A three-week schedule seems like the thing. We'll discuss:
Who's in?
― Ismael Klata, Saturday, 17 September 2011 21:50 (twelve years ago) link
Let me see...
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Saturday, 17 September 2011 22:59 (twelve years ago) link
OK, I'm in
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:11 (twelve years ago) link
I'd like to read the bookbut I don't think I can make the time, at this point, slow reader that I amit is improbable that I could read this book in 3 weeksalso, the last time I attempted to contribute extensively to the ILB online book club, many of my contributions were heavily disparagedthus, I'm not sure it would be an especially productive ideafor me to do it, even if I could.
― the pinefox, Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:16 (twelve years ago) link
I have to try again but otherwise this is one of the worst novels ever written by a major writer.
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:23 (twelve years ago) link
A bold post that only serves to intrigue me further. I'm in.
― ledge, Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:28 (twelve years ago) link
I'm in!
the last time I attempted to contribute extensively to the ILB online book club, many of my contributions were heavily disparaged
For what it's worth, pinefox, I found your contributions fascinating and thoughtful
― not bulimic, just a cat (James Morrison), Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:45 (twelve years ago) link
i wish only to intrigue when i say that as far as i could tell all three times i tried it this book is spectacularly bad. looking forward to this thread tho.
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:49 (twelve years ago) link
Can anyone do this? I think I'd like to. I love Nabokov but Alfred isn't making this sound too appealing. That said, I think I'm in!
― ᒓᴥᒔ (ENBB), Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:50 (twelve years ago) link
x-post Oh wait, really? I have trouble finishing bad books. Maybe this isn't the best one for me to attempt as a first time participant. If I don't like something I can't make myself finish it, I just abandon it instead. :/
― ᒓᴥᒔ (ENBB), Saturday, 17 September 2011 23:51 (twelve years ago) link
I'm hopeful this bookIs not as bad as its reputation but hey, I went and saw The Capeman on Broadway so what do I know?
Also hoping that the pinefox reconsiders
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 00:09 (twelve years ago) link
In any case, I am looking forward to the notes by Vivian Darkbloom.
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 00:17 (twelve years ago) link
The good thing is no one else has been able to parody Nabokov as well as Nabokov did.
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Sunday, 18 September 2011 00:18 (twelve years ago) link
Based on skimming the first few chapters, he shouldn't have been throwing stones at Joyce for writing Finnegans Wake
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 00:28 (twelve years ago) link
Speaking of which: the pinefox, have you read The House of Ulysses, by Julián Ríos?
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 00:53 (twelve years ago) link
yeah what the fuck is up with this book honestly
― hank azaria & III (flopson), Sunday, 18 September 2011 00:59 (twelve years ago) link
this was the first nabokov i ever read and i expressed embarrassing opinions about nabokov for like a year afterward
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Sunday, 18 September 2011 01:24 (twelve years ago) link
would you like me to quote them
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Sunday, 18 September 2011 03:13 (twelve years ago) link
we all have our early lapses
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Sunday, 18 September 2011 03:39 (twelve years ago) link
that'sh ash bad as lishtening to the beatlesh without earmuffsh
Wait were you guys college drinking buddies?
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 04:06 (twelve years ago) link
post-college drinking buddies
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Sunday, 18 September 2011 04:13 (twelve years ago) link
alfred was post- and i was pre-
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Sunday, 18 September 2011 04:19 (twelve years ago) link
now he's still post and god knows what i am
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Sunday, 18 September 2011 04:21 (twelve years ago) link
didn't know you guys were bros
i'd participate in this if we could decide on a book everyone hasn't already decided sucks lol
― k3vin k., Sunday, 18 September 2011 04:25 (twelve years ago) link
i had it rapturously recommended to me! someone here must rep for it.
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Sunday, 18 September 2011 04:33 (twelve years ago) link
i actually had already noticed that u guys were bros! or at least i was highly suspicious
― hank azaria & III (flopson), Sunday, 18 September 2011 06:28 (twelve years ago) link
why dont we just read p'nin
― hank azaria & III (flopson), Sunday, 18 September 2011 06:29 (twelve years ago) link
I'd love to, especially as I've been wanting to get back into N, but I just don't think I can make the time for Ada at the moment, esp as it's one I've tried and failed to get into several times now, albeit many years ago.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Sunday, 18 September 2011 10:19 (twelve years ago) link
Well Ada was chosen democratically, plus I've already bought the mofo, but I'm a bit troubled by these pre-reviews, I cannot lie.
― Ismael Klata, Sunday, 18 September 2011 11:45 (twelve years ago) link
Ismael, I think it's one that divides opinion. I think it's generally regarded as one of his most difficult, but there are plenty of people who've found it rewarding because of/despite that.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Sunday, 18 September 2011 11:57 (twelve years ago) link
Ada/Ardor is the missus' favourite Nabokov, and Michael Wood makes a good case for it iirc, but I did find it a bit... over-ripe.
