Resurrection: The 2006 Poetry Thread

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Giant whispering and coughing from
Vast Sunday-full and organ-frowned-on spaces
Precede a sudden scuttle on the drum,
'The Queen', and a huge resettling. Then begins
A snivel on the violins:
I think of your face among all those faces,

Beautiful and devout before
Cascades of monumental slithering,
One of your gloves unnoticed on the floor
Beside those new, slightly outmoded shoes.
Here it goes quickly dark. I lose
All but the outline of the still and withering

Leaves on half-emptied trees. Behind
The glowing wavebands, rabid storms of chording
By being distant overpower my mind
All the more shamelessly, their cut-off shout
Leaving me desperate to pick out
Your hands, tiny in all that air, applauding.

-- Philip Larkin

eyeless in gazza (Phil A), Sunday, 9 July 2006 20:44 (seventeen years ago) link

one month passes...
A few random selections from a collection of classical Indian love poems called the Amarushataka, translated by Andrew Schelling and issued under the title Erotic Love Poems from India, Shambhala Press:

8.

Your lover sits
dejected
scratching figures in the dirt outside.
Your friends won't eat
their eyes are swollen from crying.
There's no silly chatter from the
household parrots
and you're a wreck.
Stubborn girl, isn't it
time to quit
sulking?

40.

With dark eyes
not blue lotus
she fashions a welcome garland.
Petals she strews --
not various species of jasmine
but smiles.
Water she offers from ripe
sweating breasts
rather than cermonial jars.
With only her own body
she makes for her
lover a
propitious arrival.

69.

Tilted his head
when she cast a vine-knotted
brow at her rival.
Saluted and stood
abstractly off
when somebody noticed.
Her cheeks flashed like copper.
He stared at her feet.
Yet in front of the parents they
managed to keep up
appearances.

-- Poems traditionally attributed to the poet, Amaru --

Aimless (Aimless), Wednesday, 16 August 2006 17:37 (seventeen years ago) link

i thought the first one ended "smoking", and got kind of confused. i did like it that way, though.

tom west (thomp), Wednesday, 16 August 2006 17:55 (seventeen years ago) link

"not various species of jasmine" is a great line.

Matt (Matt), Wednesday, 16 August 2006 20:47 (seventeen years ago) link

My long-time favorite poem:

For My Lover, Returning to His Wife
by Anne Sexton

She is all there.
She was melted carefully down for you
and cast up from your childhood,
cast up from your one hundred favorite aggies.

She has always been there, my darling.
She is, in fact, exquisite.
Fireworks in the dull middle of February
and as real as a cast-iron pot.

Let's face it, I have been momentary.
A luxury. A bright red sloop in the harbor.
My hair rising like smoke from the car window.
Littleneck clams out of season.

She is more than that. She is your have to have,
has grown you your practical your tropical growth.
This is not an experiment. She is all harmony.
She sees to oars and oarlocks for the dinghy,

has placed wild flowers at the window at breakfast,
sat by the potter's wheel at midday,
set forth three children under the moon,
three cherubs drawn by Michelangelo,

done this with her legs spread out
in the terrible months in the chapel.
If you glance up, the children are there
like delicate balloons resting on the ceiling.

She has also carried each one down the hall
after supper, their heads privately bent,
two legs protesting, person to person,
her face flushed with a song and their little sleep.

I give you back your heart.
I give you permission --

for the fuse inside her, throbbing
angrily in the dirt, for the bitch in her
and the burying of her wound --
for the burying of her small red wound alive --

for the pale flickering flare under her ribs,
for the drunken sailor who waits in her left pulse,
for the mother's knee, for the stocking,
for the garter belt, for the call --

the curious call
when you will burrow in arms and breasts
and tug at the orange ribbon in her hair
and answer the call, the curious call.

She is so naked and singular.
She is the sum of yourself and your dream.
Climb her like a monument, step after step.
She is solid.

As for me, I am a watercolor.
I wash off.

Sara R-C (Sara R-C), Friday, 18 August 2006 04:02 (seventeen years ago) link

I'd rather be the lover than the wife.....

sandy mc (sandy mc), Monday, 21 August 2006 11:08 (seventeen years ago) link

two weeks pass...
Bookslut is looking for someone to write about poetry; I think several of you qualify. Here's the link.

Jaq (Jaq), Wednesday, 6 September 2006 20:53 (seventeen years ago) link

I am certain that bookslut would like someone with their righthand fingertips lightly placed upon the very pulse of the current poetry 'scene' - someone familiar with every aspect of poetry-as-it-is-today: the mainstream, the schools, the lone wolves and the hangers-on - someone who knows which is the fresh and exciting voice, who is the clapped-out husk, who is sleeping with whom, and (definitively) who might jump into bed in exchange for the right review - someone, in short, able to make the average poetry reader sit up and sniff the breeze like an Irish Setter downwind from a barbecue and bay out loud from the heartbreak when they can't locate a copy of the reviewed book at the local library.

IOW, she wants Casuistry! Let us plan our campaign to bring this to pass.

Aimless (Aimless), Wednesday, 6 September 2006 23:20 (seventeen years ago) link

one month passes...
Here is a poem I dug up while I was poking around in one of my 30-year old notebooks. It is patterned after the riddling poems in ye olde Celtic bardic tradition. I'll post the solution a bit later.

