ATTN: Copyeditors and Grammar Fiends

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... would be my personal answer and attitude

mark s, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:20 (eighteen years ago)

In other words, the bell hooks/k.d. lang problem. I've noticed that the New York Times ignores these idiosyncratic spellings and just goes with Bell Hooks and K.D. Lang (presumably to avoid this predicament), but in this Austin Chronicle article about the former, the writer starts sentences with "hooks" several times.

Knowing nothing about the subject, I'm curious: does capping the N in "n-3 fatty acids" mean something different?

jaymc, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:29 (eighteen years ago)

I just proof the damn stuff, but I don't think so.

Dr Morbius, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:39 (eighteen years ago)

The AMA manual, since stuff this specific, isn't indexed, is frequently no help at all.

Dr Morbius, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:43 (eighteen years ago)

haha i have subbed bell hooks -- she is just the WORST stylist, and throws tantrums when you try and suggest improvements

prob w.having caps and non-caps in formulae would be exactly that someone would read it and think "is this meant to mean something different?" -- ie it introduces confusion and doubt, hence avoid if possible

(i can think of plenty of mathematical contexts where it WOULD change the meaning)

mark s, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:44 (eighteen years ago)

It might confuse an uninformed reader to see a sentence like, "The next lecture in the series will feature bell hooks."

Hurting 2, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:46 (eighteen years ago)

Luckily, E.E. Cummings poses no such problems.

jaymc, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:55 (eighteen years ago)

i once had to stomp on a gallery who insisted for the catalogue we were producing that we put TWO spaces between the "The" and whatever their poncey name was -- i told em that the computers wouldn't let us, it automatically corrected and they would have to lump it (= a lie, obv)

they went out of business so the problem disappeared

mark s, Wednesday, 15 August 2007 16:59 (eighteen years ago)

"a pair of legal analysts say(s)"

Dr Morbius, Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:42 (eighteen years ago)

"says." The object is the pair-- ONE pair, therefore singular :)

Will M., Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:47 (eighteen years ago)

Or were you asking?

Will M., Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:48 (eighteen years ago)

My answer depends on what they're saying.

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:48 (eighteen years ago)

Well, in the strictest sense, it'd be "says." However, if these two legal analysts were saying it seperately, that wouldn't be conveyed with "says," so the sentence would need a rewrite to something like "Two legal analysts say..."

Will M., Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:49 (eighteen years ago)

I was asking, thx. (They're writing together, those analysts, which by AMA standards clinches "says.")

Dr Morbius, Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:51 (eighteen years ago)

xpost, exactly

Dr Morbius, Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:51 (eighteen years ago)

Yeah, that's sort of what I was getting at. Are they saying the exact same thing at the same time? (Of course, changing "a pair of" to "two" avoids this dilemma altogether.)

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:53 (eighteen years ago)

Is it bad that I'm more than a tiny bit proud that I answered that?

Will M., Thursday, 16 August 2007 17:54 (eighteen years ago)

Nope. I just sat through an hourlong "grammar review" at work this morning.

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:02 (eighteen years ago)

love reading this thread

deej, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:04 (eighteen years ago)

xpost

and you agreed to abolish hyphens in prenominal adjectives?

(ducks)

grimly fiendish, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:04 (eighteen years ago)

prenominal compound adjectives, natch.

grimly fiendish, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:05 (eighteen years ago)

Why would we do that?

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:38 (eighteen years ago)

"black cab driver" vs. "black-cab driver"

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:39 (eighteen years ago)

1/N, damnit

pear says
pears say

nabisco, Thursday, 16 August 2007 18:59 (eighteen years ago)

Black-cab? Is that a thing?

Will M., Thursday, 16 August 2007 19:05 (eighteen years ago)

It is in the UK.

http://www.ukstudentlife.com/Travel/Transport/Taxi/TaxiCab.jpg

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 19:10 (eighteen years ago)

Is it something you have to specify at any point? Like, are there yellow cabs and black cabs and one's worth more or less than the other, and you have to say to someone "Hey, I think he's a black-cab driver, let's ask him for a ride"?

Will M., Thursday, 16 August 2007 19:53 (eighteen years ago)

"Hey, you --- you black cab-driving jerk!" = comes off racist
"Hey, you --- you black cab--driving jerk!" = doesn't

nabisco, Thursday, 16 August 2007 19:56 (eighteen years ago)

Further confusion is added when you realise there are no* black black-cab drivers in London.