― Stevie T, Sunday, 18 September 2011 11:58 (twelve years ago) link
I have friends irl who rep for this endlessly so I'm interested but dunno if I'll have the time
― Whiney G. Blutfarten (dayo), Sunday, 18 September 2011 12:16 (twelve years ago) link
the ilx book club obv isn't just about 'good' bks (cf 'the goon squad' lol) so think we should 'suffer' the nab - and who knows, it might be instructive. just keep telling yrself it cld be china bloody melville.
― Ward Fowler, Sunday, 18 September 2011 12:16 (twelve years ago) link
some divided opinion here, i agree with me fwiw: Nu-ILB: What books have you purchased lately?Might participate (though I'll be away from internet for much of it) - one hand, Ada can feel a bit of a chore; otoh, there's a lot to knock around in there, could be good talk.
― you don't exist in the database (woof), Sunday, 18 September 2011 12:17 (twelve years ago) link
ok let's do this - book club should help me get through it this time, and if I ever flag...
'It cld be china bloody melville'
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Sunday, 18 September 2011 12:20 (twelve years ago) link
this book is rad gohl
― Lamp, Sunday, 18 September 2011 13:37 (twelve years ago) link
Ada/Ardor is the missus' favourite Nabokov, and Michael Wood makes a good case for it iirc, but I did find it a bit... over-ripe. --Stevie T
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 13:53 (twelve years ago) link
Adonline right? the forenotes are at or near the top of each chapter's individual page of annotations, so um click on the chapter then click on 'view annotations'. It's sort of a mess that site.
― you don't exist in the database (woof), Sunday, 18 September 2011 14:14 (twelve years ago) link
Thanks, I'll try that, although I'll probably try to forge ahead by myself a little before I go over there
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 18 September 2011 14:42 (twelve years ago) link
hmm I will consider this, always wanted to read it
― iatee, Sunday, 18 September 2011 16:20 (twelve years ago) link
i'm in, though i've already read it. it's really not THAT bad y'all. though i do think our time would be better spent with pnin or lo or p.f. or even any of the russians.
― strongo hulkington's ghost dad, Wednesday, 21 September 2011 14:26 (twelve years ago) link
I'm guessing most here are pretty familiar with lo or pf. Pnin is ... slight?
― ledge, Wednesday, 21 September 2011 14:29 (twelve years ago) link
I like Pnin and want to read more of the Russians. Those three mentioned are all relatively easy to read on your own the first time, even Pale Fire, and don't require external forces to propel you through the way this one seems to.
― When I Stop Meming (James Redd and the Blecchs), Wednesday, 21 September 2011 14:36 (twelve years ago) link
We read Pnin and Look at the Harlequins! in one of my college lit classes and I enjoyed them both. Not denying their slightness, though.
― Antonio Carlos Broheem (WmC), Wednesday, 21 September 2011 14:37 (twelve years ago) link
The quality of Pnin's slightness seems to me to be of the same quality of slightness as the bowl his errant son gave him. Fragile but not without a similar beauty, which I think is one of the obsessions of his work - the memorial and narrative mechanics of beauty. The apparent amiability of it, and perhaps a more naturalistic flavour than other pieces, might make it seem less important, more of a gentle comedy, but I think most Nabokovian elements are there that are in his other works. It's almost as fond in its detailing of Americana as Lolita as well, which is definitely part of the N's later works - that slightly autistic in detail foreign appreciation of the alien.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Wednesday, 21 September 2011 15:15 (twelve years ago) link
Most of Nabokov's work is slight beside, say, Thomas Mann (and, boy, would he bristle at the comparison); but his prose and structural ingenuity make the silly style vs substance debate look even sillier.
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 21 September 2011 15:17 (twelve years ago) link
Aye well my judgment of its slightness more than influenced by the fact I recall little to nothing from my reading of it two years ago - probably more of a comment on my memory than the book tbh. I should reread. More. In general.
― ledge, Wednesday, 21 September 2011 15:21 (twelve years ago) link
No, no, please don't think I was judging you! Slightness is a quality which fascinates me because I've used it as a defense and pejorative (a similar discussion is taking place in the Drive thread).
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 21 September 2011 15:28 (twelve years ago) link
pnin is my favorite sometimes, otm re "memorial and narrative mechanics of beauty"
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Wednesday, 21 September 2011 15:39 (twelve years ago) link
So aside from "Signs and Symbols" and "The Vane Sisters" what other stories should I read?
also "la veneziana", "cloud, castle, lake", "terra incognita", i like "lance".
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 03:13 (twelve years ago) link
you'd expect him to be good at titles, i guess, but he really is.
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 03:14 (twelve years ago) link
I finished it! Go me.
Couldn't see any way through other than a determined gallop.
Don't have much of use to say. I'll stick to part one.
Trick-book readings of what's going on here - inside-out version of a Russian romance, strangulation of VN's own childhood paradise fixation, an essay on narcissism (Lolita reading - Van turning a grubby bout of incest (another sort of narcissism) into jewel fiction - a mirror for VN's own process with his paradise lost), elaborate reader troll - would be more persuasive or engaging if it were two hundred pages shorter.
His prose is a bit shot (unless he wants us to think Van is a second-rate writer). He's not seeing the world as well, & falls back way too much on allit and assonance, the multilingual & pointless allusion. Lost his ability to make a knight's move, something surprising in his prose.
