What do you think of David Mitchell's Cloud Atlas?

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actually that I'd feel better if he hadn't feigned that some overarching mechanical connections might come together. I mean, if you don't have them, then just admit it.

this is totally OTM. i'm reading Black Swan Green now. stop giving the game away, nabisco.

...although part of me wonders where the frobishers (if i remember right) can come into anything since that section was a movie within a book (and the Louisa Rey [sp?] thing was a thriller within the movie withing the book). all superficially very clever but actually not very tight. strange though, because i think Mitchell IS very clever but the devices he uses make him appear wanting in some way.

so far BSG is decent. written like a boys own story & with that pace. the 70's cultural references are so forcefully shoehorned, though, that most stick out like a sore thumb and a few have made me groan.

jed_ (jed), Saturday, 30 September 2006 02:05 (seventeen years ago) link

although, the frobishers are not who i remember them being so forget that bit.

jed_ (jed), Saturday, 30 September 2006 02:07 (seventeen years ago) link

I was with it largely up to the middle, I rather felt that Sonmi and Sloosha's Crossin were forced on proceedings. The bridging does feel forced, though this doesn't detract from the Zedelghem and Luisa Rey sections being utterly brilliant. Cavendish also. Oh sod it. I loved it. But I loved it most when it wasn't massively apparent that there was an overarching structure

Matt (Matt), Saturday, 30 September 2006 04:11 (seventeen years ago) link

the kind of corny mechanical stuff a sci-fi writer would do,

Maybe he wanted to get close to the corny mechanical stuff but not pull the trigger? Because you're right, he's obviously aware of that sort of thing. Maybe he was afraid of falling off the cliff into the Valley of Corniness? Anyway.

Mr. Que (Mr.Que), Saturday, 30 September 2006 13:54 (seventeen years ago) link

although part of me wonders where the frobishers (if i remember right) can come into anything since that section was a movie within a book (and the Louisa Rey [sp?] thing was a thriller within the movie withing the book)

Wait, this is the second time this has gotten confused: the only one that seemed to be honestly fictional was the Luisa Rey one! Cavendish was "real" -- he appears in a film for Somni, but that's theoretically because he says, at the end of his segment, that he's publishing his story and optioning the movie rights.

Which of course creates one of many loose threads, which is that Rufus Sixsmith and Frobisher's letters appear in the Luisa Rey "fiction," so ... who knows. I guess we should presume the author drew those things from reality? Or, hell, that Luisa's story is more of a "true crime" tale? Ha, once again, my word to Mitchell: if you don't have the connections worked out, don't just toss them in there and pretend we'll enjoy puzzling over them!

nabisco (nabisco), Saturday, 30 September 2006 18:50 (seventeen years ago) link

two weeks pass...
after a fairly weak start i thought "Black Swan Green" was superb. it really takes off after the Frobisher section and Jason, who i thought was weak and frustrating, suddenly started to interest me. the last 20 pages or so were incredibly moving. in fact i'm welling up just thinking about them now (no joke). there's a beautiful moment when jason meets the man at the "house in the woods" at the end *SLIGHT SPOILER* and jason says he thought the house was miles from anywhere and the man replies that the wood is "no more than the size of three or four football pitches, it's hardly sherwood forest." it's an amazing moment because it's so familiar yet so unexpected; a small moment that subtly changes your impression of the entire book.

i can't believe this book hasn't been marketed in a major way to teenagers. if i was a parent or teacher i would be urging kids to read it.

jed_ (jed), Thursday, 19 October 2006 19:43 (seventeen years ago) link

one year passes...

I think that if I were to re-read 'Cloud Atlas' I would have to read from the middle story "Sloosha's Crossin'" outward, ie., backwards in time, although I thought the Timothy Cavendish, Luisa Rey and Zedelghem stories were bunk. "Sloosha's Crossin'" and "Orison of Sonmi-451" were, however, brilliant. Jest Memr'yn'n'Writin' on 'em's got me thinkin'o how great they were.

Chelvis, Friday, 6 June 2008 12:33 (fifteen years ago) link

he seems a bit neil gaiman

thomp, Friday, 6 June 2008 13:42 (fifteen years ago) link

except he can write circles around him!

Jordan, Friday, 6 June 2008 14:16 (fifteen years ago) link

he's the neil gaiman of writing

thomp, Sunday, 8 June 2008 00:29 (fifteen years ago) link

nine months pass...

I'm reading CA now, at last. It's awesome - literally, what this novelist can do with his genre is a little awe-inspiring. Then again, I felt that with Ghostwritten first time out, and it seemed to creak a bit more on second reading.

