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well according to the dictionary that comes with macs (oxford concise iirc) wracked & racked are acceptable for the 'racked by pain' example. according to my american heritage, only 'racked' is acceptable in the first usage. 'wrack' specifically means the wreckage of a ship, or to be wrecked (intr.) or to wreck something (trans.)

retarded candle burning at both ends (dyao), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:36 (fourteen years ago) link

of course there's nothing stopping you from comparing your state of pain to being metaphorically similar to the wreckage of a ship! but I would go with 'racked by pain' to be safe

retarded candle burning at both ends (dyao), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:37 (fourteen years ago) link

wracked with pain, rather than by, i think? afaiac 'racked with pain' is wrong.

control (c sharp major), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:39 (fourteen years ago) link

merriam-webster seems to agree with american heritage in that they define 'wrack' as to be utterly ruined or wrecked, where as 'racked' means to cause intense suffering, anguish, pain, through torture, etc.

xp oxford concise says someone can be 'racked with guilt'

retarded candle burning at both ends (dyao), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:41 (fourteen years ago) link

i have the full oed at my fingertips here at work! so far... it is not backing me up.

control (c sharp major), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:42 (fourteen years ago) link

oh hi, usage note from the oxford concise:

The relationship between the forms rack and wrack is complicated. The most common noun sense of rack, ‘a framework for holding and storing things,’ is always spelled rack, never wrack. The figurative senses of the verb, deriving from the type of torture in which someone is stretched on a rack, can, however, be spelled either rack or wrack: thus, : racked with guilt or : wracked with guilt;: rack your brains or : wrack your brains. In addition, the phrase : rack and ruin can also be spelled : wrack and ruin .

on a further note, 'rack' seems to derive from an middle dutch word via middle english for 'framework', whereas 'wrack' seems to have derived from the middle dutch word 'wrak' which is related to shipwrecks, wrecking, wreaking, etc.

retarded candle burning at both ends (dyao), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:44 (fourteen years ago) link

so maybe choose based on whichever metaphor is appropriate - is the pain more similar to being racked on a torture rack? or is it more similar to being smashed by gale winds against sharp rocks at sea? :)

retarded candle burning at both ends (dyao), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:47 (fourteen years ago) link

rack, v.1
2. trans.
b. Usually of a disease: to cause extreme pain to (a person or a part of the body). Also occas. intr. of a person or part of the body: to be tormented by pain or disease.

c. To inflict mental pain or torture on (a person); to torment (the mind, soul, etc.). Now usu. in passive.

(and 'by' and 'with' seem interchangeable)

wrack, v.2
3. To cause the ruin, downfall, or subversion of (a person, etc.); to ruin, overthrow. Also refl.
b. To render useless by breaking, shattering, etc.; to injure or spoil severely; to destroy.

so... yeah, my instinct is totally wrong.

control (c sharp major), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:47 (fourteen years ago) link

Mine too! Damn.

salad dressing of doom (Laurel), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:54 (fourteen years ago) link

we had this on another thread lately iirc, caused by my correct usage.

i'm sticking by that version of events btw

May be half naked, but knows a good headline when he sees it (darraghmac), Wednesday, 19 May 2010 15:55 (fourteen years ago) link

two weeks pass...

"the family comprises of four members"!

"consists of" or "comprises," surely.

kind of shrill and very self-righteous (Dr Morbius), Friday, 4 June 2010 17:07 (fourteen years ago) link

You'd certainly have thought so, but who's to say in this pied times?

GamalielRatsey, Friday, 4 June 2010 17:09 (fourteen years ago) link

this these, Christ.

GamalielRatsey, Friday, 4 June 2010 17:10 (fourteen years ago) link

consists of/is comprised of

the soul of the avocado escapes as soon as you open it (Laurel), Friday, 4 June 2010 17:51 (fourteen years ago) link

Laurel, I like that use of "comprised," but according to Webster's, it's the newest/iffiest of all the standard uses -- some people still think you should just use "composed" in that instance

the "(whole) comprises (parts)" usage is first in Websters, and the "(parts) comprise (whole)" is second -- the latter is more comfortable to be, but I think they're equally standard

oɔsıqɐu (nabisco), Friday, 4 June 2010 18:01 (fourteen years ago) link

sorry, more comfortable to ME. and by "newest/iffiest" I mean it's been in use since the 18th century, but some people think it's kinda off

oɔsıqɐu (nabisco), Friday, 4 June 2010 18:01 (fourteen years ago) link

Fuck these 18th century Johnny-come-latelies

Haunted Clocks For Sale (Dorianlynskey), Friday, 4 June 2010 18:12 (fourteen years ago) link

"Comprises of" is probably the one term that makes my skin crawl the most. Ergo, it must be wrong, right?

Not the real Village People, Friday, 4 June 2010 18:15 (fourteen years ago) link

Yeah it's wrong. "Comprises" or "is comprised of" but never "comprises of".

Haunted Clocks For Sale (Dorianlynskey), Friday, 4 June 2010 18:26 (fourteen years ago) link

Yeah, even though it's in common usage, I would never use "is comprised of" in an official/work-related context.

IIRC, some old-timer wrote in to my college's alumni magazine a couple years ago to berate the staff for using "comprise" incorrectly.

jaymc, Friday, 4 June 2010 18:34 (fourteen years ago) link

i'm confused how "comprises" can equal "is comprised of" without switching the order of whole and parts. can it really?

harbl, Friday, 4 June 2010 20:09 (fourteen years ago) link

These are all correct:

Hispaniola comprises Haiti and the Dominican Republic.
Hispaniola is composed of Haiti and the Dominican Republic.
Haiti and the Dominican Republic compose Hispaniola.

