Authors who don't use quotation marks: why?

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The last couple of novels I read, the authors decided to do away with quotation marks. The first one, by Patrick McGrath, signals that it's speech with a dash, like the French do it:

- This is what that looks like, he said.
- Oh, she replied.

The novel I'm reading now, Cormac McCarthy's No Country For Old Men, doesn't signal it at all, it's up to the reader to gues that it's speech. (The other annoying punctuation trait of this novel is leaving out the apostrophe in cant didnt wasnt etc., although leaving it in for it's...) Anyway, I'm on the whole enjoying the McCarthy novel, which is sort of Texas noir, but this mucking around with the speech annoys me. Why do writers do it? I think it's only writers with "literary" pretensions who do it, which I'm guessing is why they do it... I think Peter Carey does it to. Anyway, it's pointless and annoying.

Revivalist (Revivalist), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 15:08 (seventeen years ago) link

TS: literary vs 'literary' vs "literary"

tom west (thomp), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 15:11 (seventeen years ago) link

i mean, "literary" vs "'literary'" vs ""literary""

tom west (thomp), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 15:11 (seventeen years ago) link

>literary

Jordan (Jordan), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 15:37 (seventeen years ago) link

> would be the french style. i don't know if the french have discovered the ironic quote mark tho.

tom west (thomp), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 15:47 (seventeen years ago) link

okay it just processed that as a HTML tag for 'literary'

there's a gag in that, isn't there

tom west (thomp), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 15:48 (seventeen years ago) link

I guess using the dash = French = literary (or even "literary") = this is no common popular novel, this is Important.

But having to use such a signifier actually seems to suggest the opposite: "I don't feel secure that people will get the true literaryness of my novel, therefore I will add a special signifier to show it."

Revivalist (Revivalist), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 16:05 (seventeen years ago) link

This thread is entirely to """"""literary"""""" for me. For me too. And me. Ill say.

Beth Parker (Beth Parker), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 16:25 (seventeen years ago) link

Maybe writers do it because they like how it looks or they want to create uncertainty between the authorial and the characters' voices or they're after a particular rhythm.

God Bows to Meth (noodle vague), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 17:29 (seventeen years ago) link

I can't recall which famous author I read bitching about quote marks and their baroque silliness, and pining after the simplicity of the hyphen. I want to say Joyce, but I believe this is incorrect. Any toss, it all comes down to convention and acceptance. Both methods work well enough to get the point across that you are writing dialogue, not narration.

Aimless (Aimless), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 18:54 (seventeen years ago) link

when i write my novel all the dialogue will be in pasted-in speech bubbles

tom west (thomp), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 19:27 (seventeen years ago) link

george saunders hardly uses em

cutty (mcutt), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 20:29 (seventeen years ago) link

I'd add to noodle_vague's list that lack of quotation marks tends to increase the reader's sense of distance from what's happening on the page. It kind of gently suggests "This isn't exactly what was said, because can we really know what was said with that kind of precision? And do we really need to, anyway? But it's close enough, isn't it, to get at some kind of truth, at least in this instance."

This is one of those stylistic choices that, if you decide it's "literary" and pretentious (and/or pointless and annoying), the text will pretty much always seem to support your decision. Or you can decide it's just another implement in the auctorial toolbox and judge case-by-case whether it works ("works").

W i l l (common_person), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 20:55 (seventeen years ago) link

To be fair, using the long dash instead of the quotes is not only French - it's also a common Irish thing (hence Joyce, McCabe and others using it). But as for people who don't use any at all, that bugs me too. Especially when they don't write clearly enough for you to tell whether it's a character speaking or the narrator commenting on what they've just said. The number of times I've read something like:

What am I doing here? he asked. Why ask such a question?

So who says the second bit, the character or the narrator. Either way, author-person, fuck off until you've learned to use quotation marks/long dashes.

Another annoying permutation is that used by the Australian writer Nick Earls, who uses nothing to mark characters speaking, and italics for the narrator speaking.