Almost feels like a bet on the future - 'when you're over all those novels with meaning and psychology, my magic romance will be loved'.
Some great passages - claustrophobic-obsessive adolescent love-lust stuff snaps together in places; i'm a bit 'c'mon' at the world-building, but then he'll roll out some lovely, funny paragraph of invention (don't have copy to hand to find one).
Really not funny, though, mostly.
Bit rushed. I'll leave it there.
― you don't exist in the database (woof), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 14:34 (twelve years ago) link
"Brian Boyd" is an anagram for "Ian d'Boy"― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Sunday, September 25, 2011 2:22 PM BookmarkNo it isn't― Disraeli Geirs (Hurting 2), Wednesday, September 28, 2011 2:52 AM (11 hours ago) Bookmark Suggest Ban Permalink
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Sunday, September 25, 2011 2:22 PM Bookmark
No it isn't
― Disraeli Geirs (Hurting 2), Wednesday, September 28, 2011 2:52 AM (11 hours ago) Bookmark Suggest Ban Permalink
erroneous anagrams we go ever further into the hall of mirrors. I just thought it was a Brain/Body thing, but maybe that's too obvious for Nabokov, prob a red herring.
― you don't exist in the database (woof), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 14:37 (twelve years ago) link
"vn's litpinions aren't random though; they're just kinda narrowminded. he dislikes Ideas because he finds them pushy and misshapen (and because he was expelled from eden by a political movement that loved utilitarian writers like chernyshevsky so much it mandated them) and thinks the writer ought to be creating a Convincing Otherworld that Makes The Spine Sob. he's good at seeing through snobbishness around stuff like dr. jekyll and mr. hyde, stuff that's eerie and unplaceably affecting, and he's (quietly) well aware that such stuff, like his own work, gets its power from tinkering with and constructing new permutations of actual conditions under which actual people live their lives -- he's not really a hermit. but he's less good at understanding that since real people really engage earnestly with Ideas all the time, books that do the same thing aren't only a necessary part of the big general ongoing mimesis/exegesis project literature is doing on experience but actually capable of being as affecting, even if not as elegant, as the stuff that uses its characters' ideas mostly as jokes, or lures to doom. even if it doesn't make vn's personal spine sob."
I can imagine Dostoevsky making this argument if he and VN ever met, but then Nabokov would probably make some well-crafted snide comment and Dostoevsky would just stand there and look sad.
― Iris, Wednesday, 28 September 2011 16:05 (twelve years ago) link
Just like in the board description!
― Pollabo Bryson (James Redd and the Blecchs), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 16:33 (twelve years ago) link
i'm a bit 'c'mon' at the world-building, but then he'll roll out some lovely, funny paragraph of invention
She saw giant flying sharks with lateral eyes taking barely one night to carry pilgrims through black ether across an entire continent from dark to shining sea
I liked this.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 17:30 (twelve years ago) link
Yes, I liked that one too.
― Pollabo Bryson (James Redd and the Blecchs), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 17:58 (twelve years ago) link
Six chapters in, good lord, i will be surprised if i finish. "The novel opens like a sack full of exotic frogs, alive with movement and color, each little flash of life slippery and ready to bound off for somewhere unknown", says boyd, i think it opens more like an old drawer jumbled full of random discarded objects, obscure of purpose, unwanted and forgotten.
The allusions seem to be becoming less dense and opaque now the main relationship and setting have been established (no small thanks to boyd's notes tbh) but the level of irrelevant descriptive detail is still overwhelming. This from Van's first visit to Ardis Hall:
On the first floor, a yellow drawing room hung with damask and furnished in what the French once called the Empire style opened into the garden and now, in the late afternoon, was invaded across the threshold by the large leaf shadows of a paulownia tree (named, by an indifferent linguist, explained Ada, after the patronymic, mistaken for a second name or surname of a harmless lady, Anna Pavlovna Romanov, daughter of Pavel, nicknamed Paul-minus-Peter, why she did not know, a cousin of the non-linguist’s master, the botanical Zemski, I’m going to scream, thought Van).
He is not alone. A (very) short while later in the tour he is "intolerably bored". These particular bits of seeming self-reference go uncommented by Boyd.
― ledge, Wednesday, 28 September 2011 18:34 (twelve years ago) link
(well not quite, first bit is commented on as an example of her conversational style, but not as a holographic fragment of the entire novel)
― ledge, Wednesday, 28 September 2011 18:38 (twelve years ago) link
"The novel opens like a sack full of exotic frogs, alive with movement and color, each little flash of life slippery and ready to bound off for somewhere unknown"
did his editor leave this in to flatter Boyd's hard-on for Nabokov?
― Anakin Ska Walker (AKA Skarth Vader) (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 18:39 (twelve years ago) link
that's the opening sentence for the worst slash fic ever
we asked gertrude stein if our novels were good and she said they were fine and good and opened like sackfuls of exotic frogs
― the-dream in the witch house (difficult listening hour), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 18:43 (twelve years ago) link
Think that's on the website, so didn't go through any editor. May be in the print version too, or the print-on-demand version, so maybe not much of an editor either.