*or if there is I've yet to see one

onimo, Thursday, 16 August 2007 19:59 (eighteen years ago)

or if there are

onimo, Thursday, 16 August 2007 20:00 (eighteen years ago)

they'd be black-^2-cab drivers

nabisco, Thursday, 16 August 2007 20:03 (eighteen years ago)

Is it something you have to specify at any point?

Apparently.

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 20:11 (eighteen years ago)

er, yes: ie to differentiate between a dude who drives a minicab and a dude who drives a black cab.

grimly fiendish, Thursday, 16 August 2007 20:19 (eighteen years ago)

minicabs = unlicensed
black cabs = licensed, have to pass an exam where everything within a certain radius is

mark s, Thursday, 16 August 2007 21:27 (eighteen years ago)

not all black cabs are black these days

mark s, Thursday, 16 August 2007 21:27 (eighteen years ago)

pedant.

;)

grimly fiendish, Thursday, 16 August 2007 21:37 (eighteen years ago)

IT'S MY JOB

AND YOURS

AND MORBSES

LUCKY US

mark s, Thursday, 16 August 2007 21:42 (eighteen years ago)

praise be! w00t, etc.

actually, i got asked in the pub last night what subeditors actually did.

"everything".

grimly fiendish, Thursday, 16 August 2007 21:59 (eighteen years ago)

I'm glad I do "everything" in the US, since I'm not sure I like what the "sub-" prefix implies. Nor do I like your period outside the quotes, but we've been over that.

jaymc, Thursday, 16 August 2007 22:13 (eighteen years ago)

actually, no, you're right; shoulda been inside there.

as for the "sub" bit ... people infer all sorts of oddness. at the first (very small) place i was a staffer, i went from being a subeditor to being assistant editor.

"oh," said a relative. "so, you were ... umm, demoted?"

grimly fiendish, Thursday, 16 August 2007 22:31 (eighteen years ago)

Hi there. Few questions...

1. Is the word "quintessence" an absolute? I mean, is it alright to say "the most quintessential" for instance?

2. This is down to style really, but what do you prefer - If referring to oneself in, say a review, do you say I/We/You/One?

the next grozart, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 00:25 (eighteen years ago)

I've got a question:

long johns (the kind that keep you warm in winter)

Is this an Americanism?

Maria :D, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 01:48 (eighteen years ago)

maria: i don't think so, no. i'd call a pair of long johns a pair of long johns before anything else.

TNG: 1) i think it is. "most quintessential" just sounds tautological.

2) "I". i think all else looks like you once read somewhere that you shouldn't use the word "I" in a review, so you're feebly trying to avoid it ;)

grimly fiendish, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 10:31 (eighteen years ago)

You can't be a bit quintessential any more than you can be a bit unique or a bit pregnant: it's an absolute. It's also a cliche, but that's by the by.

Re: using first person in copy, I'm tacitly happy to use "I" in a review, but I'll pretty much always favour "we" in a feature.

CharlieNo4, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 10:40 (eighteen years ago)

Or a bit dead! The unique thing, man that drives me CRAZY.

Laurel, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 11:34 (eighteen years ago)

"Hey, you --- you black cab--driving jerk!"

Dear Efrim, this is the silliest name yet, but good work on the dash differentiation.

Thangyewverymuch, and apparently I won't be here all week, since it took me a week to reply to that and all.

(I love this thread! I'll stop ruining it now.)

a passing spacecadet, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 12:10 (eighteen years ago)

hahaha, the BBC News website is such shit. They do this kind of thing with a little too much frequency:

The 23-year-old is due to make her first public appearance since attending rehab at the award ceremony.

Rock Hardy, Tuesday, 4 September 2007 18:34 (eighteen years ago)

these data vs this data

Dr Morbius, Tuesday, 4 September 2007 21:40 (eighteen years ago)

Webster's says that both are standard. My inclination would be to go with "this data," since "these data" is starting to sound stuffy, but I suppose there's a place for the latter if it's actually in reference to multiple, discrete pieces of information.

jaymc, Tuesday, 4 September 2007 21:52 (eighteen years ago)

the AMA likes stuffy, it seems.

Dr Morbius, Tuesday, 4 September 2007 21:53 (eighteen years ago)


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