James Morrison (JRSM), Tuesday, 16 January 2007 23:35 (seventeen years ago) link

italics for thought processes (c.f. bad fantasists, mostly) bugs the fuck out of me.

tom west (thomp), Wednesday, 17 January 2007 01:46 (seventeen years ago) link

this goes double when every single time is is then followed by a "he thought" to clarify, because then it's just pointless

tom west (thomp), Wednesday, 17 January 2007 01:46 (seventeen years ago) link

quotation marks can rilly fuck up long dialogue heavy sections of novels. just read mccarthy's "cities of the plain" (oops, forgot to mention on the what r u reading thread) and it made perfect sense to me what he was up to -- characters get drawn into these extensive chatty back-and-forths and storytelling modes, etc. and to keep saying "this iz a quote!" is horrible + quote marks also sort of beg the "he said" or whatevs at the end of them, while the sparse action can be more naturally interspersed into the conversation w/o them.

if yr. writing more descriptively, then its a difft story of course.

but, i mean, how else to render:

"Yeah. I remember it.
You did not believe me.
I believed you.
You spoke to your friend?
Yeah. I spoke to him.
But your words carried no weight with him.
No. They didn't.
And now I cannot help you. You see.
I didn't come here for your help."

etc.

I mean, can you imagine quotes around each bit of it -- the natural rhythm and beat to the language and back-and-forth would be totally destroyed.

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Wednesday, 17 January 2007 06:16 (seventeen years ago) link

So who says the second bit, the character or the narrator. Either way, author-person, fuck off until you've learned to use quotation marks/long dashes.

But, not to belabor the obvious, if the author used quotation marks, then you wouldn't have that ambiguity!

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 17 January 2007 06:51 (seventeen years ago) link

I have no problem with ambiguity, if it serves a function. This doesn't seem to.

As for quotes ruining the rhythm of the language - I can see what you mean, but to me the _lack_ of quotes seems to stick out more - Elmore Leonard is a master of that kind of back-and-forth, and he uses quote marks with no problem.

James Morrison (JRSM), Thursday, 18 January 2007 03:23 (seventeen years ago) link

alternatively, we don't read dialogue as if it were spoken by actual individuals, and so the quote mark is a pointless convention insofar as it serves to promote a kind of false consciousness in re this issue.

i'm fairly certain i don't actually believe that.

tom west (thomp), Thursday, 18 January 2007 03:54 (seventeen years ago) link

I have no problem with ambiguity, if it serves a function.

Well, I mean. It's fun.

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 18 January 2007 06:18 (seventeen years ago) link

Quotation marks are ugly.

wmlynch (wlynch), Thursday, 18 January 2007 06:36 (seventeen years ago) link

what about those european angle brackets? i think those are even uglier, usually?

also: GADDIS

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Thursday, 18 January 2007 07:42 (seventeen years ago) link

I guess I can see Sterling's point about the rhythm potentially being spoilt by quotation marks. And I can sort of see the point about the ambiguity/distancing effect of doing away with them. And yet... authors don't generally decide that this or that scene has a certain rhythm therefore I won't use quotation marks, or for this or that scene I want ambiguity. They make a blanket decision for the entire novel or even for their entire oeuvre. That means that for every piece of dialogue, whether angry, sad, intimate, expository, aggressive, etc etc, they're aiming for these same effects, which seems unlikely.

Whatever the case, doing away with quotation marks is stylistically a "look at me, Mum!" type thing to do. We internalise conventions, and when someone does away with a convention, it turns attention on the writing style, rather than the content (what's said). I'm not saying that's bad, because every good piece of work twists a convention in some way. But if there's no good reason to overturn the convention except to draw attention to the fact that a convention has been overturned...

I'm almost through McCarthy's No Country For Old Men now, and I think it's pretty good. But this punctuation thing does annoy me. Not just his lack of quotation marks, but his leaving out apostrophes in a seemingly random way, and I can't be bothered to check but I get the impression that there is not a single comma in the entire novel. I don't think these eccentricities really add anything to the novel, they're just distractions.

