Answer with some bad noir prose

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He was lonely. His loneliness was almost like a latent hunger now. It was late. The kind of hour when the only people you were likely to met on these miserable streets were those ready to punch or proposition you. He was cold. Cold like only the man who lives alone and relentlessly troops back to a stony bed after religiously dulling his introspection with the barroom thud of a blunt liquor bottle can understand. It was raining. It was like the clouds had seen too much of this Babylon and the quiet unceasing suffering that its dilapidated boroughs and decaying blocks bred, and on a louring night such as this, were powerless to stem the steady fall of divine tears that ran in a million miniature rivers off the grime that seemed to cover every surface, choking up drain covers and collecting in stagnating brown pools and streams that almost threatened to turn this ruined, dead, filthy city into a nightmarish, Boschean vision of Amsterdam. He waited. He waited like the second hand on wristwatch waits, in the unending desert before each second, in the uncharted space where men have failed to lay down a grid, where there are no maps for guidance through the void of decay, because like the second hand, he knew there was an end to waiting, that like all journey’s there is an ending, that the destination doesn’t disappear, even if it can take a lifetime to reach it, though you may loose sight of its spires on the road; the second hand knows where it is going, for between each second it can sense an ending, and in the spaces between the marks on the dial, the second hand waits for the fall of kings and the crumbling of empires, it waits because it knows there is an eternity in the possibility that blossoms with each passing second, and his eternity was here on these streets.

Alex K (Alex K), Monday, 22 September 2003 11:36 (twenty years ago) link

Alex K., you win.

Susan (Susan), Monday, 22 September 2003 12:08 (twenty years ago) link

He sat restlessly in his office. Again. He was always restless. Bills make a man restless. Unpaid bills make a man worry. But he wasn't thinking about bills this time. He was thinking about what she said. Was it true? Could it be true. He weighed up all the angles, and still couldn't figure it out. The broad turned his head like a airplane propeller and he didn't like it one bit. He was fighting against the truth though. He knew she was right, but he hated to admit it. He opened the drawer and poured a shot of sour, and threw it back. It didn't help any. She was till right, and it didn't matter how many shots he drank and how many luckies he smoked. It was the best thread evah...

Dave B (daveb), Monday, 22 September 2003 12:17 (twenty years ago) link

The tile on his desk read: "Assistant Office Supplies Manager" but considering he'd been at the job with no pay raise or promotion for five years, it may as well have read "Stationary."

Horace Mann (Horace Mann), Monday, 22 September 2003 17:33 (twenty years ago) link

she stood closer than a wet week in July

isadora (isadora), Monday, 22 September 2003 20:13 (twenty years ago) link

"It's cold out," he said, and he said "I needa beer."
She looked him one with her black eyeliner drawn up like a harlequin mask. "We're out," she said with a mouth like rebar. Damn, I hate clowns, was his sudden thought.

Heather (Heather), Monday, 22 September 2003 20:24 (twenty years ago) link


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