― Pollabo Bryson (James Redd and the Blecchs), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 18:45 (twelve years ago) link
haha, dlh. and then Demon Veen punched me in the nose. ada, or nada nada nada
― Pollabo Bryson (James Redd and the Blecchs), Wednesday, 28 September 2011 18:57 (twelve years ago) link
i am not reading this, but i used to really like N. and tried to read 'ada' a long time ago, and found it interminable (not that i got anywhere close to its termination). so this thread looks like a nice vindication to me.
― j., Thursday, 29 September 2011 04:56 (twelve years ago) link
If you can't put a butterfly in a jarIf violence mars your final hourIf you make others feel like jamPoured on a piece of charbroiled lamb
― So. Central Mayne (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 2 October 2011 21:10 (twelve years ago) link
I have gave up. I think this is the morally stronger decision. One of the final straws was the chapter elaborately detailing the various codes used in letters between the irritating lovers, as though we might be expected to have to decipher some of them, only to be told at the end of the chapter that all such correspondence was destroyed.
"Both sought excitment in books as the best readers always do; both found in many renowned works pretentiousness, tedium, and facile misinformation." (A cheap shot perhaps, but hard to imagine that not being written with a winking recognition of the book's possible reception.)
― antiautodefenestrationism (ledge), Sunday, 2 October 2011 22:57 (twelve years ago) link
Funnily enough, Embassytown by China Mieville has just come through from the library, so I'll have a chance to test Ward Fowler's asseveration upthread. So far Ada's coming out on top, but Embassytown isn't as bad as The City and The City so it's all to play for.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Monday, 3 October 2011 08:42 (twelve years ago) link
i found a copy of this second-hand, and almost bought it so i could join in, but then i realised it was priced at £7.50, which seemed too much
― thomp, Monday, 3 October 2011 09:29 (twelve years ago) link
mainly because i know i have a copy somewhere that i bought for 20p ten years ago, and i'm damned if i'll let that investment slide
h8 books
do not read if you hate van.
― So. Central Mayne (James Redd and the Blecchs), Monday, 3 October 2011 19:41 (twelve years ago) link
how can anyone hate van when he does such perfectly formed poos?
― you don't exist in the database (woof), Monday, 3 October 2011 19:47 (twelve years ago) link
my copy of Ada is also second-hand, and certain passages have been underlined with various different highlighter pens. this is the first, in pink:
...because a gap of up to a hundred years one way or another existed between the two earths; a gap marked by a bizarre confusion of directional signs at the crossroads of passing time with not all the no-longers of one world corresponding to the not-yets of the other.
― Ward Fowler, Monday, 3 October 2011 20:36 (twelve years ago) link
Take that right there. I object to "bizarre", and to "no-longers" vs. "not-yets" (leave that to Barth), and to putting "all" in italics (leave that to Salinger).
"I loathe Van Veen." -- VN
― alimosina, Monday, 3 October 2011 22:49 (twelve years ago) link
Fizzles, I thought you liked Mieville; it's amusing to find that you apparently don't.
― the pinefox, Tuesday, 4 October 2011 08:38 (twelve years ago) link
Well, no. Not from what I've read. It's a shame because I feel that he's doing all sorts of things I should like - genre experimentation, and trying to describe realms that don't fit easily into our sensory model of reality. I came to the conclusion that he's not a very good writer.
Some of the things that are difficult about Ada are also difficult in Embassytown - too much obscure detail. Both are creating prismatically alternate worlds - that is to say they're worlds that exist at a tangent to this one rather than being truly 'alternate' or futuristic. And neither wants to explain the detail that they've built these worlds with so you this continual unexplained and alienating detail. That's not necessarily a problem, I think, A Clockwork Orange did some similar extraordinarily well. But generally it's something extremely difficult to do. When it doesn't work it feels like your wading through all this morass of detail without any reward, or further understanding. In fact the works become boring. Nabokov is good at it, Mieville is often dreadfully facile (aliens wear 'augments' and 'tec' - what's the point of that? needless jargonising amidst the dull, plodding prose).
There are some opposite problems. Nothing absolutely nothing has happened in about a third of Embassytown so far. In Ada it can feel like nothing much is happening, but quite a lot is, at different levels, and not necessarily in traditional narrative senses. But in fact the effect is often the same, weighed down in detail, and not going anywhere fast.
Ada doesn't work in a big way. Embassytown in a dull way. So I prefer Ada.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Tuesday, 4 October 2011 10:12 (twelve years ago) link
your wading you're wading
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Tuesday, 4 October 2011 10:13 (twelve years ago) link
put on my wading shoesand I boarded the pwane
― Ismael Klata, Tuesday, 4 October 2011 10:32 (twelve years ago) link
needless jargonising
but ... but ... science fiction!
i actually enjoyed the sections of embassytown in which nothing happened 2-3x more than i did those parts in which things happened; those parts i could have done without.