Revivalist (Revivalist), Thursday, 18 January 2007 09:34 (seventeen years ago) link

Some people they distract, some people enjoy them. Playing with apostrophes and such almost always gives text an 18th century flavour for me, or to be less specific an air of being old or being out of time. Writers have done that mock antiquity thing forever - yo Malory! Discarding quotation marks has gone on for so long that I don't think it's an especially "flashy" technique today. Writers often have an aesthetic attachment to the way their text looks, I think.

God Bows to Meth (noodle vague), Thursday, 18 January 2007 10:50 (seventeen years ago) link

Yeah, I guess it's not a flashy technique any more. In a way, that makes it worse for me! It's a convention that's predicated on its supposed unconventionality. But ultimately it's all down to taste I suppose. I prefer writing styles that don't necessarily attract attention to themselves. Other people like something a bit more showy. Chacun à son goût.

Revivalist (Revivalist), Thursday, 18 January 2007 11:52 (seventeen years ago) link

It just doesn't seem all that unconventional to me. The most discussed book of the 20th Century, Ulysses, doesn't use them, nor do a lot of other critical darlings of that period. I've been focused lately on literature from before quotation marks were invented, so while they seem handy they hardly seem necessary. Quotation marks, like most elements of writing, seem more like an option than a convention you had better have a good reason for ignoring.

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 18 January 2007 15:10 (seventeen years ago) link

I’m reading a book of short stories in which all the stories EXCEPT ONE use quotation marks. I am trying to understand the motivation for it – why did he decide that particular story needed to be without them? It’s kind of bothering me, but this thread helps.

franny (frannyglass), Thursday, 18 January 2007 15:21 (seventeen years ago) link

Which book is that?

Revivalist (Revivalist), Thursday, 18 January 2007 15:42 (seventeen years ago) link

would it be carver by any chance?

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Thursday, 18 January 2007 18:40 (seventeen years ago) link

No, it's All the Men Are Sleeping by DR MacDonald. Really, really good, but the no-quotes thing is this one story is puzzling.

franny (frannyglass), Thursday, 18 January 2007 19:01 (seventeen years ago) link

My guess: they're ignorant, and so are their editors. If there is a reason behind their breach of accepted usage, I'd like to hear it. Of course, it would be a load of bollocks, but I enjoy a good laugh from time to time.

SRH (Skrik), Friday, 19 January 2007 15:26 (seventeen years ago) link

"breach"

Mr. Que (Mr.Que), Friday, 19 January 2007 15:57 (seventeen years ago) link

My guess: they're ignorant, and so are their editors.

Well, that's Ignorant Jim Joyce told then.

God Bows to Meth (noodle vague), Friday, 19 January 2007 16:18 (seventeen years ago) link

Yep-a-yep. The 'I shall heap scorn on the head of the culprit and run roughshod to victory' approach doesn't work so well when the culprit is the most heavily-praised author of the previous century.

Aimless (Aimless), Friday, 19 January 2007 17:52 (seventeen years ago) link

Somehow this reminds me of the story about Jimmy J saying that Flaubert's French wasn't so good, randomly flipping through a book and producing three mistakes as evidence.

The Redd And The Blecch (Ken L), Friday, 19 January 2007 18:32 (seventeen years ago) link

Although later on they turned out not to be mistakes.

The Redd And The Blecch (Ken L), Friday, 19 January 2007 18:32 (seventeen years ago) link

Two things I am thinking of:

1. Re: "What am I doing here? he asked. Why ask such a question?" I think—at least in Joyce's—case that looking for the paragraph breaks will help determine the boundaries of dialogue.

