The Shining

Also, this made the rounds WAY fast... everyone's seen this today (not on ILX, I mean)

Yeah, but the end results!

http://www.boingboing.net/2005/09/30/west_side_story_beco.html

http://www.boardsmag.com/articles/magazine/20050601/aice.html

http://www.aice.org/ ('Trailer Park' section)

The Shining Revised....oh my!

someone needs to remix this movie. here's what to do:

- remove 80% of the music. too many times this movie spills into overkill because of the combination of jack nicholson + crazy modern classical music. I think nicholson by himself = already spooky (plus also funny, which is another thing the shining should have exploited more)

- ...which means you need to hire an editor to make this movie happen in under 2 hours, so all dialogue and extended pan shots of (admittedly beautiful) scenery don't go stale

- structure the movie around the bar scenes. these move at a good pace, don't have a bunch of dramatic overkill, are funny, nice to look at, and give a great idea of jack's motivation to kill, are good barometers for his madness.

- hold off on the scariest images until the end. dropping the blood coming out of elevators in the first 20 minutes is bad pacing for a movie that in general takes its time getting to the finish line

You're silly in the head.

someone needs to remix this movie.

I mean, did you SEE that awful miniseries?!

"remixing"/"re-imagining"/"tweaking" this film would be like taking a runny, pungent dump on "The Mona Lisa." Don't fuck with it.

Maybe they could CGI Shelly Duvall out of the film and put Winona Ryder in instead, as a way of appealing to the young people. Also, they could get Greedo to shoot first.

- hold off on the scariest images until the end. dropping the blood coming out of elevators in the first 20 minutes is bad pacing for a movie that in general takes its time getting to the finish line

i agree with this, jack's descent into madness happens too suddenly - you don't get much of a sense of what he's actually like before he goes crazy so there's no counterpoint. then, when he does, it goes on for too long. really great movie but it's totally improvable.

I'm not so sure about holding it off until the end, though. The first shining that Danny has in the bathroom (about the elevator and the split-second splice of the twins) is very effective for presaging/foreshadowing and captures the viewer's attention quickly.

I do think when Shelly Duvall finally sees the elevator, though, it's been shown too many times by that point and not effective.

I'm trying to think if any other Great Director's Worst Film has inspired such slavish devotion...

I can only assume you've seen Fear and Desire. And A Clockwork Orange.

slavish = people like it?

I do think when Shelly Duvall finally sees the elevator, though, it's been shown too many times by that point and not effective.

Much as I'm totally not in the business of "improving" movies, I sort of agree with this. I never really thought it was right that Duvall literally sees the bloody elevators.

I think the bloody elevators work best in that trailer. (Eric, I will give you Fear and Desire, I meant since Kubrick became Kubrick.)

To me to the degree it works at all it's a Grand Guignol Kramer vs Kramer, only there's no genre universe in which those 2 actors would be married to each other. I was a squeamish little teenage pussy when it debuted and it didn't scare me much.

I'll probably see it once more, thanks to the doubtsthis has planted, and be done with it forever.

I think the entire movie should've taken place in the pantry.

the shining is the only post-strangelove kubrick i have any great attachment to, though i'd prob like barry lyndon more now.

the whole bit with shelley running around at the end is pretty silly, though.

you don't get much of a sense of what he's actually like before he goes crazy so there's no counterpoint

true enough, but if you're looking for observant portrayals of plausible humans that the movie seems to care about, Kubrick might not be your thing.

honey, can't you see i'm BUSY?

also, there's more than a hint that Jack was plenty crazy long before we come in -- he's an abusive alcoholic prone to fits of rage. So when he turns raging and abusive, well... there you go. It's frightening not because "wooo! Ghosts!" but because his wife and son are familiar with this Jack already. But again, Kubrick doesn't much care about the humans in his movies, so it's all pretty fuzzy.

the shining needs a different second half. the only genuinely scary bits - the subliminal visions - are in the first.

but don't you see he was always the caretaker!

I'd remix this movie by using it as kindling

I was with Morbz re: this being Kubrick's worst movie but then I remembered Eyes Wide Shut