― thomp, Wednesday, 5 October 2011 10:23 (twelve years ago) link
I know, I know. It's such a good part of what I like about speculative fiction - having fun with future invention on a level of language and terminology. Also part of the essential defamiliarisation process. And yet, somehow the way Mieville does it seems, well, a bit rubbish. Not having enough fun, or having too much. I was trying to work it out, and I felt the way he mixed personal observation and memory with the unfamiliar was perhaps its failing. Haven't got it on me, but it's something like 'I watched the bio-therms quiver in their production of the v-watt emanations and remembered how once a miab fubbled through the rift in the quantic chthon-temp axis' = emotional content 0 because I don't have a fucking clue what you're on about. You can't fill out the character with this. As pure third-person description, it might work, have a poetic feel to it. I rejigged some of the sentences with the personal element, and they did seem to read a lot better. He was crap at characters in The City and The City tho, so not sure it's a strong suit.
To try and keep this on Ada, I admit the slight science-fiction elements, as in Bend Sinister when I read, slightly surprised me. I know that it can be construed differently to science fiction - he's always created worlds constructed out of unusual things, out of sounds and colours (V and violet) and chess moves and light, but the use of the word Terra and some of the steampunkish technological innovations seem like a Nabokovian engagement with science fiction. I was wondering if Nabokov students/fans knew any more about this - his attitudes towards or any references to SF w/r/t Ada?
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Wednesday, 5 October 2011 10:57 (twelve years ago) link
"I loathe science fiction with its gals and goons, suspense and suspensories"
This is quite interesting: http://www.depauw.edu/sfs/backissues/5/swanson5art.htm
― Stevie T, Wednesday, 5 October 2011 11:03 (twelve years ago) link
Perfect, Stevie, thank you!
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Wednesday, 5 October 2011 11:19 (twelve years ago) link
I've been getting back into this. After reading China Mieville, it should be understood. I'ma write up my notes from today:
Couple of older bits - "old masters and young mistresses". Dislike this sort of double-handed bollocks. Purely an æsthetic thing.
Really liked Aqua's descent into madness and death. Thought the whole thing about dripping water imitating recently heard conversations and the loss of meaning from the external world was touching, realistic and sympathetic. The question for me comes with the style - a general problem for me with Ada. So there's a lot of monozygotic playfulness, cleaving sounds adjacently to emphasise what I presume to be Ada's style. But it's dreadful to read, I think.
The beginning of when Van goes to Ladore/Ardis and he arrives at the station expecting in his imagination a horse, but there's nothing, so a chance trap in the crease of time gives him a lift to his destination. Then when he gets there 'his horse' is taken off him. This sort of game is regular in VN but here it's pretty confusing. So the suggestion is that all of this is a clear literary indication that it's all taking place within the imagination of Ada and Van? Time will be creased. In something like The Real Life of Sebastian Knight, this sort of thing is clearly enough part of the structure for it not to be a problem. Here it's so confusing it's meaningless.
Later, Minerva asks, as Van and Ada go up the stairs, what I think is an excellent question. Why do stairs creak so desperately when children go up them? From my own experience, I'm assuming the answer is because they know how important children's steps are, and how indifferent they can be to adults' steps. Children's steps are important because they are frequently secret, sneaking past parents. Stairs care less about adults - their steps tend to be ratified. I assume this is what allows Minerva's following prophetic questions and fear about what they may be up to.
I suspect that the use of the word 'googled' on p86 of my edition has been noted before, in fact i seem to remember having seen it mentioned, but it still gave a little smirk of pleasure in a (not at all) SF book,
I'd read for a bit, then needed a wander round the library to have break, browse the shelves. I came across the Chronology division, although only because I'd been trying to find the Chronogram section, and I picked up a book by Stephen Jay Gould - Questioning the Millennium. He talks in his introduction of "the interaction of undeniable reality and the flexibility of human interpretation. Some things in nature just are - even though we can parse and interpret such real items in wildly various ways. A lion is a lion is a lion - and lions are more closely tied by genealogy to tigers than earthworms."
I felt this was fundamentally disagreeing with VN's æsethetic approach in Ada. A lion is never just a lion, but what sounds like a lion, what heraldic leonic aspects it can have - to quote from Ada 'Not yet knowing that reality and natural science are synonymous in the terms of this, and only this, dream.'. Ada exists in a world where N's dreams of nature, which are fundamentally taxonomic ('if you don't know the name of that tree you will never be a writer'), are the only reality.
Sentences like 'Remembrance, like Rembrandt, is dark but festive' is a clear indication of the mnemonic style VN has. This is like Richard of York Gave Battle In Vane [sic]. The associative mnemonic aspect of Ada is in overdrive. It's also why for me this novel is one of the least successful of his I've read. It's too much. Who f'ing cares about your enormous mythological mnemos. In your lectures on literature you've spoken about the need to draw out family trees and geographical images of classic books. But that shouldn't be a requirement of a book not yet considered classic. Nevertheless it is in Ada.
I liked the phrase 'If people remembered the same they would be different people'. This seems important to VN.
Oh and I see I've lifted a line from Peter Porter, which I read in the LRB about 'The abstract hell of memory', which I felt was reflected interestingly in Ada. I've left an instruction to myself to find the bit that it relates to, but I can't be arsed right now. Will do tomorrow.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Saturday, 8 October 2011 21:50 (twelve years ago) link
that bit about the "crease in time" confused me too.