2. In some authors (I am thinking mainly of Kelman here) the lack of "speech marks" seems an attempt to fuse narration with a single character; to show the character telling his own story rather than employing an overarching level of narration (the omniscient and possibly Imperial).

fields of salmon (fieldsofsalmon), Saturday, 20 January 2007 18:49 (seventeen years ago) link

pt. 2 otm -- it feels like it lends itself to a real concise yarn-spinnin sort of thing, like also a signifier of "don't worry, there won't be any single voice fr. too long"

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Sunday, 21 January 2007 02:13 (seventeen years ago) link

two weeks pass...
I think the use of the dashes to offset dialogue is easy enough to follow and not likely to alienate many readers. I understand why readers are bugged by the complete absence of dialogue-signaling punctuation, but often I like how words look on the page without quotation marks, dashes, or many graf breaks. And once I acclimate to their absence, which usually only takes a page or two, I don't find it terribly confusing, as long as things are attributed, as in: I can't find my shoes, he said. I especially like how Norman Rush and W.G. Sebald do/did it. So far I've stuck with quotation marks in my own writing, though.

dylan (dylan), Wednesday, 7 February 2007 20:07 (seventeen years ago) link

teh one thing i hate is writers with characters whose speech falls into samey patterns and then they have back&forths that are lengthy and i forget who was talking and its too much of a pain to go back and try to keep score to figure out who sez what.

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Thursday, 8 February 2007 23:26 (seventeen years ago) link

good writers don't do uninterrupted dialogue without some occasional descriptive bits that keep you sure of whose sayin what.

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Thursday, 8 February 2007 23:26 (seventeen years ago) link

I'm almost through McCarthy's No Country For Old Men now, and I think it's pretty good. But this punctuation thing does annoy me. Not just his lack of quotation marks, but his leaving out apostrophes in a seemingly random way, and I can't be bothered to check but I get the impression that there is not a single comma in the entire novel. I don't think these eccentricities really add anything to the novel, they're just distractions.

I think I disagree with this, the lack of apostrophes was meant to enhance the impression of unpretentious, country-not-school-smart good ol boys talkin.

I would hate to hear Cormac McCarthy talk about politics and stuff but I sure do like his books.

Jordan (Jordan), Thursday, 8 February 2007 23:53 (seventeen years ago) link

my impression is that he's really liberal actually?

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Friday, 9 February 2007 00:30 (seventeen years ago) link

good writers don't do uninterrupted dialogue without some occasional descriptive bits that keep you sure of whose sayin what.

If you're talking about JR and implying William Gaddis is a bad writer,

I'LL FIGHT YE!

franny (frannyglass), Friday, 9 February 2007 01:59 (seventeen years ago) link

my impression is that he's really liberal actually?

Oh srsly?

Jordan (Jordan), Friday, 9 February 2007 15:29 (seventeen years ago) link

ten years pass...

Here's an author who puts quotation marks on his name...

https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/514XGhsSuqL._SX310_BO1,204,203,200_.jpg

Whiney Houston (Tom D.), Tuesday, 16 January 2018 18:51 (six years ago) link

ya because jock can mean an athlete, a dj or a hobbyist, but his is probably just a term of endearment, like a diminutive of his real name

infinity (∞), Wednesday, 17 January 2018 17:44 (six years ago) link

Nonetheless, odd to have it in quotation marks on the cover, and spine, of a book? His real name is William btw. Was, rather.

Whiney Houston (Tom D.), Wednesday, 17 January 2018 17:50 (six years ago) link

i know what you're saying

it does seem strange

there are people in my family whose nicknames have no relationship to their given names though

like maybe it arose from a funny incident that became legendary in the davidson family

infinity (∞), Wednesday, 17 January 2018 17:59 (six years ago) link

i think in summary: he's doing the usual thing of putting a nickname in quotations but unusually not putting his actual given name before it and also putting it on a book cover.

khat person (jim in vancouver), Wednesday, 17 January 2018 18:00 (six years ago) link

also is the possessive part of the full title or is that another irregularity from this exceedingly irregular fellow

j., Thursday, 18 January 2018 01:07 (six years ago) link


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