned after the riddling poems in ye olde Celtic bardic tradition. I'll post the solution a bit later.

A Riddle

I am not a picket fence,
And I am not a perfect bore,
And I am not pure ignorance,
And I am not a bloody war,

But I am always making sense,
By making like a picket fence,
And making like a perfect bore,
And making like pure ignorance,
And making like a bloody war.

Say my name, which I adore.

Aimless (Aimless), Wednesday, 11 October 2006 13:33 (seventeen years ago) link

Is the answer "I"?

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 12 October 2006 02:05 (seventeen years ago) link

Teeth? Mouth?

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Thursday, 12 October 2006 04:35 (seventeen years ago) link

while awaiting the answer, a little elizabeth bishop:

To Be Written on the Mirror in Whitewash

I live only here, between your eyes and you,
But I live in your world. What do I do?
--Collect no interest--otherwise what I can;
Above all I am not that staring man.

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Thursday, 12 October 2006 07:54 (seventeen years ago) link

One what I wrote

Last Stand of the Unknown Shipping Clerk

The man was slim and slightly stooped
On the sidewalk of the sodden street.
His mask-like face, as clamped by irons;
Toned sepia and scored by dust,
Whispered faint scatters of confetti
Into the horizontal rain.

It seemed that he could scarcely stand
The weather seeped into his skin.
As I passed him on my way to work,
Some citizens had gathered round.
When I returned at half-past five
He lay in pulp upon the ground.

Save for his crumpled trilby hat;
A name inside, under the brim.
But as I stopped to take a look,
A dustcart drove away with him.

Ben Dot (1977), Thursday, 12 October 2006 08:50 (seventeen years ago) link

The solution I had in mind when I wrote the riddle was: speech. It is permissible to harrumph at this revelation.

Aimless (Aimless), Thursday, 12 October 2006 18:45 (seventeen years ago) link

". . . there is a faculty or knack, smallish, in the mind that can turn
as with tooling irons immediacy into bends of concision, shapes
struck with airs to keep so that one grows unable to believe that

the piling up of figurements and entanglements could proceed from
the tiny working of the small, if persistent, faculty: as if the
world could be brought to flow by and take the bent of

that single bend: and immediately flip over into the
mirrored world
of permanence, another place trans-shaped with knackery: a brook in
the mind that will eventually glitter away the seas:"

A.R. Ammons - Sphere

bnw (bnw), Wednesday, 18 October 2006 06:45 (seventeen years ago) link

Because I'll be unleashing it on my students tomorrow:

Paul Celan: Death Fugue

Black milk of daybreak we drink it at sundown
we drink it at noon in the morning we drink it at night
we drink it and drink it
we dig a grave in the breezes there one lies unconfined
A man lives in the house he plays with the serpents he writes
he writes when dusk falls to Germany your golden hair Margarete
he writes it ans steps out of doors and the stars are flashing he whistles his pack out
he whistles his Jews out in earth has them dig for a grave
he commands us strike up for the dance

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you in the morning at noon we drink you at sundown
we drink and we drink you
A man lives in the house he plays with the serpents he writes
he writes when dusk falls to Germany your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Sulamith we dig a grave in the breezes there one lies unconfined

He calls out jab deeper into the earth you lot you others sing now and play
he grabs at teh iron in his belt he waves it his eyes are blue
jab deper you lot with your spades you others play on for the dance

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you at at noon in the morning we drink you at sundown
we drink and we drink you
a man lives in the house your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Sulamith he plays with the serpents
He calls out more sweetly play death death is a master from Germany
he calls out more darkly now stroke your strings then as smoke you will rise into air
then a grave you will have in the clouds there one lies unconfined

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you at noon death is a master from Germany
we drink you at sundown and in the morning we drink and we drink you
death is a master from Germany his eyes are blue
he strikes you with leaden bullets his aim is true
a man lives in the house your golden hair Margarete
he sets his pack on to us he grants us a grave in the air
He plays with the serpents and daydreams death is a master from Germany

your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Shulamith

Matt (Matt), Wednesday, 18 October 2006 08:50 (seventeen years ago) link

one month passes...
In Praise of Feeling Bad About Yourself — by Wislawa Szymborska


The buzzard never says it is to blame.
The panther wouldn't know what scruples mean.
When the piranha strikes, it feels no shame.
If snakes had hands, they'd claim their hands were clean.

A jackal doesn't understand remorse.
Lions and lice don't waver in their course.
Why should they, when they know they're right?

Though hearts of killer whales may weigh a ton,
in every other way they're light.

On this third planet of the sun
among the signs of bestiality
a clear conscience is Number One.

bnw (bnw), Saturday, 18 November 2006 18:38 (seventeen years ago) link

Wow. There's a lot of excellent poetry in this thread, and most of it very new to me. I'm glad someone posted in it today so that it popped up in "New Answers".

I met up on a small Yeats poem yesterday.

A Poet to his Beloved

I bring you with reverent hands
The books of my numberless dreams;
White woman that passion has worn
As the tide wears the dove-gray sands,
And with heart more old than the horn
That is brimmed from the pale fire of time:
White woman with numberless dreams
I bring you my passionate rhyme.

Arethusa (Arethusa), Saturday, 18 November 2006 23:14 (seventeen years ago) link


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