That is horrible, I just threw up all over my keybard, thanks a lot Barfship
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:03 (ten years ago) link
;-)
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:03 (ten years ago) link
man, I just looked up this ellen kennedy person's poetry, and one thing I can at least say for her is that her writing is worse than tao lin's
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:07 (ten years ago) link
yeah...
i don't like the knockoffs so much.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:09 (ten years ago) link
i read the first dozen entries or so and i did not like it at all
― ⚓ (elmo argonaut), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:10 (ten years ago) link
Treeship you need to learn about good links and how to link to them
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:10 (ten years ago) link
i think it's pretty entertaining. it's not as good as taipei.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:11 (ten years ago) link
It's horrible and you should be ashamed and broaded your horizons
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:11 (ten years ago) link
i should have broaded them, you're right
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:12 (ten years ago) link
what is the reward for reading it?
does it cause enjoyment?
does it delight you?
is there even a story there?
― ⚓ (elmo argonaut), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:13 (ten years ago) link
it just reads like something a friend and I would come up with in college while goofing off on gchat stoned, only we would have better sense than to go on for that long. And if you're going to say "that's the point," I'm going to tell you that "that's the point" is the exact justification we would have then used for printing the transcript of our stoned gchat conversation in the college alt weekly.
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:13 (ten years ago) link
(except I guess it would have been AIM, not gchat, because I am old)
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:14 (ten years ago) link
xp elmo, there's not really a story there.
i thought it was enjoyable. probably mostly because of its relationship to richard yates, which is a novel about the relationship between the two authors of this thing. i like how it seems sort of juvenile, like comics i would have made with my friends in middle school that involved surreal, non-sequitir humor.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:15 (ten years ago) link
idgi
― ⚓ (elmo argonaut), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:16 (ten years ago) link
i would have endorsed you publishing that thing to the local college alt weekly hurting. i wasn't the one holding you back. xp
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:16 (ten years ago) link
probably mostly because of its relationship to richard yates, which is a novel about the relationship between the two authors of this thing. i
Oh ok, so if we haven't read Richard Yates we won't "get" this crappy link you posted as well, cool, that's awesome.
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:19 (ten years ago) link
i guess so. i'm going to leave now so i can work on learning how to start forgiving myself for this.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:23 (ten years ago) link
the fiction of this embarrassingly immature and pointless sub-sub-segment of my generation really captures how immature and pointless that sub-sub-segment is
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:23 (ten years ago) link
every human life is technically "pointless"
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:24 (ten years ago) link
I would totally read a non fiction book written by/about hikikomori
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:24 (ten years ago) link
― Treeship, Monday, July 22, 2013 3:24 PM Bookmark Flag Post Permalink
http://yogsototh.github.io/Category-Theory-Presentation/categories/img/mindblown.gifhttp://mastersfilmreview.files.wordpress.com/2011/10/vertigo-2.jpg
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:27 (ten years ago) link
http://www.arthuralevinebooks.com/images/86.jpg
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:28 (ten years ago) link
lol
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:28 (ten years ago) link
The Depressed Ugly Fish by Franz Fafka
"a depressed ugly fish lives in pennsylvania in the wintertime. it is snowing outside. the nearest store is two miles away. the ugly fish leaves his room to go buy energy drinks. when he leaves his room he disappears into the snow. the snow is three feet deep. the ugly fish is two inches tall and five inches long. the ugly fish thinks, 'this is fucked.' his face freezes and then his body freezes. two days later the snow melts and a party girl teenager boy sees the ugly fish and runs to it and kicks it into the forest."
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:29 (ten years ago) link
http://static.guim.co.uk/sys-images/Football/Clubs/Club%20Home/2009/3/1/1235933046692/Albert-Camus-001.jpg
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:29 (ten years ago) link
don't mind being compared to camus. or oranges with terrifying faces.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:31 (ten years ago) link
― ⚓ (elmo argonaut), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:31 (ten years ago) link
Can't speak for Hurting but I don't think it's a favorable comparison
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:35 (ten years ago) link
oh shit. really?
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:36 (ten years ago) link
There's an apt Camus quote, in fact:
The realization that life is absurd cannot be an end, but only a beginning. This is a truth nearly all great minds have taken as their starting point. It is not this discovery that is interesting, but the consequences and rules of action drawn from it.
― undescended listicle (Hurting 2), Monday, 22 July 2013 19:37 (ten years ago) link
sounds like something he would say.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:42 (ten years ago) link
by linking to the hikikomori fiction thing i wasn't somehow at the same time saying that there is no point in having convictions anymore.
i do think demanding that discrete artworks or even movements have to have a "point" that you can state in definite terms is stultifying.