A Riddle

I am not a picket fence,
And I am not a perfect bore,
And I am not pure ignorance,
And I am not a bloody war,

But I am always making sense,
By making like a picket fence,
And making like a perfect bore,
And making like pure ignorance,
And making like a bloody war.

Say my name, which I adore.

Aimless (Aimless), Wednesday, 11 October 2006 13:33 (seventeen years ago) link

Is the answer "I"?

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 12 October 2006 02:05 (seventeen years ago) link

Teeth? Mouth?

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Thursday, 12 October 2006 04:35 (seventeen years ago) link

while awaiting the answer, a little elizabeth bishop:

To Be Written on the Mirror in Whitewash

I live only here, between your eyes and you,
But I live in your world. What do I do?
--Collect no interest--otherwise what I can;
Above all I am not that staring man.

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Thursday, 12 October 2006 07:54 (seventeen years ago) link

One what I wrote

Last Stand of the Unknown Shipping Clerk

The man was slim and slightly stooped
On the sidewalk of the sodden street.
His mask-like face, as clamped by irons;
Toned sepia and scored by dust,
Whispered faint scatters of confetti
Into the horizontal rain.

It seemed that he could scarcely stand
The weather seeped into his skin.
As I passed him on my way to work,
Some citizens had gathered round.
When I returned at half-past five
He lay in pulp upon the ground.

Save for his crumpled trilby hat;
A name inside, under the brim.
But as I stopped to take a look,
A dustcart drove away with him.

Ben Dot (1977), Thursday, 12 October 2006 08:50 (seventeen years ago) link

The solution I had in mind when I wrote the riddle was: speech. It is permissible to harrumph at this revelation.

Aimless (Aimless), Thursday, 12 October 2006 18:45 (seventeen years ago) link

". . . there is a faculty or knack, smallish, in the mind that can turn
as with tooling irons immediacy into bends of concision, shapes
struck with airs to keep so that one grows unable to believe that

the piling up of figurements and entanglements could proceed from
the tiny working of the small, if persistent, faculty: as if the
world could be brought to flow by and take the bent of

that single bend: and immediately flip over into the
mirrored world
of permanence, another place trans-shaped with knackery: a brook in
the mind that will eventually glitter away the seas:"

A.R. Ammons - Sphere

bnw (bnw), Wednesday, 18 October 2006 06:45 (seventeen years ago) link

Because I'll be unleashing it on my students tomorrow:

Paul Celan: Death Fugue

Black milk of daybreak we drink it at sundown
we drink it at noon in the morning we drink it at night
we drink it and drink it
we dig a grave in the breezes there one lies unconfined
A man lives in the house he plays with the serpents he writes
he writes when dusk falls to Germany your golden hair Margarete
he writes it ans steps out of doors and the stars are flashing he whistles his pack out
he whistles his Jews out in earth has them dig for a grave
he commands us strike up for the dance

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you in the morning at noon we drink you at sundown
we drink and we drink you
A man lives in the house he plays with the serpents he writes
he writes when dusk falls to Germany your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Sulamith we dig a grave in the breezes there one lies unconfined

He calls out jab deeper into the earth you lot you others sing now and play
he grabs at teh iron in his belt he waves it his eyes are blue
jab deper you lot with your spades you others play on for the dance

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you at at noon in the morning we drink you at sundown
we drink and we drink you
a man lives in the house your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Sulamith he plays with the serpents
He calls out more sweetly play death death is a master from Germany
he calls out more darkly now stroke your strings then as smoke you will rise into air
then a grave you will have in the clouds there one lies unconfined

Black milk of daybreak we drink you at night
we drink you at noon death is a master from Germany
we drink you at sundown and in the morning we drink and we drink you
death is a master from Germany his eyes are blue
he strikes you with leaden bullets his aim is true
a man lives in the house your golden hair Margarete
he sets his pack on to us he grants us a grave in the air
He plays with the serpents and daydreams death is a master from Germany

your golden hair Margarete
your ashen hair Shulamith

Matt (Matt), Wednesday, 18 October 2006 08:50 (seventeen years ago) link

one month passes...
In Praise of Feeling Bad About Yourself — by Wislawa Szymborska


The buzzard never says it is to blame.
The panther wouldn't know what scruples mean.
When the piranha strikes, it feels no shame.
If snakes had hands, they'd claim their hands were clean.

A jackal doesn't understand remorse.
Lions and lice don't waver in their course.
Why should they, when they know they're right?

Though hearts of killer whales may weigh a ton,
in every other way they're light.

On this third planet of the sun
among the signs of bestiality
a clear conscience is Number One.

bnw (bnw), Saturday, 18 November 2006 18:38 (seventeen years ago) link

Wow. There's a lot of excellent poetry in this thread, and most of it very new to me. I'm glad someone posted in it today so that it popped up in "New Answers".

I met up on a small Yeats poem yesterday.

A Poet to his Beloved

I bring you with reverent hands
The books of my numberless dreams;
White woman that passion has worn
As the tide wears the dove-gray sands,
And with heart more old than the horn
That is brimmed from the pale fire of time:
White woman with numberless dreams
I bring you my passionate rhyme.

Arethusa (Arethusa), Saturday, 18 November 2006 23:14 (seventeen years ago) link


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