ATTN: Copyeditors and Grammar Fiends

any recommendations for a better turn of phrase? maybe it's the 26ish hours of awake in a row but it's really doing my head in. I just can't wrestle a good title out of my head.

"original residents" and "newcomers"?

newcomers feels a little vague -- since i am also talking about private firms and public figures "coming new" to the space (as well as various other actors) i want to differentiate btwn them and the actual people who think they're urban frontiersmen (bias is somewhat tongue-in-cheek).

i can probably get away w/ gentry & incumbent because urban studies from what i've read is THE MOST MELODRAMATIC FIELD OF ACADEMIA OF ALL TIME (except for melodramatic studies which probably exists somewhere) -- if you don't believe me you should read some of waht Mike Davis has to say about fortresses of fear in LA!

Oh, I remember a word for the newcomers -- in-migrants. Just need something for the... the... "displaced." God that's even worse.

indigenous?

newcomers feels a little vague -- since i am also talking about private firms and public figures "coming new" to the space (as well as various other actors) i want to differentiate btwn them and the actual people who think they're urban frontiersmen (bias is somewhat tongue-in-cheek)

are there people who think this, that they're "urban frontiersmen"? or are there just young people looking for a deal? i'd imagine the latter, more or less. which probably isn't too different from what's motivating the private firms etc so i think "newcomers" works. as for the people already there, "original" is perhaps misleading.. maybe "longtime residents"?

coign a new phrase like 'urboriginal' imo

yeah but nobody's really "original" which is why incumbent sort of works, because it's making no claims beyond the fact that they happen to be there now, and prior to the new wave.. "incumbent residents" might be ok but will get cumbersome quickly

surely can't use 'gentry' for the newcomers, that's a very specific class.

'current residents' and 'new arrivals' imo

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I have here a lengthy sentence: "The facts that (LONG CLAUSE) and that (LONG CLAUSE) make us hopeful that..."

My colleague change it to "fact" and left "make," which can't be right. The original is OK if clumsy, yes?

I would probably have done "the fact that... and that... makes us" etc — but that's just my gut instinct, I dunno if it's the most correct way to do it

Original certainly IS clumsy, but at least it's all in agreement. Not so for the "fix".

Does each [LONG CLAUSE] individually make us hopeful, or is the combination of/relationship between [LONG CLAUSE]s that does?

each individually

Yeah, in that case, I think you're right.

of course, the two facts in combination probably make them more hopeful.

The main argument I'm getting is "The facts that..." is too awkward.

Generally sentences with "the fact that" or "the fact is" or "the facts (whatever)" should be rewritten to exclude the "fact" bit. "The fact that these sentences are flawed means they should be rewritten" is less efficient than "These sentences are flawed and should be rewritten". Hope that helps.

Yeah, but it was an editorial by the editors of the journal, soooo....

show em who's boss imo

[LONG CLAUSE] and [LONG CLAUSE]; these facts make us hopeful that etc etc

Woah or Whoa?

I've always written the former, but someone was moaning about it the other day and since then I've seen it written as "whoa". Is this a US thing?

its whoa, woah is wrong

WH = wuh sound (where, when, why, etc.) + OA = dominant sound in OAts, OAr, etc.

Having it end in AH sounds more like something Al Pacino would say in a movie.

"Woah" is what Snowy says in the English-lang Tintin books. Seems ridic anywhere else.

Is it supposed to rhyme with "Noah"?

WH = wuh sound (where, when, why, etc.) + OA = dominant sound in OAts, OAr, etc

This doesn't make much sense in England ('wh' pronounced exactly the same as 'w', e.g. 'watt' and 'what') and 'oats' and 'oar' start with totally different vowel sounds.

This came up recently and in a moment of revelation I realised that I would always use 'Woah' for the exclamation of surprise, and 'Whoa' as an instruction, mainly for horses, but generically to indicate any sort of need to come to a halt. I have no idea if this is actually a thing other than in my brain.

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Hurrah, they've revised their entry on "gaydar."

I hope it now says suzy invented it!