This is wrong (or rather, the prevailing view is that this is wrong):

Hispaniola is comprised of Haiti and the Dominican Republic.

jaymc, Friday, 4 June 2010 20:17 (fourteen years ago) link

(Also traditionally wrong: Haiti and the Dominican Republic comprise Hispaniola.)

jaymc, Friday, 4 June 2010 20:19 (fourteen years ago) link

I wouldn't let "of" go anywhere near "comprise*"

Is there any way of reading "comprises" to mean "includes, but is not limited to..." or "contains"?
E.g. I would say "pancake batter consists of flour, milk and eggs" but could you say "pancake batter comprises flour and milk" leaving out the eggs? A co-worker once expressed surprise that their legal document made this distinction between the two words (er, not relatign to pancakes) but to me it sounded OK. I suppose context is key.

Not the real Village People, Friday, 4 June 2010 20:41 (fourteen years ago) link

From Webster's Third New International:

5 a: to consist of : be made up of [. . .] b: to make up : CONSTITUTE <the receipts comprised the fifth-larest gate in boxing history - John Lardner>. vi: to be made up : CONSIST - used with of <the funds of the association shall comprise of members' subscriptions - Education>

bamcquern, Saturday, 5 June 2010 02:17 (fourteen years ago) link

i think it's awesome that the last two posts on this thread have typos in them. my dietary consumption today was comprised of three vodka tonics.

sarahel, Saturday, 5 June 2010 09:19 (fourteen years ago) link

Help: got a mental block here. Do we say "for old time's sake" or "for old times' sake" or even "for old times's sake"? (i.e. is it for the sake of old time or for the sake of old times?)

I Ain't Committing Suicide For No Crab (Nasty, Brutish & Short), Thursday, 10 June 2010 20:25 (fourteen years ago) link

The latter, imo. For old times' sake.

the soul of the avocado escapes as soon as you open it (Laurel), Thursday, 10 June 2010 20:26 (fourteen years ago) link

^^^ I'm standing with Laurel here.

Aimless, Thursday, 10 June 2010 20:40 (fourteen years ago) link

thanks

I Ain't Committing Suicide For No Crab (Nasty, Brutish & Short), Thursday, 10 June 2010 20:44 (fourteen years ago) link

yeah but he also wrote one of his letters backwards

harbl, Friday, 11 June 2010 14:07 (thirteen years ago) link

It's pretty hard to imagine someone saying "for the sake of old time"

oɔsıqɐu (nabisco), Friday, 11 June 2010 14:46 (thirteen years ago) link

these are insane computer time's we live in

harbl, Friday, 11 June 2010 14:49 (thirteen years ago) link

It is even harder to imagine someone saying "For the sake of old time feat. Dr. Dre."

breaking that little dog's heart chakra (Abbott), Friday, 11 June 2010 14:53 (thirteen years ago) link

for the sake of old lang time?

gin bunny (c sharp major), Friday, 11 June 2010 14:56 (thirteen years ago) link

what a horribly formed joek

plax (ico), Friday, 11 June 2010 15:54 (thirteen years ago) link

Two that have been bugging me in '10:
"Kills germs by millions on contact"
"Purpose for your visit"

"Purpose of", or "reason for", yes; but "purpose for"??

Not the real Village People, Wednesday, 16 June 2010 17:20 (thirteen years ago) link

I think the best response to "purpose for your visit" would be "yes, are you offering?"

oɔsıqɐu (nabisco), Wednesday, 16 June 2010 22:50 (thirteen years ago) link

To which the best response would be stares.

bamcquern, Thursday, 17 June 2010 00:58 (thirteen years ago) link

Took me a long time to parse this sentence, on a small poster pinned to a local tree:

HUGE USED BABY AND CHILD CLOTHES AND ITEMS SALE

Not helped by a big picture of a baby. How could they have said this so it didn't lead me to wonder what the huge baby had been used for?

Also unknown as Zora (Surfing At Work), Thursday, 17 June 2010 14:13 (thirteen years ago) link

Baby clothes for sale- used. Huge.

Remember when Mr Banhart was a replicant? (darraghmac), Thursday, 17 June 2010 14:19 (thirteen years ago) link

cf. hoardings occasionally seen declaring GIANT SHIRT SALE.

sent from my neural lace (ledge), Thursday, 17 June 2010 14:23 (thirteen years ago) link

Huge sale of baby and child clothes and items - used.

Background Zombie (CharlieNo4), Thursday, 17 June 2010 14:42 (thirteen years ago) link

"Darling v Osborne: who do you trust?"

I know it really ought to be "whom", but it looks unnecessarily finnicky in a headline. Thoughts?

Background Zombie (CharlieNo4), Friday, 18 June 2010 13:58 (thirteen years ago) link

would 'which do you trust' be wrong?

gin bunny (c sharp major), Friday, 18 June 2010 14:06 (thirteen years ago) link

If you grant Darling and Osborne personhood, then which is wrong. If you don't, fill yer boots.

Also unknown as Zora (Surfing At Work), Friday, 18 June 2010 14:21 (thirteen years ago) link

Darling v Osborne: do you find one slightly less untrustworthy than the other?

Gohamist (zvookster), Friday, 18 June 2010 14:24 (thirteen years ago) link

Limited character count, people!

Background Zombie (CharlieNo4), Friday, 18 June 2010 14:26 (thirteen years ago) link

"Darling vs Osborne: Which?"

Remember when Mr Banhart was a replicant? (darraghmac), Friday, 18 June 2010 14:28 (thirteen years ago) link


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