Maybe, though, that more jaded doubt is to underestimate his ability with small things. What really struck me with GW was not just the structure and diversity, but the level of detail, of style, voice, observation. DM's capacity to see, remember and place things is part of what can be awesome about him - the London section of GW, for instance, has so much scattered truth about London in it; the Tokyo section is so full of little beauties. And I think his style - brisk, lyrical, droll - is still switched on a lot of the time in CA.

Anyway I'm only 3 chapters in! So not gonna read thread for spoilers.

But Black Swan Green by the way - a eloquent defence of it upthread, but I found it remarkably disappointing, regularly misjudged and redundant; odd from an author whose instinct so often seems so good. Maybe the links between CA and BSG will slightly redeem the latter for me.

the pinefox, Sunday, 8 March 2009 14:25 (fifteen years ago) link

ten months pass...

wish i hadn't read BSG before reading CA, because i missed the significance of the frobisher/eva references in BSG. still, i love both, although nabisco is otm™ about the mechanical vs thematic connections. the thematic stuff was way stronger, and the mechanical stuff was a little frustrating. i kept thinking that the birthmark stuff was weak and was waiting for some kind of payoff. it seems like mitchell agrees, at least judging from the winky part about the structure of 'cloud atlas sextet' where he writes something like "revolutionary or gimmick? i won't know until it's finished." ghostwritten did almost the exact same thing to much better effect imo, although cloud atlas is way more entertaining and probably better written (it's been so long since i've read ghostwritten, i don't remember the prose very well).

looking forward to his new one: http://www.amazon.com/Thousand-Autumns-Jacob-Zoet-Novel/dp/1400065453/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1265140939&sr=8-1

rinse the lemonade (Jordan), Tuesday, 2 February 2010 20:04 (fourteen years ago) link

three months pass...

Just finished "The Thousand Autumns of Jacob de Zoet".

He's done away with the clever forms, and just allowed his narrative sleight-of-hand to exist on a chapter by chapter basis. The prose style is, when dealing with the European characters, a gorgeous Melville pastiche, like the first part of Cloud Atlas. It's denser than his previous books and very rewarding. I preferred Black Swan Green to Mitchell's previous books; when he keeps his social commentary bubbling underneath a more urbane coming-of-age story--or in Jacob de Zoet's case, a romance--it has more resonance. Mitchell is one of my favourite authors and "de Zoet" is his best book.

Sounds great! Think this is going to be a good summer book for me. Cheers, Ówen.

Remember me, but o! forget my feet (GamalielRatsey), Sunday, 2 May 2010 09:36 (fourteen years ago) link

I have to warn you, though, that this is another one of those one-sitting reads. I read Cloud Atlas in a feverish three days and this one in two. Don't start it when you have work to do.

Hmm, yes, thanks for that as well. Do love those books, and the experience of one-sitting reads, where they briefly take over your life, but it's nice to have a clear run at 'em.

Remember me, but o! forget my feet (GamalielRatsey), Sunday, 2 May 2010 09:45 (fourteen years ago) link

oh shit, I didn't realize this was out.

congratulations (n/a), Sunday, 2 May 2010 12:54 (fourteen years ago) link

it's not. looking forward to it though.

jed_, Monday, 3 May 2010 11:54 (fourteen years ago) link

it's out in two weeks here and in two months where you are.

jed_, Monday, 3 May 2010 11:56 (fourteen years ago) link

dang. well I already added it to my library hold list.

congratulations (n/a), Monday, 3 May 2010 12:14 (fourteen years ago) link

any euros want to send me a copy? i can paypal you for it!

ampersand (remy bean), Monday, 3 May 2010 12:28 (fourteen years ago) link

i think you could buy it from amazon.co.uk if you are that eager.

jed_, Monday, 3 May 2010 12:30 (fourteen years ago) link

three weeks pass...

I really loved this (Thousand Autumns). Not much more to say yet, in terms of it's placing within his work. I guess you could say it's more traditional, but then so was BSG in a way. Still some genre shifts (an abortive attempt to become a Kurosawa film/ninja story, for example). I suppose culture clash as dialectic seems like a natural thing for him to (re-?)explore, but it works great as a straight story - one of those books I can happily recommend to friends who make fun of 'serious' literature. So yeah, dug this.

textbook blows on the head (dowd), Wednesday, 26 May 2010 07:02 (fourteen years ago) link

one month passes...

thanks to jaymc, nabisco, and n/a for pushing me to buy Cloud Atlas and Black Swan Green.

