ATTN: Copyeditors and Grammar Fiends

the proofreader took out all the fourth points.

they did this to my thesis too, so i just took them out where applicable, whatever, even tho, yknow, i'm a copyeditor lol - dif styles to contend with. but i think it does look better/cleaner with just three dots. i never put a space before the first dot but do after the third one. but my copyeditor style is of the 'yeah whatever as long as it's consistent throughout the doc/program/company/etc' variety

I like the full stop because it tells the reader - yes, the sentence did end there, right there.

^^ Not that I can dredge up an example offhand, but I can picture situations in which that sentence-ending information would actually be important to meaning.

ending sentences is overrated

we're all connected in this great big universe don't try to put a limit on it let go

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you know what's awesome rrrobyn

^^ punctuate as you're inclined

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you know what's awesome? rrrobyn.

You! Know what's awesome, rrrobyn!

You-know-what's awesome, rrrobyn.

quit making me amenable to punctuation

here's one i'm curious about due to having to write it a lot: should one use the plural 'persons' for talking about people other than in the limited case of "carried upon their persons" and so forth? can you have "young persons"?

I think so? It's a bit "bullshit civic address" though, or like school administrator-speak, or something.

In Britain, we covet the YOUNG PERSONS RAILCARD.

i'm in britain. my young person(')s railcard has unfortunately lapsed, though, leaving me to pay full fare until i remember to renew it.

"disobeyal": a word?

disobedience.

thought so.

Which one sounds better?

She has a plausible chance to win the nomination

She has a plausible chance of winning the nomination

2nd one (to my ear). Neither would be incorrect.

I agree. Thanks.

"Stories of the late Joseph Heller" or "stories of the late Joseph Heller's"?

I would always always use the former but I'm not necessarily sure that's correct.

The "of" negates the need for the "'s" - option 1 is correct.

But you would say "stories of his" rather than "stories of him".

Yes, but I think that's an example of where common usage has superseded technically correct grammar, in the same way you'd say "he's a friend of mine" rather than "a friend of me".

So would you actually say "stories of him"? If not, why does common usage has supseding rights with that but not with "stories of Joseph Heller's"? Because you don't consider the latter is commonly used enough?

"has supseding" = "have superseding", in a better world.

"A friend of Mike's came round yesterday."

Surely this is correct? You wouldn't say "a friend of Mike". I don't think this is a question of common usage superseding technically correct grammar. I can't put my finger on the grammatical principle but I think it's there. English is too consistent on this point: ie "those books of yours" etc, surely there was never a time when "those books of you" was correct.

Actually, I think I can see the purpose of this double possessive. It's to emphasise possession when there are other possible interpretations. Compare:

"That photo of you"
"That photo of yours"

Completely different meanings.

I've just realised something else as well, Alba: do you mean "stories belonging to Joseph Heller" or "stories about Josepher Heller"?

Language Log has info on the double posessive.

I wish I hadn't just mis-spelt 'possessive'.

great link, thanks!

although "don't sweat it" is not really the advice i'd be looking for...

do you mean "stories belonging to Joseph Heller" or "stories about Josepher Heller"?

The former, Charlie.

Thanks for that link, woofwoofwoofwoofwoofwoofwoof.

Yeah, v. interesting. I think I raised this question a while ago on this thread, as it's something that's always dissatisfied me.

The Burchfield edition of Fowler's "Modern English Usage" says much the same as the excellent Language Log article linked to above, but if anyone is unsure why the example quoted from CGEL suddenly has "that" running through it, the list of limitations from MEU may help:
"It will be seen from the examples that the appositional of-phrase must be definite (i.e. not indefinite) and human: a friend of my mother's is idiomatic, but a friend of the British Museum's is not; an admirer of hers is idiomatic, but an admirer of the furniture's is not. It will also be observed that the phrase preceding of is normally indefinite (a great admirer, a child of hers, etc.). The only exceptions are those where the first noun phrase is preceded by the demonstratives this or that (this story of Barney's)."

I hesitated over the "only exceptions" in the final sentences but can't think of any counterexamples; meanwhile I agree with the first part except that I might use it for inanimate things but only in what I suppose is an attempt at anthropomorphic whimsy, which more or less fits.

I need my own personal subeditor to stop me sounding like L. Jagger on the grammar thread. (Is a comma insisted on after "however" only to distinguish it from its comma-less "in whatever way" meaning, or should one be demanded after "meanwhile" too?)

Yes.

this is hurting my BRANE.

this is feeding my brains

The original post in this thread was a brilliant troll.

okay: on vs upon
this thing should be at this or that level, depending upon the manufacturer's recommendation
or
this thing should be at this or that level, depending on the manufacturer's recommendation

Inherently a stylistic choice. The grammar is ok either way.

It would mean something entirely different were you to say "depending from manufacturer's nose".

would it

hm, okay, i think i will go with upon!