― anorange (abanana), Saturday, 8 October 2011 21:55 (twelve years ago) link
Who f'ing cares about your enormous mythological mnemos
Indeed. I picked it up tonight, two full weeks after my gallop through pt I, to find that I had little memory of who was what and why they knew who. Thus liberated, to my surprise I found myself enjoying it hugely. Allowing the stream to flow lyrically, the odd snippet snagging here and there, is the way to go here I feel. It works now almost as a series of barely-connected short stories - a shaggy-dog tale of the rise and fall of a global chain of brothels, staffed by lower orders and nobility alike, was particularly pleasing - in the knowledge that no memory of what has happened or will happen a part or a paragraph hence is required.
Which is to say the enormous myth can get to; the moment has something, and didn't really need the lunatic framework.
― Ismael Klata, Saturday, 8 October 2011 22:20 (twelve years ago) link
God, I wrote that when a bit pissed. Yep, agree with you IK about reading it lyrically and not worrying too much about the structure. Except I find it difficult not to worry about the hints at underlying structure. That's for several reasons I think. One is that in one of my favourite novels by him - The Real Life of Sebastian Knight following the occurrences of the colour violet informs the main narrative in a way different if they haven't been followed - even seems to offer up a possible alternative conclusion. This is tied in for me with what VN clearly expects of his readers - careful awareness of family trees, associations of each character, places, times of year, etc etc. I think the levels of this expectation become unreasonable in Ada, but I think if you did have the patience or the will to do this, you'd probably find extra rewards in the book. Whether this is just going back and collecting the hidden diamonds in a computer game or whether it's crucial to levelling up is something I'm not at all sure about. Also, at some level (god knows which or where that level is) Ada seems to be about mnemoses (by which I mean memory associating on the basis of colours and sounds) colliding, and the narrative games you can play, and the narrative confusion you cause, when they do.
Just want to unpick that comment about the stairs - Why do stairs crease so desperately when two children go up them? It's a great line, that immediately throws the reader back into their own experience of trying to sneak upstairs, and through sympathetic identification opens up thoughts of the secret worlds that children carry within them. Minerva's next question seems like a non-sequitur - "After all, we were twin sisters; everybody knows that", but shows she has divined, (or Van/Ada believes she has divined, if you want to play that game) their secret world.
The crease in time thing - and Van's dream of being met by a horse, then relinquishing his dreamt horse at the house - usually seem signs in VN that a separate narrative is taking place (a bit like the separate one of the violets in TRLoSK), this narrative, or the symbols of this hidden world will usually undermine and tease the reader who is trying to follow the more traditional realist and linear. It lends VN's novels a good deal of their mandarin irony, I think. Here I found it just confusing. Hence also, presumably, Van and Ada's initial tumble on the night of the Burning Barn, which is strongly hinted the next day not to have taken place, and the shadow of the possibility (not allowed by Van/Ada the narrator) that it was a tumble with the serving girl is put suggested. Again, I think this sort of thing works better when they are more clearly signalled as perversions the narrative voice introduces - it's far clearer when Kinbote or Pnin is doing such a thing, either within the narrative or as a narrative voice. One of the reasons I like Pnin so much is that his misunderstandings are seen to be consequent upon kindness or dignity or confusion, rather than mendacity or idiocy.
That Peter Porter quote about the 'abstract hell of memory' reminded me of 'Her disintegration went down a shaft of phases, every one more racking than the last; for the human brain can become the best torture house of all those that it has invented, established and used in millions of years, in millions of lands, on millions of howling creatures'
Quick word about 'monozygotic style' too - I meant all that 'two tulip trees' 'scratch and scratch sumptuously (canteen cant)' stuff that goes on in what I take to be Ada's narrative voice, splitting sounds over and over again. It may be the consequence of an experiment in style and meaning by Nabokov, but I find it an extraordinarily tiresome one. Van or Nabokov or the 'traditional' style is much more accessible (possibly jokingly so?). This sort of thing - 'In a slant of scholarly sunlight a botanical atlas upon a reading desk lay open on a colored plate of orchids'. scholarly sunlight/botanical atlas/reading desk/coloured plate + upon/open.
All in all, I prefer VN when there's a lot less of this stuff, and more of his uncanny lyrical ability to make beauty, literary beauty, a part of our understanding of the world. In Ada it's like all the stuff he can go on about in his intros - the hermeneutic games, the scoffing at 'the wrong' interpretation, the scorning of traditional realist novel mechanisms, has all been put into the main book, rather than being something you can take or leave in an introduction or afterword. To echo something Alfred said upthread - he's better when he's slighter.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Sunday, 9 October 2011 07:35 (twelve years ago) link
great post. will try to write more later, but I will say I like the book more having come out the other side - it's a complicated and lovely construction to look back on, enjoy the time-slide – years speeding up as they get older.
But I would not read it again, and would not recommend it to others.