Filmmaker, Author, Radio Host Stephen Baldwin (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 30 June 2010 18:41 (thirteen years ago) link

Ghostwritten is excellent too. I like Number 9 Dream as well but it's pretty different from his other books so I hesitate recommending it.

congratulations (n/a), Wednesday, 30 June 2010 18:43 (thirteen years ago) link

He's done away with the clever forms, and just allowed his narrative sleight-of-hand to exist on a chapter by chapter basis.

^^ I really like the idea of this. I mean, I do like his attraction to (and skill with) those narrative tricks that seem a tiny bit geeky or sci-fi -- I don't think that's a problem. But I remember half-wondering if Black Swan Green was maybe his simple way of seeing how things worked without that kind of structure and pure invention (you know, start "small," do a short, contained story with a young narrator in a setting you know), and I like the idea of his continuing that way...

oɔsıqɐu (nabisco), Wednesday, 30 June 2010 20:45 (thirteen years ago) link

I like Number 9 Dream as well but it's pretty different from his other books so I hesitate recommending it.

I love number9dream! It's better than all but the center section of Cloud Atlas. So entertaining, with a really solid emotional foundation. Maybe it's the ending people don't like? Yeah, it's a little gimmicky, but very effective.

Cherish, Thursday, 1 July 2010 04:43 (thirteen years ago) link

Look forward to reading number9dream. Liked Cloud Atlas a lot (wd agree the central section is the strongest), would by and large agree with the James Wood review of Thousand Autumns, really good in lots of ways, but does have a weird lack of purchase, not a bad thing necessarily, but having subsequently read Black Swan Green which I thought was wonderful, does feel like a bit of a loss.

Still, more power to his elbow imo, imaginatively delightful and with a strong heft of non-conventional emotional content.

GamalielRatsey, Thursday, 1 July 2010 08:30 (thirteen years ago) link

Maybe it's the ending people don't like?

I think it's the Goatwriter section that people really dislike, it's pretty much the worst thing he's written. The book as a whole takes the Murakami homage thing a bit too far, although I love the video game bits and the gangster subplot in the middle.

Vulvuzela (Matt DC), Thursday, 1 July 2010 16:19 (thirteen years ago) link

so excited to read his new one.

emotional radiohead whatever (Jordan), Thursday, 1 July 2010 16:23 (thirteen years ago) link

I do like Number9Dream, it just feels different from the rest of his books.

congratulations (n/a), Thursday, 1 July 2010 16:27 (thirteen years ago) link

I think it's the Goatwriter section that people really dislike, it's pretty much the worst thing he's written.

Really? It didn’t bother me, and there wasn’t much of it anyway. It’s just for fun -- silly wordplay, a fairy tale, a meta joke with a good punch line.

Cherish, Thursday, 1 July 2010 18:14 (thirteen years ago) link

I've been meaning to read this one, one of my art teachers loves it. It sounds quite great.

nicepockets, Wednesday, 14 July 2010 04:41 (thirteen years ago) link

read this for the first time a few weeks ago and fell in love... i thought i had written on this thread but i guess it was ~~one of my past lives~~~~~

max, Wednesday, 14 July 2010 04:44 (thirteen years ago) link

new one was really well written but I had trouble getting as excited about it as his other books.

also:

(SPOILER)

it wasn't clear to me why the British ship just stopped attacking the city. Were there clues about this that I missed, or is it just supposed to be a mystery?

congratulations (n/a), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 13:00 (thirteen years ago) link

I finished Ghostwritten a couple of hours ago. The middle sections – Holy Mountain, Mongolia, Petersburg – are engrossing. The last eighty pages really tail off though.

Filmmaker, Author, Radio Host Stephen Baldwin (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 13:15 (thirteen years ago) link

after slagging him off speculatively two years ago i still have yet to read him, although i did take home a copy of cloud atlas the other day

thomp, Wednesday, 14 July 2010 13:36 (thirteen years ago) link

SPOILER

it wasn't clear to me why the British ship just stopped attacking the city. Were there clues about this that I missed, or is it just supposed to be a mystery?

de Zoet standing on the lookout tower about to be annihilated by the captain of the brit ship reminded the captain of the brit ship of his own son who had been lopped in half by a chain gun some years earlier. (it makes sense in the context of the book)

ampersand (remy bean), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 14:14 (thirteen years ago) link

huh ok, I guess I missed that, thanks.

congratulations (n/a), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 14:14 (thirteen years ago) link

ghostwritten was like 80% of a superamazing book, and 20% of lead-up with no follow through. it felt like the kind of foreplay that goes on too long and everybody gets chafed or bored or tired and just kind of tuckered out, and you say 'oh, that was nice' but don't really feel into it any more.

ampersand (remy bean), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 14:16 (thirteen years ago) link

That's about right. I found Laura Miller's rather tetchy review, which I read, to my regret, before I'd finished the novel. When I did, my mind kept returning it, and she's right in suggesting that the novel's a virtuoso performance without giving us a clue about what Mitchell cares about or where he'll go next.