Earliest citation now:

1988 Philadelphia Inquirer 23 Mar. b7/1 Making use of what he called ‘gaydar’, Richard A. Friend moved to the center of a stage‥and scanned the audience of about 60 students and staff‥. Friend, an instructor in human sexuality at the University of Pennsylvania, told the crowd he would point out all the lesbians and gays in the audience and have them stand up.

Does Suzy know Richard A. Friend?

I've always written the former, but someone was moaning about it the other day and since then I've seen it written as "whoa". Is this a US thing?

Yeah, this was me in the irrationally angry thread. I'm afraid "woah" is going to be universally accepted usage within a few years, but it's total nails-on-blackboard to me.

I refuse to let that happen, not in the United States of America, at least.

I hate it too, mostly because it looks like it would rhyme with Noah. "WO-ah"

Godammint.

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"Woah" is what Snowy says in the English-lang Tintin books. Seems ridic anywhere else.

― Jesus Christ, the apple tree! (Laurel), Friday, January 7, 2011 5:16 PM (3 hours ago) Bookmark

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Yes. And even there it always bugged me, because I wasn't sure what sound I was supposed to be imagining coming from Snowy. I decided it was just a funny European way of writing BARK BARK BARK.

I always kind of heard it as an old-fashioned clown horn, I can't help myself. "Ah-WOOOO-gah!"

http://separatedbyacommonlanguage.blogspot.com/2009/04/whoa-and-woah.html

Earliest citation now:

1988 Philadelphia Inquirer 23 Mar. b7/1 Making use of what he called ‘gaydar’, Richard A. Friend moved to the center of a stage‥and scanned the audience of about 60 students and staff‥. Friend, an instructor in human sexuality at the University of Pennsylvania, told the crowd he would point out all the lesbians and gays in the audience and have them stand up.

Does Suzy know Richard A. Friend?

― Zsa Zsa Gay Bar (jaymc), Saturday, 8 January 2011 05:56 (2 hours ago) Bookmark Suggest Ban Permalink

dude DADT was repealed, he's now Richard My Boyfriend

What sensible orthographic relationship could be shared by both woah and Noah?

fwiw (what with the free subscription and all)

†1. whoa ho ho, used to call attention from a distance. Obs.

a1616 Shakespeare Winter's Tale (1623) iii. iii. 76 He hallow'd but euen now. Whoa-ho-hoa.
1623 Shaks. Merry W. v. v. 187 Whoa hoe, hoe, Father Page.
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2. A word of command to a horse or other draught-animal to stop or stand still; also used otherwise in collocation with other words, as come hither whoa, gee-whoa, hait-whoa, whoa back. Hence used jocularly to a person as a command to stop or desist. (Cf. woa int.)

/wəʊ/
Forms: Also woah.(Show Less)
Etymology: Variant of whoa int.
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= wo int. 2.

1841 Dickens Old Curiosity Shop ii. xxxviii. 3 Woa-a-a then, will you?
1856 Putnam's Monthly Mag. Nov. 530/1 With a loud ‘woah!’ the man stopped the beast [sc. ass].
1892 Chevalier Wot Cher! iv, ‘Woa! steady! Neddy Woa!’
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Derivatives

woa v. to stop (trans. and intr.) with the call of ‘woa’.

1870 S. Lanier Nine from eight 31, I woa'd my mules mighty easy.
1871 M. Legrand Cambr. Freshman 252 Woa, Princey, woa! But Prince wouldn't ‘woa.’

in family guy when stewie's doing that irritating "cool wHip" thing, thats what you wrongheaded whoa-advocates are sounding like. it's obvious just from looking at the word and the way people pronounce it that the expression of surprise is 'woah'. elements of what GR ring true though.

unless this is another orrible americanisation in which case im out.

I'd never seen "woah" until the last couple of years; assumed it was sloppy smartphone typing.

My trusty old Australian OED has only 'whoa' and lists only the definition about horses. Will not use either word until I have a definitive answer.

david walliams says woah if that helps

in family guy when stewie's doing that irritating "cool wHip" thing, thats what you wrongheaded whoa-advocates are sounding like.

So are you saying it should be spelled Cool Wiph?

Nobody knocks Stewie on my watch.

waht

wewh, close one