On Van & Ada not actually taking a tumble, I think there's a bit of this stuff right? I am dreadful at reading for this kind of thing (and don't really get off on that side of vn), but Van, viewed externally, is a bit rubbish, & makes excuses for or lies about his fuck-ups - he basically loses a duel, maybe loses that fight with Percy (Percy unruffled, Van flustered when they appear back at the party), visits prostitutes a lot, a minor academic. Biggest life achievement is walking on his hands. also, is there any real evidence that he and Ada are full, not half bro and sis?
― you don't exist in the database (woof), Sunday, 9 October 2011 18:27 (twelve years ago) link
I've finished too. I liked it more than I thought I would, in the end. The story was a simple enough romp (at least at the level I'm reading) and there were several amusing yarns that I liked. The last couple of parts were actually quite affecting.
The problem is that I never got to caring about the characters at all - it's had that in common with every farce or satire I've ever tried, which is what it reminds me of most I think. Maybe I didn't do it justice, I don't know, I did read awfully quickly. I don't think so though.
Partly it's the world created I think - too many references I don't really care about. I have the same issue with something like Ulysses that leans heavily on classics, whereas fill it with pop music and working-class life and I'll be buried in it.
― Ismael Klata, Thursday, 13 October 2011 19:32 (twelve years ago) link
what are you guys reading next?
― flopson, Thursday, 13 October 2011 20:35 (twelve years ago) link
Well personally I've moved onto Philip Roth's first book Goodbye, Columbus. But if you're wondering what's I Love Book Club reading next, join the frenzy at:
ILX Book Club Nominations (Rolling thread)
― Ismael Klata, Thursday, 13 October 2011 21:13 (twelve years ago) link
Yes, I'm still reading this. Moving funereally through it at a pinefauxian pace. Not actually reading it that slowly, just only picking it up at intervals.
Most recent notes.
It would not be sufficient to say that in his love-making with Ada he discovered the pang, the ogon', the agony of supreme "reality". Reality, better say, lost the quotes it wore like claws - in a world where independent and original minds must cling to things or pull things apart in order to ward off madness or death (which is the master madness).
Not sure how much to take this sort of thing at face value. It's in Speak, Memory I think, that VN writes 'reality' is the only word that should have quote marks round it. So there's an authorial anchor of sorts there (I'm finding I need all the anchors I can get in this). Whether it's fastened to anything is a different matter.
The death/master madness equation is dubious to me personally, but if we want to gloss it with literary rather than personal reference, the obvious ref is Lear. (probably even an intended ref? VN not averse to S refs) It's extraordinarily complicated, clearly, but in that I'm not sure I'd equate death with a master madness in Lear either. I worried away at this for a bit but didn't get very far. Uncertainly dismissed it in the end as somewhat glib.
The first bit is easier, and is glossed a bit further down where the senses are described as traversing 'between membrane and brain, and which always was and is a form of memory, even at the moment of its perception.'
So through writing, Van is trying to reverse the process of membrane to memory, trying through an effort of invented memory to possess the sensual experience. (mediations are also heavily present in this section, a reference to 'a bed-ridden old man' and the (insert) instruction to the editor, VN complicating unmediated/mediated experience).
This bit reminded me of Walter Benjamin writing on Fichte I think it was, a Romantic philosopher anyway, about the endlessly receding point of experience, never unmediated, and the Romantic search for that pure point of perceptual or sensory contact. William James relevant here? Wasn't he VN's favourite sensory philosopher?
Point being, by endlessly possessing Ada (there has to be some point to their endless tedious rendezvous) Van is attempting to experience pure unmediated reality.
Another gloss on this:
(Demon) tried to realize (in the rare full sense of the word), tried to possess the reality of a fact by forcing it into a sensuous center.
Clearly the same thing (this rather baldly sexualised ref is presumably supposed to be funny, but because it's rather obvious, the effect is a curiously coy form of irony).
All this stuff seems to make Ada a rather weird literary version of voodoo witchcraft/sympathetic magic - by creating a doll in the form of your victim you gain possession or control over the person. In this case Van would seem to go one further, and gaining a sort of Faustian control over reality, with claws or not. (is the implication here btw that reality will scarify Van in the end - that in fact it never goes unfanged? I guess I'll see). Clearly this could be put in hi-falutin' artistic terms, but I'm sticking with my voodoo doll for the moment.
There is also a quote here, which suggests that Van is attempting some sort of philosophical alchemy -
The logical impossibility to relate the dubious reality of the present to the unquestionable one of remembrance
The adjective is crucial - Van's/NV's narrative cannot be questioned by anyone. It thwarts all attempts at interrogation. I think in VN's other books part of the irony is built out of the idea that 'unquestionable' recollection will contain unintended details, 'tells', whose pattern give some sort of idea to the reader of another story (the 'reality' of the fiction if you like). With Kinbote and the narrator of Sebastian Knight you're aware of a possibly true, possibly untrue story that interrogates the main narrative.