Filmmaker, Author, Radio Host Stephen Baldwin (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 14:19 (thirteen years ago) link

i remember liking the end of ghostwritten, it was a nice surprise to find myself in a doomsday sci-fi story (seemed very asimov-y iirc, not in a bad way)

emotional radiohead whatever (Jordan), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 14:55 (thirteen years ago) link

what was the last section? tokyo underground?

jed_, Wednesday, 14 July 2010 19:53 (thirteen years ago) link

Yeah -- about the Tokyo bomber.

I'm never gonna do it without the Lex on (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 20:53 (thirteen years ago) link

lol, i forgot about that until you mentioned it. the last thing i remembered was the radio show.

emotional radiohead whatever (Jordan), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 21:00 (thirteen years ago) link

oh god that damn chapter was endless.

I'm never gonna do it without the Lex on (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Wednesday, 14 July 2010 21:06 (thirteen years ago) link

he's the neil gaiman of writing

― thomp, Sunday, June 8, 2008 12:29 AM (2 years ago) Bookmark

do you know, i think i might stand by this? enjoying this a great deal though, wish i could remember what happened to the copy of number9dream i bought like five years ago

thomp, Friday, 23 July 2010 15:03 (thirteen years ago) link

I am going to hear him read tonight. Is the new book worth buying in hardback?

European Bob (admrl), Friday, 23 July 2010 15:47 (thirteen years ago) link

It's a nice looking thing (at least in its European incarnation), and well, having a book in hardback can increase the pleasurable sense of ceremony reading a new book can bring. It wasn't my favourite of his - plenty to be getting on with tho.

Hide the prickforks (GamalielRatsey), Friday, 23 July 2010 15:53 (thirteen years ago) link

just finished ghostwritten. i think i liked it more than cloud atlas, even--less of a focus on a specific reincarnative weirdness and more a generalized kind of... butterfly effect? the way things ripple across the sections is pretty amazing, and he does it in this incredibly beautiful way that makes certain themes and objects and ideas actually kind of echo instead of being all DO YOU SEE DO YOU SEE.

i love, too, what he does with the practice of reading--the way you have to give up entirely on your training to expect an ending or a conclusion; you simply read and trust mitchell to make everything interesting. as in cloud atlas i was bummed out every time a section ended and then immediately enthralled by the next one.

the only bit that dragged was the bat segundo radio show. i didnt like bat very much, and i was a little sad that the book climaxed in that bit. although the conversation between the zookeeper and the noncorprum almost sent shivers down my spine!

max, Friday, 23 July 2010 18:25 (thirteen years ago) link

the book was fun i hope they kept it fun

lag∞n, Thursday, 26 July 2012 12:39 (eleven years ago) link

can i just

― Hungry4Ass, Thursday, July 26, 2012 8:32 AM (9 minutes ago) Bookmark Flag Post Permalink

lol yes

lag∞n, Thursday, 26 July 2012 12:43 (eleven years ago) link

is that tom hanks, because in that still he looks disconcertingly like john travolta

thomp, Thursday, 26 July 2012 12:50 (eleven years ago) link

that is tom hanks

Hungry4Ass, Thursday, 26 July 2012 12:51 (eleven years ago) link

i don't know about this btw. i think cloud atlas actually is one of those bits of work which is guilty of 'reaching for significance' or whatever (sunt lacrimae rerum, ad infinitum) but it gets away with it due to props and skill on mitchell's part -- and those props and that skill include doing talky stuff really, really well, and being pretty adept at pastiche of familiar styles that doesn't look like he's just doing author x

and i don't know if that makes the wachowskis a good match. i know v little about the run lola run guy. also, are they directing different segments? that is probably a good idea if they are.

thomp, Thursday, 26 July 2012 13:14 (eleven years ago) link

You would have to be actively trying to fuck up the Luisa Rey section in film, but they might manage it. The Cavendish section really needs to retain the comedy of the original. The Adam Ewing bit and the sci-fi sections could be really po-faced and terrible. I'm worried about what they'll do to the Frobisher character and his music.