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:44 (ten years ago) link
I'm not saying those crappy pieces of fiction don't have a point
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:45 (ten years ago) link
what is the point of your conceptual art troll project on ilx?
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:45 (ten years ago) link
The point is they are pointless
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:46 (ten years ago) link
good point
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:46 (ten years ago) link
Searching for the point of something is an empty endevaor
sometimes
― Treeship, Monday, 22 July 2013 19:59 (ten years ago) link
holy fuck that orange
― one yankee sympathizer masquerading as a historian (difficult listening hour), Monday, 22 July 2013 20:07 (ten years ago) link
a promising young american author is TAO LIN
― reggie (qualmsley), Monday, 22 July 2013 20:17 (ten years ago) link
the most promising young orange in America, Tao Lin
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 20:27 (ten years ago) link
waterface:
http://images.angusrobertson.com.au/images/ar/97808166/9780816654598/0/0/plain/hikikomori-adolescence-without-end.jpg
― ogmor, Monday, 22 July 2013 21:52 (ten years ago) link
Sweet thanks
― waterface, Monday, 22 July 2013 21:56 (ten years ago) link
So I finished the last few pages of Taipei yesterday afternoon. And yeah, it is reminiscent of Ishiguro's The Unconsoled, at least in the obsessive intensity with which it burrows into a single self-absorbed state of mind. The focus doesn't budge. Right through to the end, it concerns little but Paul's thinking about Paul (and Paul's depression) and Paul's thinking about thinking about Paul (and Paul's depression). It's a grind.
Though I didn't enjoy it much - I'm honestly tempted to call it the single most aggressively unpleasant book I've ever read, even including nasty shit like Houellebecq - I can't deny that's an honest and insightful exploration of its subject. Lin's especially effective in using a limited third person narrative to communicate the things Paul himself can't see, such as his blindness to his own withering hostility and the almost terrifying depth of his unhappiness. He also deserves credit for managing to slowly build suspense within a seemingly plotless, even pointless narrative simply by modulating the level of his protagonist's oblivious agony. On a literary level, Paul's withdrawl into depersonalized alienation functions much like the drugs do in his life. It's a screen that increasingly distances us (him) from the story (events in his life). This strategy made me feel increasingly anxious as the story went on.
The problem, for me, is that Taipei's content doesn't justify the length, even allowing for the horrible, bad-trip intensity of its final pages. Like The Unconsoled, it's a kind of fractal: any one random chunk says exactly the same thing as any other (that depression feels bad and feels like exactly like this). Unlike The Unconsoled, there's nothing compelling about the nightmare it describes. Taipei's universe has been stripped of all but its dullest, weakest, most miserable details. The environment and characters are described only in general terms. No one ever says or does anything worth noting, they just drift in and out of view.
There are bright spots: clever turns of phrase, blackly comical asides, the beguilingly fried story of an acid-blazed, late-night trip to a Chinese McDonald's. But overall, they weren't enough for me. I respect Lin and his work but didn't like this book at all.
― IIIrd Datekeeper (contenderizer), Tuesday, 23 July 2013 15:03 (ten years ago) link
it concerns little but Paul's thinking about Paul (and Paul's depression) and Paul's thinking about thinking about Paul (and Paul's depression).
A little like a first-person version of DFW's The Depressed Person?
― Plasmon, Tuesday, 23 July 2013 16:47 (ten years ago) link
it's in third person, but yeah, that seems sort of accurate. although the depressed person is both much bleaker in my view and not as good. for one thing, the depressed person's depression is characterized by narcissistic self-loathing -- she is revolted by her appearance, and feels that nobody likes her -- whereas paul's depression, while it seems to have gone through that phase in high school, has settled into this mode of cosmic ambivalence, which is maybe more frightening (if easier to read about) because he is drifting further and further away from the concerns of ordinary people.
― Treeship, Tuesday, 23 July 2013 16:52 (ten years ago) link
i do think the humor in the book is successful in making it palatable. for me, it wasn't a chore to slog through. i don't think paul has lost himself as much as he thinks/fears he has.
― Treeship, Tuesday, 23 July 2013 16:54 (ten years ago) link
http://harpers.org/wp-content/uploads/HarpersMagazine-1998-01-0059425.pdf
― waterface, Tuesday, 23 July 2013 16:54 (ten years ago) link
^^Masterpiece
― waterface, Tuesday, 23 July 2013 16:55 (ten years ago) link