The problem with Ada is that it's difficult to work out what is Van game and what is NV tell, the said and the unsaid. The glancing mention a few chapters after the description of Ada wagging her forefinger at her temple of Demon's replication of this move and the comment that certain gestures can be preserved unwittingly through generations. Put baldly without the intervening pages, this looks like a Van-ism, but it's difficult to know the number of pages it moves from structural game to dramatic irony. As I say, I need anchors! So it's difficult to work out a narrative of doubt (maybe, probably, because I'm not bright enough to follow it, but that's a different matter) and without a narrative of doubt then the game is dull. The details with which the reader continually wrangles are not therefore interesting in and of themselves, other than what they can give in terms of stylistic opulence. (with the awkwardnesses in style continually suggesting some Perec-style game at play). This produces a sort of phatic monotony to everything.
What this uncertainty should not do is excuse Nabokov with a 'not proven' verdict. Even if I assume the priggish comments like being unable to condone the grossness of Marina's soul are Van's, I'm going to assume that Nabokov thought the reader would be interested in them, in their presence.
All this in itself feels like a kind of literary madness, something I've kept coming back to. There is no foothold, so that I wondered whether the search for Terra was the search for this absent textual reality. I went down a bit of a rabbit hole here - what am I saying, this is a fucking warren already - where I started equating the invasion of American slang into the text ('hair-do') as Terra invasions from Van's present, and how the whole book was an attempt to balance VN's Russian past with his subsequent American stint, and somehow understand the public reaction to Lolita (as much a hymn to domestic American language and register as anything else) in terms of the oft-scorned Russian romances he'd grown up with. [memo to self - Do not pass go, do not collect 200 roubles.]
The reason I'm persisting I think is because I'm interested in how a writer I've liked so much, albeit read some years ago now, can write something I'm finding unenjoyable, by and large, to read, and not at all illuminating either.
There's another bit where Demon taps a barometer. 'It had been tapped too often to react in any intelligible way and remained standing at quarter past three.' I feel like that barometer, the irony is a quarter past three of writing, with narratives barely distinguishable, the hands of interpretation standing at a gnat's cock width apart (to use a memorable Kevin Blackwell phrase when describing a missed goal attempt on tv.)
I'm not even going to apologise for the length and incoherence of this undergrad balls, no one's reading Ada, no one's reading this thread. I'm just going to keep on pottering through, murmuring to myself as I go.
Oh, there was a good bit! Where Marina is listening to the thunder and counting for the subsequent lightning, where 'one heartbeat was supposed to span one mile of black night'. There are lots of good bits really, but they do feel bitty. I like his descriptions of food too, something he does in well in Pnin also iirc.
At one point (i didn't make a note of it) he does write that someone 'has the headache', which seemed a genuine mistake, possibly.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Friday, 4 November 2011 20:41 (twelve years ago) link
And I still can't work out what all the 'onomatomania' is all about, other than some very hazy guesses.
I did try! I even tried to see whether their scrabble game could be decoded with their secret code, well one of them. I was tired of reading at that point tbf.
― Fizzles the Chimp (GamalielRatsey), Friday, 4 November 2011 20:51 (twelve years ago) link
this is really good, i think, the 'endlessly receding point', and the stuff abt the indivisibility of memory and xp. i think in a big way the book is abt the transformative/escapist nature of 'feeling' the idea of being lost in the moment being at war w/ the control of intellect or as you say intellect/will attempting to coerce feeling into endlessness
― so solaris (Lamp), Friday, 4 November 2011 21:34 (twelve years ago) link
So in light of the epic fail of having attempting to read this when the thread was first active combined by arecent newsworthy passing, seems like this is kind of VN's Metal Machine Music contractual obligation finger-giving, but without the ensuing of a beautiful noise and the accompanying second-level irony of actually being ahead of its time, on its own terms or even someone else's. Maybe if he had actually liked Finnegans Wake this would have better.
― Into The Disco Mystic (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 17 November 2013 06:15 (ten years ago) link
/xgau_cg
have been set this by a friend and am finding its pleasures to revolve almost entirely around the eliciting of contempt for Things, Factota, Collections. these characters collect, but they are almost completely disbarred from a world they know everything about and possess every article of. and thus is nabokov himself, with all his allusions and devices and ephemera, kept separate from the world; it almost feels like nabokov is sending himself up in order to challenge us to do literally anything else - ah but in defiance you'll read on, won't you?
that said i am only 64 pages in, so perhaps a point of transcendent nausea (or self-indicted, consented fusion with such a stolidly overcurdled mode) will occur before we're even into the meat of it
― imago, Tuesday, 3 September 2024 21:31 (one week ago) link
the worst bit (and therefore best?) is that my girlfriend is reading Middlemarch next to me and chuckling along and I know from having read the first 4 chapters that it's one of the greatest books ever written, and that it absolutely does access the world with searing, slyly sympathetic clarity, and that I should be reading it instead, but somehow the fact of her reading it and me here with this hobbyhorsing misogynist old letch prancing about with imperial gratuity is, in its own way, part of the fun, the game of it all. christ though i'm only justifying it through coming to terms with being perpetually maddened, so the cataclysm of abandonments throughout this very amusing thread (another, significant part of the fun!) is extremely understandable
― imago, Tuesday, 3 September 2024 21:44 (one week ago) link
ay sorry man it's hard work
― woof, Tuesday, 3 September 2024 22:58 (one week ago) link