Matt DC, Thursday, 26 July 2012 13:15 (eleven years ago) link

ahah the music in the trailer is also kind of ... 'this is what i've been hearing in my dream!!! *circle of fifths*'

thomp, Thursday, 26 July 2012 13:22 (eleven years ago) link

ctrl-h 'props' 'chops' on that post above. god i stared at that for like a minute going 'what is wrong here'

thomp, Thursday, 26 July 2012 13:43 (eleven years ago) link

What if life
Is a book
Divided into seven parts?
What if the story of man
Dovetails from one chapter to the next?
What if
We spell it out for you in film?

Ówen P., Thursday, 26 July 2012 14:09 (eleven years ago) link

There's no way the Wachowskis will not fuck this up. Between this and Baz Luhrman doing Gatsby, and Keira Knightley doing Anna Karenina, there are going to be some incredibly vulgarised movies of great books soon.

computers are the new "cool tool" (James Morrison), Friday, 27 July 2012 00:02 (eleven years ago) link

Bad books too: Life of Pi

Ówen P., Friday, 27 July 2012 03:02 (eleven years ago) link

Cloud Atlas is good but it's not in Gatsby/Anna Karenina territory! The thing about Cloud Atlas is that it would actually make brilliant schlocky Hollywood cinema but I don't really trust the Wachowskis not to blow it.

Matt DC, Friday, 27 July 2012 08:00 (eleven years ago) link

fantastic (long) interview: http://www.theparisreview.org/interviews/6034/the-art-of-fiction-no-204-david-mitchell

40oz of tears (Jordan), Wednesday, 8 August 2012 17:41 (eleven years ago) link

I liked the story about the businessman in Hong Kong and the mythical story best. I liked the dystopian stories least. (Dystopia seems hard to imagine or temporary, fleeting, and situated.)

youn, Thursday, 9 August 2012 00:45 (eleven years ago) link

three months pass...

"dammit weed" lol

messiahwannabe, Friday, 16 November 2012 00:36 (eleven years ago) link

one year passes...
four months pass...

I was a bit this way and that on de Zoet but this is goi to be grebt:

The Bone Clocks.

Fizzles, Tuesday, 22 April 2014 17:10 (ten years ago) link

eight months pass...

while i loved this book and plan on reading everything else of his i was in exactly the same position as nabisco

My weird nagging issues on this are totally mechanical, though -- he does so much to toy with the idea that there's a mechanical in-the-book connection between all these characters, but he doesn't have one! For some reason this bugged all hell out of me: why keep hinting that you've got a concrete, non-thematic explanation for the form when you really, really don't? The many airy allusions to reincarnation are blown apart by (among other things) Luisa Ray: Cavendish would have been born around the point Frobisher died, so why is there a character from a thriller shoehorned between them? This wouldn't normally be a problem, but there's something about the form that leads you to believe the second halves of the story will give you a change to figure something out about the connections -- not something thematic, but something physical -- and yet with a lot of those second halves he seems to be writing purely for plot, just enjoying wrapping up the tales themselves, as if most of his content was on the page by the middle section, and everything thereafter is just tidying up.

So beyond the center section, I was mostly just chopping through to get the thing done, pushing through a lot of pages looking for some connections that didn't seem likely to crop up.

before the second half i was CONVINCED there was some epic connection that was going to string them all together. my best guess was some kind of rift in time thing where adam ewing somehow travels through time to the post apocalyptic future. zachry refers to "pa n' adam" being captured by kona, so i thought maybe autua was zachry's father, and he and adam had traveled through time due to something that would conspire once they'd reached hawaii. would've worked out perfectly, too, since frobisher hadn't found the second half of adam's diary yet, and luisa hadn't read the second half of frobisher's correspondence yet. then some connection with the nuclear reactor, her father maybe? i hadn't worked out the details past that point. anyways, IMO kind of a missed opportunity and i do agree with nabs that it hinted too much at a connection that wasn't there. but oh well, still an amazing read. is the new one good?

flopson, Sunday, 11 January 2015 18:36 (nine years ago) link

also if luisa is fictional then so are zedelghem and pacific diaries, no? i got the impression it was true crime but as n points out that blows apart the reincarnation thing, although i think mitchell might have just legit fucked up in that regard, as there's an ironic in-joke where timothy cavendish says that he would edit out the suggestion that frobisher and luisa are the same person, at which pt the reader is supposed to knowingly lol like, dude you are that person too!

flopson, Sunday, 11 January 2015 18:54 (nine years ago) link


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